Piercer of the Heavens Posted July 13, 2011 Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 [s]So I randomly got the idea to have an archetype that revolves on organizing your graveyard. Such as putting a card in the bottom, top, middle etc. And then other cards which will recycle card in specific spots of your graveyard. For now all I have is this card. If any of you have pics that would fit this archetype please PM them because I can't find many.[/s] Like I said I may turn it into a set which I did. I changed it to memories because as you'll see the last two cards are different. Now rate/comment/etc. [img]http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/9080/37656d.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn: Discard 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard; Special Summon or Set the bottom card in your Graveyard to the field. If you cannot place the card on the field: Add the card to your hand. [img]http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/8481/37656p.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn: You can select one card in the top 5 cards in your graveyard and place it anywhere in your graveyard. [img]http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/5452/37656n.jpg[/img] Lore: If the 3rd card in your graveyard(starting from the bottom) is a monster, this card gains the effect of that monster. [img]http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/2509/37656l.jpg[/img] Lore: If the 2nd card in your graveyard(starting from the top) is a monster, this card gains ATK equal to the monster's ATK. [img]http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/2018/37656k.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn: If the fifth card in your graveyard(starting from the bottom) is a normal spell card, you can use its effect. [img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/6127/37656r.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn: If the fourth card in your graveyard (starting from the top) is a normal trap card, you can use its effect. This can be used during either players turn. [img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/2509/37656l.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn: You can select one card in the bottom 5 cards in your graveyard and place it anywhere in your graveyard. [img]http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/2018/37656k.jpg[/img] Lore: If you have 3 monster in your graveyard consecutively you can Special Summon this monster from you hand. Once per turn: You can select one card your graveyard and place it anywhere in your graveyard. [img]http://img803.imageshack.us/img803/3131/37656.jpg[/img] Lore: If you have 2 spells in your graveyard consecutively you can Special Summon this monster from you hand. Once per turn: If the top and bottom cards of your graveyard are monsters you can destroy one card on the field. [img]http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/2509/37656l.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn: You can select one card in your deck and place it anywhere in your graveyard. Then banish one card of the same type in your graveyard. [img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/9974/37656q.jpg[/img] Lore: Shuffle your and your opponents graveyard together and then randomly return card to your and your opponents graveyard until you both have the same amount of cards in your graveyard before being shuffled. [img]http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/5965/37656f.jpg[/img] Lore: Banish up to 3 cards in your graveyard. Destroy cards on the field equal to the number of banished cards. All cards destroyed by this effect are sen to your graveyard. [img]http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/1927/37656g.jpg[/img] Lore: Activate one of the following effects based on what type of card the 4 card in your graveyard(starting from the top) is. -Spell: Draw one card. -Trap: Select one monster on the field. It cannot declare an attack this turn. -Monster: Select monster you control. It cannot be destroyed by battle this turn. [img]http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/9974/37656q.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn: You can select the bottom card in your opponents graveyard. Add that card to the top of you graveyard. [img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/3131/37656.jpg[/img] Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned when you have 3 or more cards in your graveyard that belong to your opponent. You can add every card in your graveyard that belong to your opponent to the bottom of your opponents graveyard. Gain 100 life points x every card added to your opponents graveyard. [img]http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/4870/37656c.jpg[/img] Lore: If your opponent has 3 trap cards consecutively in their graveyard you can Special Summon this card. Once per turn: You can select one card in your opponents graveyard. Add it to the bottom of your graveyard and then add one card in your graveyard to the top of your opponents graveyard. [img]http://img846.imageshack.us/img846/7669/37656h.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn: You can select one card in the top 5 cards in your opponents graveyard and place it anywhere in your opponents graveyard. [img]http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/4360/37656x.