It's a poorly written mystery/detective story.
Notes:
1- Since it's a poorly written detective story written for and primarily aimed at stupid 12 year olds, if you figure out all the plot twists beforehand please try your best to put speculations in spoiler tags.
2- There is very little back story to this, and if there was any back story it would be boring or irrelevant. (Stuff like how Cathy and Luke met would be boring. Stuff like what drove Cathy to be a spectral detective is irrelevant.) All chapters start at pretty much the beginning of a case, or right before the beginning of a case.
3- Story is mostly done, or at the very least planned together heavily so don't be insulted if you say something brilliant in a comment and the idea or suggestion isn't/wasn't used.
4- As implied by the chapter titles, a lot of time passes between chapters. Catherine and Luke do not live in a vacuum, and their lives do move forward when the spotlight is not on them. They do have cases, and they do meet people, and they do grow closer during this unseen time, however it is not-related towards the primary focus of 'Cleansed - The Spectral Detectives' so it is omitted. They do make references to it from time to time.
TM - 145W46: Monday, December 28th, 1964
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Ashes to Ashes
Plagued by poltergeists?! Agitated by apparitions?! Spooked by spirits?!
Is your home or office haunted by the ghosts of the dearly departed? Unexplainable phenomenon, sudden chills, objects moving, soft murmurings, or horrifying nightmarish visions? Abandoning your home and starting anew is expensive. What you need to do is give Catherine Gibbs a call at 212-867-5309. That's Catherine Gibbs, New York City's first and only certified Spectral Detective!
"I promise to bring you, and your loved ones, the peace of mind, body, and soul you all so desperately deserve."
---
The site of our next case was a quiet, quaint little church. It was a sharp contrast from the bright lights and the hustle and bustle of Times Square, which made it all the more surprising it was a mere two blocks away. From where I stood, I could still see the bright lights, and even managed to spot the pharmaceutical company my partner and his family owned, Infinite Solutions.
We entered the church at the agreed upon time, 5PM. Despite the dim candlelight of the church, it was still brighter than the cold, late December night skies outside. Upon our arrival, we were greeted by a rather charming young maiden. She wore an all black robe, with a simple crucifix hanging from her neck. Her hair remained hidden under a nun's habit. She had an air of maturity that her young face betrayed. If I had to venture a guess, I'd say she was most likely about 19 years old, the same age as my partner's younger sister, Lauren.
I took a step forward, presenting a gloved leather hand. Realizing how rude it was, I quickly removing my right glove and placed it into my pocket. I smiled nervously as I presented my hand. "Catherine Gibbs." It was our first 'official' case as a team, and I wanted to make the perfect first impression.
She took my hand weakly, a timid smile on her pale face. Her handshake was like a fish: limp, cold and clammy. "Sister Marie Johanson," she stated weakly.
A casual smirk spread itself upon my associate's face. "Name’s Lucas Prescott. Call me Luke." He bowed and kissed the young woman's hand, causing her already pale visage to whiten more so. I stepped in, preventing any further show of affection.
"We're not here to make friends, Luke," I began. He sheepishly looked away, no doubt sensing from my tone of voice that I was serious.
A sigh from my partner. "Right right. We're here to catch ghosts." A notable lack of enthusiasm in his voice.
“We're here to help ghosts, not catch them. Help them settle unfinished business, and move on to the world after this one."
Despite my words, I could tell from the palor of Sister Johanson's face that she remained cautious and unsure about our qualifications. "Don't mind him." I spoke with[ a gentle and reassuring smile, or at least that's what I hoped for. "He's new to the whole 'Spectral Detective' business. Right, Luke?"
Luke gave me a look, "Whatever," before turning his attention to admiring the items laid about near the altar. He picked up a Bible, casually peering through it while flipping to random pages. "The lady doesn't need to know how long I've been doing this. Can we just get things moving along?"
I returned my attention to our client as I unbuckled my long coat. It was warmer in the church than I had anticipated.
