Piercer of the Heavens Posted June 7, 2011 Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 [img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/8520/37656o.jpg[/img] Lore:1 "Warrior-Type" tuner + 1 or more monsters If this card is destroyed while "Virtus, Fighter of Courage", "Fortunatus, Fighter of Happiness", "Diligo, Fighter of Love", or "Iustitia, Fighter of Justice" is on the Field Special Summon this card during the End Phase. [img]http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/3131/37656.jpg[/img] Lore: 1 "Warrior-Type" tuner + 1 or more monsters While "Iustitia,Fighter of Justice", "Mos, Fighter of Will", "Virtus, Fighter of Courage", or "Fortunatus, Fighter of Happiness" is on the field this card gains the following effect.-Once per turn you can select one other monster on the Field and gain life points equal to that monsters ATK points. [img]http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/7669/37656h.jpg[/img] Lore:1 "Warrior-Type" tuner + 1 or more monsters While "Iustitia,Fighter of Justice", "Mos, Fighter of Will", "Diligo, Fighter of Love", or "Fortunatus, Fighter of Happiness" is on the field this card gains the following effect.- When this card attacks this monster gains half the ATK of the attacked monster during the damage step. [img]http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/9080/37656d.jpg[/img] Lore:1 "Warrior-Type" tuner + 1 or more monsters While "Iustitia,Fighter of Justice", "Mos, Fighter of Will", "Diligo, Fighter of Love", or "Virtus, Fighter of Courage" is on the field this card gains the following effect.- When this card this card destroys an opponents monster by battle inflict damage to your opponent equal to half that monsters ATK and gain the same amount. [img]http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/5051/37656b.jpg[/img] Lore:1 "Warrior-Type" tuner + 1 or more monsters If you control "Mos, Fighter of Will", "Virtus, Fighter of Courage", "Fortunatus, Fighter of Happiness", or "Diligo, Fighter of Love" you can pay 2000 life points to special summon this card from your Extra Deck. While your life points are less than your opponents increase this cards ATK by 1500. [size="4"] Please rate and comment Also, I am making support cards for these synchros so they can be summoned easier.[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted June 7, 2011 Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 1) Pic + Name: Well, the repetition of Fighter means it's a set. So that's great. Only pic that fails is Fortunatus, being the only one without a weapon. 9/10. 2) Card Balance/Playability: They are all fairly balanced so you need know nothing more there. Playability issue: Only suitable in a Warrior Synchro Deck. This limits their usage, not all Warriors are based on healing. 9/10 3) Originality: The effects are the same, but the requirement is different...except this is also similar in the case of [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/The_Six_Samurai"]Six Samurai Set[/url]. 5/10. 4) OCG: In every case, you need to Caps the "l" and "p"in Life Points. Also, OCG Fix: Virtus While "Iustitia,Fighter of Justice", "Mos, Fighter of Will", "Diligo, Fighter of Love", or "Fortunatus, Fighter of Happiness" is on the field this card gains the following effect.- When this card attacks"," this monster gains half the ATK of the attacked monster during the damage step. It's small, but anyone can slip up on it. Make sure punctuation is fixed. 5/10 5) Card Maker Expertise: No Circulation or Set ID, -2. 8/10. You get... 7.2/10 Almost there, but good anyway. Well done, keep at it, don't give up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGreatMachine Posted June 7, 2011 Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 It seems odd to list every name in each effect so maybe name the set "(insert exciting word her)-Fighter" I don't know, but the effects in themselves are good. 9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 7, 2011 Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 Diligo is barely different than Draining Shield, and Draining Shield is still better than this Iustitia I don't think you need the 2000 LP pay, 1000 should be enough 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Piercer of the Heavens Posted June 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
u raging? Posted June 9, 2011 Report Share Posted June 9, 2011 5 +1 for good ocg +1 For good names+2 for Great pics +1 for effects 10/10 Im giving u 50 points for being a boss Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Piercer of the Heavens Posted June 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 Final Bump, unless I can come up with some support cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 There are no quotes around Warrior-Type And Tuner should be capital I'd also suggest changing "1 or more monster" to "1 or more non-Tuner monster" I'm not actually gonna read the cards though... just giving what I first saw: life points -> Life Points one -> 1 Field -> field I also don't think "ATK points" is proper OCG, it should probably be "ATK" and just "ATK" 1st is over powered 2nd seems fair 3rd seems fair but it should be "When this card declare's an attack is gains ATK equal to hald the ATK of the attack target until the End Phase" or something like that 4th seems a lil' OP'd and the OCG is way off, but not sure how to fic 5th seems a tad bit extreme for its Summoning Effect and condradicts the purpose of the 4th entirely... but its not really OP'd[quote name='u raging?' timestamp='1307578437' post='5268167'] 5 +1 for good ocg +1 For good names+2 for Great pics +1 for effects 10/10 Im giving u 50 points for being a boss [/quote] His OCG was way off the names are simple and bland Tge pics are good but over used the effects vary, but they are good overall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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