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn: You can select one card in the bottom 5 cards in your opponents graveyard and place it anywhere in your opponents graveyard. [img]http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/3528/37656a.jpg[/img] Lore: If your opponent has 3 monster in their graveyard consecutively you can Special Summon this monster from you hand. Once per turn: You can select one card your opponents graveyard and place it anywhere in their graveyard. [img]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/1397/37656w.jpg[/img] Lore: If your opponent has 2 spells in their graveyard consecutively you can Special Summon this monster from you hand. Once per turn: If the top and bottom cards of your opponents graveyard are monsters you can destroy one card on the field. [img]http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/3131/37656.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned by having 2 consecutive trap and spell cards consecutively in your graveyard. Once per turn: You can add any number of cards from your graveyard to your opponents graveyard. Their graveyard is then shuffled. For every 2 cards added you can destroy one card on the field or discard one card from your opponents hand. [img]http://img607.imageshack.us/img607/5051/37656b.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned when your opponents has 3 or more cards in their graveyard that belong to you. You can add every card in your opponents graveyard that belong to you to the bottom of your graveyard. Gain 100 life points x every card added to your graveyard. 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BFG Studios Posted July 13, 2011 Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 it's effect is interesting. Targeting the grave is sometimes cool and some cards can pull it off, im not so sure about this card though, it might need some work. It has nice stats for Lv 7 Also, it's not "zombie", it's "Zombie"... mis-type there? OCG fix: [b]Once per turn: Discard 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard; Special Summon the bottom card in your Graveyard on the field. If you can't place the card on the field: Add the card to your hand.[/b] - The ":" and ";" are part of the new OCG - You don't need to say "in any position" because if it's a Spell or Trap, people know how and where to place it. If its a monster, and the effect doesn't say anything otherwise, they will place that monster any way they want... kind of like "Monster Reborn" - I added the last sentence/effect because i felt that if you have (for example) 5 Spell/Traps on the field and you get a Spell/Trap card... you should know where to place it... but getting 5 of 1 card isn't that easy, unless you're using a swarming deck. i think its an okay card... 7.75/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted July 13, 2011 Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 >Dark Hole >Pyramid Turtle, gets killed. >Summon this, Set Dark Hole. >???? >Profit! Not broken in the slightest. History repeats, they say. A Zombie reflecting memory agrees. I'm assuming you will be making a card that places a card in your Grave/wherever on the bottom of the Grave, myes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 13, 2011 Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 it's a strange yet simple effect I'm curious to know what kind of zombie monsters you plan to use via this........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Piercer of the Heavens Posted July 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 [quote name='BFG Studios' timestamp='1310540795' post='5350737'] it's effect is interesting. Targeting the grave is sometimes cool and some cards can pull it off, im not so sure about this card though, it might need some work. It has nice stats for Lv 7 Also, it's not "zombie", it's "Zombie"... mis-type there? OCG fix: [b]Once per turn: Discard 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard; Special Summon the bottom card in your Graveyard on the field. If you can't place the card on the field: Add the card to your hand.[/b] - The ":" and ";" are part of the new OCG - You don't need to say "in any position" because if it's a Spell or Trap, people know how and where to place it. If its a monster, and the effect doesn't say anything otherwise, they will place that monster any way they want... kind of like "Monster Reborn" - I added the last sentence/effect because i felt that if you have (for example) 5 Spell/Traps on the field and you get a Spell/Trap card... you should know where to place it... but getting 5 of 1 card isn't that easy, unless you're using a swarming deck. i think its an okay card... 7.75/10 [/quote] Thanks for the OCG, I switched it on the lore but added something "Special Summon/set" because I don't know how its possible to special summon a spell/trap so I made it so you set it. [quote name='BlindMonkey' timestamp='1310550989' post='5350849'] Not broken in the slightest. History repeats, they say. A Zombie reflecting memory agrees. I'm assuming you will be making a card that places a card in your Grave/wherever on the bottom of the Grave, myes? [/quote] I will be making more cards that organize your graveyard and other that benefit from certain cards in certain spot in your graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 13, 2011 Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 Seems interesting, you should make the set. Artwork: 8 - Seems cool, but a little herd to see. Balance: 7 - Maybe a little overpowered for a level 7 monster. Lore (Effect) : 9 - Interesting, should make a good set, OCG (Official Card Grammar): 10 - Doesn't have any errors. How it all Fits Together: 9 - The cad fits the image , and so does the effect. Card (The Average of the all Above): 8.6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Piercer of the Heavens Posted July 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 I changed the name because I had another idea that would work, but it would need to be changed to "Memories" instead of "Time" It's still revolves around the same thing it just like this I can make more unique cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 card is looking better... btw, you don't need to have "Lore:" in the actual description the ol' "z" still needs to be upper-cased in the word "Zombie" lol... i found an error in my OCG for you lol... and i'll fix 1 or 2 minor mistakes i also see [b]Once per turn: Discard 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard; [u]Special Summon or Set[/u] the bottom card in your Graveyard [u]to[/u] the field. If you [u]cannot[/u] place the card on the field: Add the card to your hand.