"The reason human sentiments linger on in this world is due to past regrets. We help ghosts discover and get over the things that they regret, their 'unfinished business,' so to speak. However, it's rarely ever as simple as that. His sister-" I motioned towards Luke. "-didn't tell us much before we came. She only told us that this church of hers desperately needed our help. Can you tell us anything more?"
Sister Johanson nodded weakly before speaking. "On Christmas morning, the priest of our church, Father McCrimmon was hit by a bus... and... and...." She looked pained, on the verge of tears, but I tried to appear sympathetic offering a gentle nod and a reassuring smile when needed. After all, if she broke down we'd have no lead on this case. "Ever since that day, the visitors of the church claimed to have heard his voice and seen... seen a figure - a ghost. The robes, the bald head, the wispy beard. They claim his spirit still haunts our church but I am... not so sure."
“Not sure?” Luke began, taking his eyes off whatever random thing he was looking through in the Bible. "How come?"
She turned away from Luke before speaking to me. “He was loyal to the church. He preached every Sunday, performed the Sacrament of Penance every day." I gave her a bit of a confused look, not a particularly religious person. She seemed to pick up on my confusion and elaborated. "The confessions. He ran the confessions. He also conducted the choir every evening, and gave the homeless a hearth every night. Even in his old age, he seemed full of life. If... if there was one word I would use to describe him... it certainly wouldn't be 'regretful,' certainly not someone who had any unfinished business."
I produced a notepad and pencil from my coat pocket. Needing a firmer grip on my pencil, I quickly removed the last remaining glove and quickly jotted down what I had heard. Then I asked, "Was there anything unusual about him days or even weeks before his death?"
The nun scratched her cheek as she spoke. "Come to think of it...." The words were drawn out, as though she had given them an intense amount of thought. "The day before his death, he seemed unusually nervous after a confession."
I raised a brow. Out of the corner of my eye I watched as Luke looked up from the Bible he was not-reading. "That sounds like a promising lead."
"He probably heard something unsettling. Like a murder or something."
"Our best bet to move forward would be to summon the ghost of Father McCrimmon himself, and question the motives behind his haunting," I stated bluntly.
A curious yet skeptical look appeared on the nun's face. "Uhh... how exactly does one communicate with ghosts? Is there something I can help with, perhaps by lighting a candle or saying a prayer or-"
"His ghost haunts the church, correct? Ghosts are still people too, after all. Perhaps they're no longer living, or their senses may not be as sharp as ever, but their consciousness remains. To gather a ghost's consciousness for a brief moment and summon it into a more recognizable form, all you need to do is state its name and a request that you wish to speak to it."
"It'd be easier to just do it then to explain." Luke insisted, closing the Bible and preparing.
We pointed dramatically at the pulpit of the church at the end of the pews.
"Father Timothy McCrimmon! We humbly request an audience!"
Is your home or office haunted by the ghosts of the dearly departed? Unexplainable phenomenon, sudden chills, objects moving, soft murmurings, or horrifying nightmarish visions? Abandoning your home and starting anew is expensive. What you need to do is give Catherine Gibbs a call at 212-867-5309. That's Catherine Gibbs, New York City's first and only certified Spectral Detective!
"I promise to bring you, and your loved ones, the peace of mind, body, and soul you all so desperately deserve."
---
The site of our next case was a quiet, quaint little church. It was a sharp contrast from the bright lights and the hustle and bustle of Times Square, which made it all the more surprising it was a mere two blocks away. From where I stood, I could still see the bright lights, and even managed to spot the pharmaceutical company my partner and his family owned, Infinite Solutions.
We entered the church at the agreed upon time, 5PM. Despite the dim candlelight of the church, it was still brighter than the cold, late December night skies outside. Upon our arrival, we were greeted by a rather charming young maiden. She wore an all black robe, with a simple crucifix hanging from her neck. Her hair remained hidden under a nun's habit. She had an air of maturity that her young face betrayed. If I had to venture a guess, I'd say she was most likely about 19 years old, the same age as my partner's younger sister, Lauren.
I took a step forward, presenting a gloved leather hand. Realizing how rude it was, I quickly removing my right glove and placed it into my pocket. I smiled nervously as I presented my hand. "Catherine Gibbs." It was our first 'official' case as a team, and I wanted to make the perfect first impression.
