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[Dark Rose]

Hey there guys, I have been in photoshop all day making these cards, so far I have 19 and have a few more ideas on the way, so this could possibly go over 30-40 cards. Please tell me what yout think. I only wrote out the effects that were hard to read, although, if you can't read an effect tell me and ill post it.

Monster Cards

This monster can not be Special Summoned from the Graveyard, when this monster is Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned you can select 1 "Angel" monster in your Graveyard and add it to your hand. When this card is sent to the Graveyard you can Banish it and draw 2 cards.


This monsters ATK is equal to the total number of "Angel" monsters in your Graveyard x400. This card can not be used as part of an Xyz Summon. Once per turn you can Tribute a face-up Xyz Monster with "Angel" in its name for this card to gain 2000 ATK until the End Phase of the turn this effect was activated.


This Card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Angels Awakening". Once per turn you can Tribute 1 face-up "Angel" monster you control to inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent. If this card destroys an opponents monster as a result of battle it gains 500 ATK and DEF.


2 Level 4 Monsters
This card can not be destroyed by Spell or Trap cards that do not target it. Once per turn you can release one of this cards Overlay Materials to select 1 monster on the field and half its ATK and DEF. If this card is destroyed by battle you can select 1 Normal Spell Card in your Graveyard and add it to your hand.


2 Level 3 Monsters
When this card is succesfully Xyz Summoned you can Tribute 1 face-up "Angel" monster (excluding this card) and Draw 2 cards. Once per turn you can Tribute one of the cards Overlay Materials to destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field.


(Ignore above effect)
Once per turn you can Tribute 2 face-up "Angel" monsters you control to select 1 monster in your Graveyard (excluding the tributed cards) and Special Summon it. The selected monster has its effect negated until your opponenets next End Phase. If this card is selected as an attack target you can Tribute 1 face-up monster you control to negate the attack.




(ignore above effect)
Angel of Regret + Angel of Meditation
This cards Attribute is also treated as WATER. When this card is Fusion Summoned using the required Fusion Material monsters you can select 1 face-up card on the field. That card can not be flipped, activated, change position, return to the owners hand or attack and has its effect negated until your next Standby Phase. When "Angel of Fusion" is face-up on the field this card can not be destroyed as a result of battle.

Spell Cards

Trap Cards

Other

Tell me what you think! I know there are some OCG errors but im a bit rusty lol, again, if you cant read an effect ill post it.

Thanks for looking!


NOTE: Images from DA and Father Wolf - Card Template from Judas

[Dark Rose]

Ub3r sad face, I was hoping for at least 1 reply :'[

Also, ignore the effects for the Xyz's, I never properly looked into the way your meant to word their effects lol.

[Veniet]

Wow, these are all mostly pretty good. Liilch's effect is somewhat promising, though not original. Overall, they're all an asset to eachother and most decks. Hmmm, "Angelic Binds" is probably a litle overpowered, but that is just my assumption, These are good cards, ceep them up.

[ragnarok1945]

for Angel of Nightmares, make it draw only ONE card. 2 is a bit too many

for Regret, if you're going to halve the stats, don't make that a permanent halving

[JordanPark24]

I've died and gone to heaven. I rarely every say this, but those cards just look downright beautiful! Especially Angel of Meditation and your Xyz cards. If I may ask, how did you get the card titles to look like that? Very professional :3

10/10

[Dark Rose]

Thanks for the comments guys, Ill get around to changing some effects soon. Also, @Jordan, I used a card template in tutorials section and the rest was photoshop magic

[QMMønkey]

Well I'm not going to review EVERY card, but I'll review the hole set so far.

Well I'm going have to change my rating system to this:

OCG: 00.0/10.0
Images: 00.0/10.0
Effects: 00.0/10.0
Originality: 00.0/10.0
===| |===
Total: 00.0/40.0

So here it is:

OCG: 10.0/10.0
Images: 8.7/10.0
Effects: 9.4/10.0
Originality: 7.0/10.0
===| |===
Total: 35.1/40.0

In the OCG I do not see anything wrong, it's like you work at Konami on it. The images are good for most of the cards some of them I think it's just how they're holo'd. The effects are very good, but a bit common with real cards, but still very good. Angels and demons set are kinda common, of course I haven't been on YCM for months. But it is not everyday, or everyweek.

Overall, it's a nice set, and I'd like to see more of it. Keep on working on it.

[ragnarok1945]

Thanks for the comments guys, Ill get around to changing some effects soon. Also, @Jordan, I used a card template in tutorials section and the rest was photoshop magic

will you have more to put up here soon Dark Rose?

[Dark Rose]

Thanks for the comments guys, and I added 5 new cards; 3 Monsters, 1 Spell and 1 Trap.

Please take a look and tell me what yout think.

[Marco Polo]

Great cards, 9/10

[Dark Rose]

Thnaks for the comment!

[ragnarok1945]

for Grave: negating the effect is fine, but I recommend you don't make it PERMANENTLY negated

for Fusion Angel Aquias, "When this card is Fusion Summoned using the required Fusion Material monsters you can select 1 face-up card on the field. That card can not be flipped, activated, change position, return to the owners hand or attack and has its effect negated"

<---that effect I recommend you say it only lasts for 1 turn. Then next turn, you can select a different monster and repeat the process

[Dark Rose]

Thanks for that, im going to do something similar to that.

Thanks for the feedback!

[ragnarok1945]

oh Dark Rose, I have a suggestion for you

when you update this set again, could you please put a "NEW" next to the cards you added?

it'll make it easy for us to find

[Dark Rose]

Yes I will, but normally they would be located at the bottom of the lists. But I will in future, Thanks.