Sweetie Belle Posted September 20, 2011 Report Share Posted September 20, 2011 [center][center] Bold text = Changes/Additions [img]http://i56.tinypic.com/5btzj7.png[/img] 2 Rank 3 Xyz Monsters Any Xyz Materials attached to the cards used for this card's Xyz Summon are banished. Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card:[b] destroy 1 card on the field. If it was a face-up monster: Inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the ATK of the destroyed monster.[/b] When this card has no Xyz Materials: Special Summon 1 non-Rank 3 Xyz Monster from your Graveyard and attach this card to it as an Xyz Material [b]or destroy this card[/b]. [img]http://i54.tinypic.com/64ld9k.png[/img] 2 Rank 1 Xyz Monsters .....I think it's pretty visible and legible. [IMG]http://i1105.photobucket.com/albums/h353/WinterKirby/Alpha%20Numbers/C-ShiningMoth.png[/IMG] 2 Rank 5 Xyz Monsters Any Xyz Materials attached to the cards used for this card's Xyz Summon are banished. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; banish 1 Level 4 or lower monster your opponent controls. When a Trap Card is activated while this card has no Xyz Materials: negate the activation of that Trap Card and return it to the owner's hand. Then, send this card to the Graveyard. [IMG]http://i1105.photobucket.com/albums/h353/WinterKirby/Alpha%20Numbers/D-TranslucentMaterial.png[/IMG] 2 Rank 2 Xyz Monsters Any Xyz Materials attached to the cards used for this card's Xyz Summon are banished. While this card has Xyz Materials: This card is not affected by the effects of Spell/Trap cards during the Battle Phase. When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard: detach 1 Xyz Material from this card. [IMG]http://i1105.photobucket.com/albums/h353/WinterKirby/Alpha%20Numbers/E-TyrantBeastKing.png[/IMG] 3 Rank 4 EARTH Xyz monsters Any Xyz Materials attached to the cards used for this card's Xyz Summon are banished. This card cannot be selected as an attack target. You can detach 3 Xyz Materials from this card; destroy all other cards on the field. Then, your opponent draws 2 cards. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase during the turn you activate this effect. During each of your Standby Phases, while this card has no Xyz Materials: pay 1000 Life Points or destroy this card. [IMG]http://i1105.photobucket.com/albums/h353/WinterKirby/Alpha%20Numbers/F-IronstoneDefender.png[/IMG] 2 or more Rank 2 Xyz Monsters Any Xyz Materials attached to the cards used for this card's Xyz Summon are banished. While this card has Xyz Materials: All monsters your opponent controls must attack, if able. Any Battle Damage your opponent takes from battles involving this card is treated as Effect Damage instead. During each of your opponent's End Phases: detach 1 Xyz Material from this card. During your Standby Phase, if this card has no Xyz Materials: Send this card to the Graveyard. [IMG]http://i1105.photobucket.com/albums/h353/WinterKirby/Alpha%20Numbers/G-DepthCharger.png[/IMG] 2 Rank 3 Xyz Monsters Any Xyz Materials attached to the cards used for this card's Xyz Summon are banished. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to Special Summon 1 of your banished monsters. Until the End Phase, it cannot declare an attack or be Tributed, and it cannot be used as a Synchro Material monster. This card cannot declare an attack while it has no Xyz Materials. [IMG]http://i1105.photobucket.com/albums/h353/WinterKirby/Alpha%20Numbers/H-HighPressure.png[/IMG] Any Xyz Materials attached to the cards used for this card's Xyz Summon are banished. The original ATK of this card is the number of cards on the field x400. This card gains 500 ATK for each Xyz Material attached to it. You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to destroy 1 card on the field. While this card has no Xyz Materials: You cannot Set card(s) [b]on the field[/b]. [IMG]http://i1105.photobucket.com/albums/h353/WinterKirby/Alpha%20Numbers/I-FireVirus.png[/IMG] 2 Rank 4 Xyz Monsters with 2000 or more ATK Any Xyz Materials attached to the cards used for this card's Xyz Summon are banished. When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard: you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to look at your opponent's hand and discard 1 monster with equal or lower ATK than the destroyed monster. If this card battles with no Xyz Materials: destroy this card [b]at the start of the Damage Step (before damage calculation)[/b] and end the Battle Phase. [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinSeed Posted September 20, 2011 Report Share Posted September 20, 2011 I actually really like this idea, though the OCG seems off. "Once per turn: you can detach 1 Xyz [s]Material[/s] [b]Monster[/b] from this card: inflict..." "When this card has no Xyz [s]Materials[/s] [b]Monsters[/b]: Special Summon..." Because you banished the original Materials, so it'd get confusing the see that in the effect again. Love the picture, but way too over-powered. Either raise the Rank to about 5 or drastically lower the attack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackel The Mad Posted September 20, 2011 Report Share Posted September 20, 2011 good card looks balanced 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweetie Belle Posted September 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2011 Alpha B added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted September 21, 2011 Report Share Posted September 21, 2011 To me, they both look rather underpowered. They overall aren't just worth the effort of summoning. I'd first change Crystalfire's burn to a "destroy 1 card on the field". That'll make him worth. Falcon is just...well, since all Rank 1s require 3 materials, I would never use him. Its effects are terrible, its stats are terrible...I'd rather keep my 2 Galaxy Queens, thank you. Hell, even if it had the same conditions as Galaxy Queen, I wouldn't run him. As a fix, I'd raise its ATK to something like 3500 just for the hella fun of it, or change the effect entirely to something I can use. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NumberCruncher Posted September 21, 2011 Report Share Posted September 21, 2011 Falcon needs revision. First, make it Rk 2 so we don't have to deal with the high cost of Rk 1s. Second, Effect needs to be followed with "This effect can be used during either player's turn." Third, ATK must be 2200 at least. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweetie Belle Posted October 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2011 Added C-I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted October 13, 2011 Report Share Posted October 13, 2011 haha, cool. 8/10. Except [quote name='Darkplant - PAIN' timestamp='1316585832' post='5530414'] To me, they both look rather underpowered. They overall aren't just worth the effort of summoning. I'd first change Crystalfire's burn to a "destroy 1 card on the field". That'll make him worth. Falcon is just...well, since all Rank 1s require 3 materials, I would never use him. Its effects are terrible, its stats are terrible...I'd rather keep my 2 Galaxy Queens, thank you. Hell, even if it had the same conditions as Galaxy Queen, I wouldn't run him. As a fix, I'd raise its ATK to something like 3500 just for the hella fun of it, or change the effect entirely to something I can use. [/quote] Do this. Then the ranking will increase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BatMed Posted May 7, 2013 Report Share Posted May 7, 2013 I really Like these card,, they seem pretty and belanced :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted May 7, 2013 Report Share Posted May 7, 2013 Necrobump, lock Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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