She took my hand weakly, a timid smile on her pale face. Her handshake was like a fish: limp, cold and clammy. "Sister Marie Johanson," she stated weakly.
A casual smirk spread itself upon my associate's face. "Name’s Lucas Prescott. Call me Luke." He bowed and kissed the young woman's hand, causing her already pale visage to whiten more so. I stepped in, preventing any further show of affection.
"We're not here to make friends, Luke," I began. He sheepishly looked away, no doubt sensing from my tone of voice that I was serious.
A sigh from my partner. "Right right. We're here to catch ghosts." A notable lack of enthusiasm in his voice.
“We're here to help ghosts, not catch them. Help them settle unfinished business, and move on to the world after this one."
Despite my words, I could tell from the palor of Sister Johanson's face that she remained cautious and unsure about our qualifications. "Don't mind him." I spoke with[ a gentle and reassuring smile, or at least that's what I hoped for. "He's new to the whole 'Spectral Detective' business. Right, Luke?"
Luke gave me a look, "Whatever," before turning his attention to admiring the items laid about near the altar. He picked up a Bible, casually peering through it while flipping to random pages. "The lady doesn't need to know how long I've been doing this. Can we just get things moving along?"
I returned my attention to our client as I unbuckled my long coat. It was warmer in the church than I had anticipated.
"The reason human sentiments linger on in this world is due to past regrets. We help ghosts discover and get over the things that they regret, their 'unfinished business,' so to speak. However, it's rarely ever as simple as that. His sister-" I motioned towards Luke. "-didn't tell us much before we came. She only told us that this church of hers desperately needed our help. Can you tell us anything more?"
Sister Johanson nodded weakly before speaking. "On Christmas morning, the priest of our church, Father McCrimmon was hit by a bus... and... and...." She looked pained, on the verge of tears, but I tried to appear sympathetic offering a gentle nod and a reassuring smile when needed. After all, if she broke down we'd have no lead on this case. "Ever since that day, the visitors of the church claimed to have heard his voice and seen... seen a figure - a ghost. The robes, the bald head, the wispy beard. They claim his spirit still haunts our church but I am... not so sure."
“Not sure?” Luke began, taking his eyes off whatever random thing he was looking through in the Bible. "How come?"
She turned away from Luke before speaking to me. “He was loyal to the church. He preached every Sunday, performed the Sacrament of Penance every day." I gave her a bit of a confused look, not a particularly religious person. She seemed to pick up on my confusion and elaborated. "The confessions. He ran the confessions. He also conducted the choir every evening, and gave the homeless a hearth every night. Even in his old age, he seemed full of life. If... if there was one word I would use to describe him... it certainly wouldn't be 'regretful,' certainly not someone who had any unfinished business."
I produced a notepad and pencil from my coat pocket. Needing a firmer grip on my pencil, I quickly removed the last remaining glove and quickly jotted down what I had heard. Then I asked, "Was there anything unusual about him days or even weeks before his death?"
The nun scratched her cheek as she spoke. "Come to think of it...." The words were drawn out, as though she had given them an intense amount of thought. "The day before his death, he seemed unusually nervous after a confession."
I raised a brow. Out of the corner of my eye I watched as Luke looked up from the Bible he was not-reading. "That sounds like a promising lead."
"He probably heard something unsettling. Like a murder or something."
"Our best bet to move forward would be to summon the ghost of Father McCrimmon himself, and question the motives behind his haunting," I stated bluntly.
A curious yet skeptical look appeared on the nun's face. "Uhh... how exactly does one communicate with ghosts? Is there something I can help with, perhaps by lighting a candle or saying a prayer or-"
"His ghost haunts the church, correct? Ghosts are still people too, after all. Perhaps they're no longer living, or their senses may not be as sharp as ever, but their consciousness remains. To gather a ghost's consciousness for a brief moment and summon it into a more recognizable form, all you need to do is state its name and a request that you wish to speak to it."
"It'd be easier to just do it then to explain." Luke insisted, closing the Bible and preparing.