[/b] I'm liking this simple idea a lot more... 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Piercer of the Heavens Posted July 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 [quote name='BFG Studios' timestamp='1310607386' post='5353066'] card is looking better... btw, you don't need to have "Lore:" in the actual description the ol' "z" still needs to be upper-cased in the word "Zombie" lol... i found an error in my OCG for you lol... and i'll fix 1 or 2 minor mistakes i also see [b]Once per turn: Discard 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard; [u]Special Summon or Set[/u] the bottom card in your Graveyard [u]to[/u] the field. If you [u]cannot[/u] place the card on the field: Add the card to your hand.[/b] I'm liking this simple idea a lot more... 8.5/10 [/quote] Didn't noticed I put lore in the effect. That was my bad. I fixed the eff and capitalized the Z. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Piercer of the Heavens Posted July 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 added a bunch of cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 These would make an interesting deck, lots of spelling mistakes though, and Eradico needs to be fixed cause you didn't finish his effect. I really like these cards. overall 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Piercer of the Heavens Posted July 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 [quote name='Shattered Sky' timestamp='1310625225' post='5353659'] These would make an interesting deck, lots of spelling mistakes though, and Eradico needs to be fixed cause you didn't finish his effect. I really like these cards. overall 8/10. [/quote] Thanks, sorry for the spelling mistakes, I made these in a hurry because I thought we were going somewhere, but we ended up going. I'll fix the spelling mistakes later, but for now time to sleep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 You should ad Synchros. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 and i thought the first card was good... lol but i'm liking the set, it's ... different and interestingly awesome some OCG errors, but they're minor, but on most of your cards, but they seem to be the same error... so it's like a "fix 1 and done!" thing... and do i see a possible fusion between "Bringer of the False Memories" and "Bringer of the Enlightened Memories"? lol, kidding, ... unless you we're planning that... o well... 8.5 / 10 for the whole set ... good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 For Bringer of False Memories it would be a shame if it's not a zombie type, but it works Lumen's effect is OPed though if you're going to send the card to the graveyard like that, give it a cost 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Piercer of the Heavens Posted July 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 Bump, I'll be adding some more cards later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Piercer of the Heavens Posted July 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2011 Added more cards, probably the last time im going to update this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TRUE RULER^(Imper.Di ) Posted July 16, 2011 Report Share Posted July 16, 2011 I love the picture of Mateus, the Corrrupt on Shifter of False memories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 16, 2011 Report Share Posted July 16, 2011 [quote name='Monkey Master' timestamp='1310846851' post='5360998'] Added more cards, probably the last time im going to update this. [/quote] which ones you added? Sorry that'll make it easier if you tell us rather than looking through the whole set Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Piercer of the Heavens Posted July 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1310858399' post='5361359'] which ones you added? Sorry that'll make it easier if you tell us rather than looking through the whole set [/quote] They are under all under Bringer of the Enlightened Memories. Its all False Memories and 1 Enlightened Memories. I may add some more spell/traps later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 Cleara is somewhat boring the LP gain is simply too small, Poison of the Old Man's effect works better 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Piercer of the Heavens Posted July 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 Bumpity-Bump-Bump Also if anybody has any pics that would fit spell/trap for this set can you PM them to me or give me a link. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Piercer of the Heavens Posted July 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2011 Final Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omi Glad Posted July 30, 2011 Report Share Posted July 30, 2011 By all things glorious i love this set. flaver: 8/10 Balance: 4/10 some cards are just ridiculous. Grammar: 5/10 grey area with specific spot targeting in the grave. viability: with all the zombie tech out there, very much so 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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