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Ok, so i have made a ritual spell card and a ritual monster, i think the effect of the monster is quite good and i spent a bit photoshoping these cards.


Mech Lord Orange the Mighty
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Tell me what you think and what OCG errors there are,

Rate out of 10 if you can ^_^

(Fixed OCG, grammar etc)
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I can't read them. Did you shrink them? Or is that just automatic?

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It's automatic, i don't know why the text goes so small when the card isn't.
I guess it will fix it'self if you refresh the page maybe?
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That is awsome! It should be a real card.

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It's automatic, i don't know why the text goes so small when the card isn't.
I guess it will fix it'self if you refresh the page maybe?


No...it's the same. I made out what I could of the card text. It is underpowered. Plus, there are many Grammar errors.

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I can read them Omega =/ Why doesn't the ritual card have the proper ritual effect? Bad OCG, still ok attempt. 4.5/10
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Thank you for the compliment Deathmankid =] Could you rate it out of 10?
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How come they are so small?
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Updated: Fixed OCG, take look now =]

ALso increased size of cards to make it easier to read the text, sorry about that :oops:
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good ideas, but they have bad OCG i give it 7/10
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Heart of the Duelist - http://forum.yugiohc...d.php?tid=31693
Light of the Darkness- http://forum.yugiohc...8433


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welcome Deathmankid!,great effort! 7/10 XD
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Thanks Devil Jin =] I will try and think of ways of inproving the OCG

Try and make the cards more wanted.

All comments apreciated =]
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Sorry to bump :oops:

But updated OCG

What do you all think about the graphics?
And any ideas on how to improve the OCG for these particular cards?

Thanks in advance
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ah the art on the card kinda looks to realistic and sucks a little bit other than that you got the effect down pact. good job 8/10.


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Thank you for the critisism =] I can make it look more cartoon like, i just thought that was the right belnd of colours and shades
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bad OCG.....7/10
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Tell me what's up with the OCG and i will fix it.

Critisism that HELPS is apreciated, any other sort isn't =]
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capitalize:
Summon in Ritual Summon, not in just summon, but like Normal Summon or Tribute Summon where you are specifying what type of summon..
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Graveyard

change subtype to machine or sumting-not that ugly Clockwork
ADD periods!!!AHHHHHH!!!!GRAMMAR NAZI ATTAX
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Ok thank you =] When i get home i will change the OCG to make it look more professional and maybe make the monster look more yugioh like!
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Hey guys, i have rewritten to OCG for each card.

hope this helps with the score!
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