We pointed dramatically at the pulpit of the church at the end of the pews.
"Father Timothy McCrimmon! We humbly request an audience!"
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Dust to Dust
Sister Johanson raised a skeptical eyebrow at us after our rather flashy display. But before she could question our methods further, a cold air flooded the church. It was as though someone had suddenly blasted the doors open. I quickly turned to make sure they were indeed closed before turning back to the head of the church. The wind picked up as the candles laid about the church were blown out. I began to button up my trench coat, and looked ahead at the pulpit. Near the altar, I saw the vision of a figure. He was transparent, as though he nothing more then a flickering projection. The figure stood at the other side of the pews and most of his features seemed distorted. From the look on Sister Marie's face, it was evident she recognized him.
"F-Father McCrimmon!" she shouted in surprise, holding a hand over her mouth.
"Timothy McCrimmon!" My partner said accusingly. "Why are you still hanging around in the world of the living?"
I blinked, pushing slightly past him. "Father Timothy McCrimmon. You were a loyal man of the cloth, working to serve the community and help people at their darkest hour. If you're worried about how the church will handle itself without you, I ask you to cast aside your doubt! Sister Marie Johanson is more then capable of-"
As I spoke, I turned my attention to her, cowering in fear behind a pew. My palm quickly rushed to meet my face in exasperation (I just don't find facepalming to be a natural reaction to anything. Maybe it's just me.). "Sister Johanson?! Just what do you think you are doing?"
The ghostly specter at last spoke, rather quiet and slightly distorted. "I am not... do not... not ready..."A pained sound to his voice He said in a pained voice, as though it took the greatest of effort and concentration to admit this. I wouldn't doubt it did.
Sister Marie took a step forward, finding some courage, and spoke. "F-Father McCrimmon, you lived a long and fulfilling life. Though your passing 3 days ago was quite tragic, you shouldn't feel the need to stay in this world on my behalf."
"N-not your... my own... regrets..."
It seemed I was mistaken. He wasn't here for Marie's sake, but rather his own misgivings. "Well then Father McCrimmon, why do you continue to linger to this world?"
"Something... I must say... but I can not."
I was unsureof what it is he meant, before remembering Sister Johansen's word. He was alarmed after a confession. Though I myself wasn't particularly fond of organized religion, I knew enough to know the words heard at a confession were not to be repeated. I questioned. "Something you heard during a confession?" What looked like a faint nod from our stranger merely verified my guess.
The situation was rather paradoxical. It appeared his unfinished business was to tell us something but, by the rules of his own religion, he was forbidden from letting us know.
"If only he could give us a hint..." Luke began.
That was it. I snapped my fingersat Luke's response. "Brilliant, Luke."
"Brilliant? Me?" A smirk appeared upon his face as he adjusted his tie. "Well, glad you finally started to notice."
"Father McCrimmon! Your unfinished business was that you could not tell anyone what you heard in a confession, correct? As you can not tell us what it was directly, how about you leave us a sign, a hint? You're spirit should find comfort in at least that much, and you can guide us along the way if we're getting close."
The priest gave a pained look before speaking. "Hebrew... twelve... twenty... nine."
I scribbled the phrase down onto my notepad. "Hebrew 12:29." Not so familiar with the Bible, I turned towards our resident expert, Sister Johanson. "What's that one about?"
Sister Johanson looked rather perplexed. "It's.. not a very common passage. I'd have to look it up-"
"Already on it," Luke replied. I saw him flip through the pages sporadically before slowing his pace and then turning them one by one. It seemed he found the passage. Unfortunately, his face seemed not to help much. "For our God is a consuming fire."
There was abit of a silence among the church, as the three of us seemed to think it over, with McCrimmon overseeing our proceedings. Finally, Luke broke the silence. "I don't get it."
"Well... now..." I elongated my words, hoping they would buy me time but alas when I finished my sentence I didn't think of anything.
"I'm afraid I don't understand either Misses Gibbs."
"Miss." I corrected. "And... I gotta admit I'm a bit stumped myself. Maybe it was some kind of warning?"
"A warning? Like... something was gonna catch on fire?" Luke put the Bible down and looked up towards McCrimmon. He responded with the faintest of nods, confirming Luke's suspicions.
"Maybe the previous line or the line afterward would give us a hint?" Sister Johanson declared optimistically.
"Doubtful." I began. "If he wanted to include the previous lines he'd have mentioned them too, wouldn't he?"
"Besides, there are no other lines after the bit with the 'consuming fire'."
A disappointed look spread itself on Sister Johanson's face.
"Maybe..." Luke started. "Maybe there was a double meaning here. Maybe he meant 12:29 like... a date or something?"
"December 29th?" I scratched my cheek. "That would be... tomorrow."
"So... something will be on fire tomorrow? Do you think maybe that's what his confession was about? An arsonist?"
It seemed at Sister Johansen's last words, the faintest of smiles finally spread on the old man's face. After we finally reached the conclusion he had been guiding us towards, a bright light emanated from the ghost of the priest. His details were more outlined then they ever were before. And at last, a few final words for Sister Johansen "Thank... you," before he faded away into nothingness. The rush of cold air dissipated, and the flickering candles once again re-lit themselves.
"Marie, do you at least remember what the guy looked like?" I thought it quite rude of Luke to address the nun by her first name but she seemed to think little of it, as she responded.
"Actually, when he walked in, I had a feeling I had seen him somewhere before." She scratched her head uneasily. "I just... can't quite put my finger on where. I'm sure if I saw him again,I'm sure I would be able to identify him."
"Well, in any case, it seems you must get into contact with police, and soon ma'am." I began. "You know more about this future arsonist then either Luke or myself."
She however remained unsure. "In any case, at least we helped Father McCrimmon solve his unfinished business."
Luke nodded in agreement before adjusting his hat. It was only at that moment that I noticed he was still wearing one indoors. I scowled as I looked him over. "Don't worry about it Marie." Luke said, slinking his arm around the off-put nun. He walked her over to door, pushing it open. "I know plenty of people from the police. I'll make sure they-"
He stopped, mid-sentence. Unusual for the typically chatty Luke to be so quiet. I turned to look. "Something the matter?"
A building, a block or so away on Times Square was up in flames. The billowing smoke took up the entire skyline. My eyes widened as I struggled to remember where I had seen that building before. The approaching siren of a fire truck broke me from my trance.
"Infinite Solutions?"
Sister Johanson raised a skeptical eyebrow at us after our rather flashy display. But before she could question our methods further, a cold air flooded the church. It was as though someone had suddenly blasted the doors open. I quickly turned to make sure they were indeed closed before turning back to the head of the church. The wind picked up as the candles laid about the church were blown out. I began to button up my trench coat, and looked ahead at the pulpit. Near the altar, I saw the vision of a figure. He was transparent, as though he nothing more then a flickering projection. The figure stood at the other side of the pews and most of his features seemed distorted. From the look on Sister Marie's face, it was evident she recognized him.
"F-Father McCrimmon!" she shouted in surprise, holding a hand over her mouth.
"Timothy McCrimmon!" My partner said accusingly. "Why are you still hanging around in the world of the living?"
I blinked, pushing slightly past him. "Father Timothy McCrimmon. You were a loyal man of the cloth, working to serve the community and help people at their darkest hour. If you're worried about how the church will handle itself without you, I ask you to cast aside your doubt! Sister Marie Johanson is more then capable of-"
As I spoke, I turned my attention to her, cowering in fear behind a pew. My palm quickly rushed to meet my face in exasperation (I just don't find facepalming to be a natural reaction to anything. Maybe it's just me.). "Sister Johanson?! Just what do you think you are doing?"
The ghostly specter at last spoke, rather quiet and slightly distorted. "I am not... do not... not ready..."
Sister Marie took a step forward, finding some courage, and spoke. "F-Father McCrimmon, you lived a long and fulfilling life. Though your passing 3 days ago was quite tragic, you shouldn't feel the need to stay in this world on my behalf."
"N-not your... my own... regrets..."
It seemed I was mistaken. He wasn't here for Marie's sake, but rather his own misgivings. "Well then Father McCrimmon, why do you continue to linger to this world?"
"Something... I must say... but I can not."
I was unsure
The situation was rather paradoxical. It appeared his unfinished business was to tell us something but, by the rules of his own religion, he was forbidden from letting us know.
"If only he could give us a hint..." Luke began.
That was it. I snapped my fingers
"Brilliant? Me?" A smirk appeared upon his face as he adjusted his tie. "Well, glad you finally started to notice."
"Father McCrimmon! Your unfinished business was that you could not tell anyone what you heard in a confession, correct? As you can not tell us what it was directly, how about you leave us a sign, a hint? You're spirit should find comfort in at least that much, and you can guide us along the way if we're getting close."
The priest gave a pained look before speaking. "Hebrew... twelve... twenty... nine."
I scribbled the phrase down onto my notepad. "Hebrew 12:29." Not so familiar with the Bible, I turned towards our resident expert, Sister Johanson. "What's that one about?"
Sister Johanson looked rather perplexed. "It's.. not a very common passage. I'd have to look it up-"
"Already on it," Luke replied. I saw him flip through the pages sporadically before slowing his pace and then turning them one by one. It seemed he found the passage. Unfortunately, his face seemed not to help much. "For our God is a consuming fire."
There was a
"Well... now..." I elongated my words, hoping they would buy me time but alas when I finished my sentence I didn't think of anything.
"I'm afraid I don't understand either Misses Gibbs."
"Miss." I corrected. "And... I gotta admit I'm a bit stumped myself. Maybe it was some kind of warning?"
"A warning? Like... something was gonna catch on fire?" Luke put the Bible down and looked up towards McCrimmon. He responded with the faintest of nods, confirming Luke's suspicions.
"Maybe the previous line or the line afterward would give us a hint?" Sister Johanson declared optimistically.
"Doubtful." I began. "If he wanted to include the previous lines he'd have mentioned them too, wouldn't he?"
"Besides, there are no other lines after the bit with the 'consuming fire'."
A disappointed look spread itself on Sister Johanson's face.
"Maybe..." Luke started. "Maybe there was a double meaning here. Maybe he meant 12:29 like... a date or something?"
"December 29th?" I scratched my cheek. "That would be... tomorrow."
"So... something will be on fire tomorrow? Do you think maybe that's what his confession was about? An arsonist?"
It seemed at Sister Johansen's last words, the faintest of smiles finally spread on the old man's face. After we finally reached the conclusion he had been guiding us towards, a bright light emanated from the ghost of the priest. His details were more outlined then they ever were before. And at last, a few final words for Sister Johansen "Thank... you," before he faded away into nothingness. The rush of cold air dissipated, and the flickering candles once again re-lit themselves.
"Marie, do you at least remember what the guy looked like?" I thought it quite rude of Luke to address the nun by her first name but she seemed to think little of it, as she responded.
"Actually, when he walked in, I had a feeling I had seen him somewhere before." She scratched her head uneasily. "I just... can't quite put my finger on where. I'm sure if I saw him again,
"Well, in any case, it seems you must get into contact with police, and soon ma'am." I began. "You know more about this future arsonist then either Luke or myself."
She however remained unsure. "In any case, at least we helped Father McCrimmon solve his unfinished business."
Luke nodded in agreement before adjusting his hat. It was only at that moment that I noticed he was still wearing one indoors. I scowled as I looked him over. "Don't worry about it Marie." Luke said, slinking his arm around the off-put nun. He walked her over to door, pushing it open. "I know plenty of people from the police. I'll make sure they-"
He stopped, mid-sentence. Unusual for the typically chatty Luke to be so quiet. I turned to look. "Something the matter?"
A building, a block or so away on Times Square was up in flames. The billowing smoke took up the entire skyline. My eyes widened as I struggled to remember where I had seen that building before. The approaching siren of a fire truck broke me from my trance.
"Infinite Solutions?"
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Edited by Hatcher, 05 April 2012 - 03:28 PM.



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