SSFutureTrunks Posted November 5, 2011 Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 [size=5][b]This is Goku. Obviously. xD One of an entire set I am creating I call "Warrior of the Dragon". These cards will use 'Ki Counters' with some interesting requirements... :3[/b][/size] [b][size=5]Once I'm done with my original "Saiyan Saga" set WOTD, I will take requests and suggestions! This is to show the basis of what kinds of cards they will be, but other factors like Name and stats I will take suggestions and requests for. [/size][/b] [img]http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/2981/511184.jpg[/img] [img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/5250/511184s.jpg[/img] [img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/2981/511184.jpg[/img] [img]http://img846.imageshack.us/img846/2981/511184.jpg[/img] [img]http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/4075/511184d.jpg[/img] [img]http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/2981/511184.jpg[/img] [img]http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/2981/511184.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LostRinoa Posted November 5, 2011 Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 Awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
frieza96 Posted November 6, 2011 Report Share Posted November 6, 2011 try not to use pics from the telly(piccolo, krillen and gohan) and gokus pic looks kind blurry round the edges. Try deviant art for pics, best place 6/10 and try to differ the ki counter effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSFutureTrunks Posted November 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2011 @frieza96: ok. first off, thanks for the feedback. Second, Mr. critical, I agree, I don't like Krillin's picture, but gohan's is a good picture and it matches the use of his effect, if you remember the series. Goku's picture only fuzzes when you move because its the condensed version of a very large picture, but its clear whenever I looked at it without moving the window. Also, Piccolo is a tv picture, but it looks pretty clear to me and its a nice pose for him. Finally, the effects revolve around Ki Counters and the use of effects when you have max counters. It's the effects themselves that will be different. Plus, I have yet to add the spells and traps, which will have effects that add and deplete Ki Counters on the cards adding strategy to it, as I am planning on making an entire deck of these. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
frieza96 Posted November 6, 2011 Report Share Posted November 6, 2011 ok then did u try dviantart for new pics or are you just ignoring that feedback. and why didnt you say in the topic you were making new spell and trap cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Six Samz 500 Posted November 6, 2011 Report Share Posted November 6, 2011 ok some of the pictures are bad, but you can easily find better one's even on google images. but you should try deviant art. [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/226617-frieza-saga-set/page__fromsearch__1"]http://forum.yugiohc...__fromsearch__1[/url] this is my DBZ frieza set check it out most of the pics in it are from deviantart some are from the anime but thats just a lot of minor ones charecters that your doing should have a lot of good non anime pics there are much better goku pics out there. the pic is ok but you could do much better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSFutureTrunks Posted November 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 @frieza96: No, I didn't ignore it, I just haven't had any time with my cards lately. And I DID say they were part of a set...which would include spells and traps....@Six Samz 500: where did you get that pic for Goku on yours? I would very much like to use it...I have similar ones for the others as you can see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maynard Kemp Posted November 7, 2011 Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 Why doesn't Yamcha have an effect? Not that I mind normal monsters it is just that it stood a little odd. Also I have a surrgestion. To fit the series itself I would say have Piccilo and Goku have different growth. Goku without getting serious is not all that impressive and Piccilo is always impressive. So I would surrgest changing KI power-ups with them. Such as Piccilo have a higher DEF and ATK and Goku gain more ATK and Def when recieving KI Counters. (such as 200 extra instead.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSFutureTrunks Posted November 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 @Maynard Kemp: I like the concept you're trying to get across...but the problem is that if I change the stat boost for Goku, id have to change it for all of them, cuz its a conformity effect that's brought about by the Ki Counters (like the "A" Counters for aliens). Here's a little sneak peek hint on the next set..... the idea is still in development, but Goku's Kaioken will be connected to him and one another, and All super Saiyan forms might either overlay or have an upgrade effect and add to pre-existing card effects...oh and Yamcha has no effect because 1. he's mostly useless in the first saga and 2. I just couldn't think of a good one that would match him, but still have a yugioh feel to it.although back to Piccolo, I did kind of mirror that, by giving piccolo a higher starting DEF than Goku...however, thinking about what you said, it gives me an idea for a better effect for Piccolo...as I wasn't entirely satisfied with what it was to begin with... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted November 7, 2011 Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 hehe i like, but y yamcha got no effect??? he my fav! lol XD seriously, yea the pics need some work, but their not super important but yea, overall good, i don't have time to comment on them all but.... 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSFutureTrunks Posted November 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 lol thank you. Pictures are a developing process xD Yamcha!! I didn't know he'd be this much of a problem! lol Maybe if someone gave me a good idea I could work one up... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted November 7, 2011 Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 he was fast sooo....hmmm...oh, and he died alot.... give him an increasing effect, and one for when he dies...that might work... my golden rule is that its your card, i only comment, you do what you want to them, because their yours, if you like it normal, thats what matters lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSFutureTrunks Posted November 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 hmmmm I like the idea of an effect when he dies xD Maybe speical summon a level 4 or lower "Z - Fighter" from the deck when he dies...it'll make him a nice staple for a deck.Oh and a big one: I need an idea for a field card!! Dxoh! I just got an awesome one but t wont work until the Cell Saga.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted November 7, 2011 Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 hehe glad i can help! oh field card....gravity chamber! make it to where like only dbz cards can attack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSFutureTrunks Posted November 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 oooo I like it but its a tad OP....maybe...maybe.... Your opponents monsters cannot attack during your opponents turn after the activation of this card and all non Z - Fighter monsters can only attack once (regardless of effects) every other turn after. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted November 7, 2011 Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 i'd have to see it on a card lol i can't process written ones lol but it sounds good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSFutureTrunks Posted November 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 oh and the card would be called Hyperbolic Time Chamberas soon as I'm home I'm going to make it ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maynard Kemp Posted November 7, 2011 Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 Yamcha does have esseptional Ki control that surpasses Goku's as admited by King Ki. Difference is that was around the final days of Frieza and he does not have a lot of Ki to have around. However, as shown by his ball techique he does have a lot fo Ki control so he could generate it by attacking and have less of it. As that for King Ki he could tranfer Ki allowing you to move the counter to different characters. (Just an idea ^.^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Jazz Posted November 7, 2011 Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 Wow. These are pretty good. When I saw Dragon Ball Z in the title, I thought back to all those other (bad) cards that others made of Dragon Ball Z, but after looking at these, I was amazed. I understand that pictures may have been difficult to find in this area, but they aren't too bad. The effects are well thought out, and the stats are balanced. I'm also pretty sure OCG is perfect, but don't take my word for it. Really good for a new member like yourself (but I shouldn't single you out for that - I'm new too). I give it... 9/10. Compared to other cards I've seen of Dragon Ball Z though, you break the scale. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSFutureTrunks Posted November 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 [quote name='Maynard Kemp' timestamp='1320698305' post='5624270'] Yamcha does have esseptional Ki control that surpasses Goku's as admited by King Ki. Difference is that was around the final days of Frieza and he does not have a lot of Ki to have around. However, as shown by his ball techique he does have a lot fo Ki control so he could generate it by attacking and have less of it. As that for King Ki he could tranfer Ki allowing you to move the counter to different characters. (Just an idea ^.^) [/quote] I like the idea of transferring the counters to others. Maybe I'll use that for yamcha's SS form effect....as all SS forms will add effects to already pre-existing effects.[quote name='The Jazz' timestamp='1320698631' post='5624290'] Wow. These are pretty good. When I saw Dragon Ball Z in the title, I thought back to all those other (bad) cards that others made of Dragon Ball Z, but after looking at these, I was amazed. I understand that pictures may have been difficult to find in this area, but they aren't too bad. The effects are well thought out, and the stats are balanced. I'm also pretty sure OCG is perfect, but don't take my word for it. Really good for a new member like yourself (but I shouldn't single you out for that - I'm new too). I give it... 9/10. Compared to other cards I've seen of Dragon Ball Z though, you break the scale. [/quote] well thanks! lol I've been a real duelist since Yugioh came out, and as a result ive memorized both the rule book down to the pure phonetics of card effects....theres a real pattern to all of it thats simple to find if you know where to look. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maynard Kemp Posted November 7, 2011 Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 PreRating- 6/10 This is only a pre-rating. I am aware a set will develope which will change everything about this and will give a final rating when your done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Jazz Posted November 7, 2011 Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 Oh hold on, I found one mistake that appears a couple of times. The thing about stat gains for Ki counters shouldn't be in brackets, and it should be right after the phrase about "put one ki counter on this card" But my rating stands at 9 still. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SSFutureTrunks Posted November 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 [quote name='The Jazz' timestamp='1320700042' post='5624367'] Oh hold on, I found one mistake that appears a couple of times. The thing about stat gains for Ki counters shouldn't be in brackets, and it should be right after the phrase about "put one ki counter on this card" But my rating stands at 9 still. [/quote] Negative sir....if you look at the effects of "A" Counters on alien cards, its the same way as mine....in fact Alien cards are a big inspiration for my cards lol [b][size=5]The following are only a few spells so far...they're really hard to do lol Suggestions would be quite lovely....[/size][/b] [img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/2981/511184.jpg[/img] [img]http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/2981/511184.jpg[/img] [img]http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/2981/511184.jpg[/img] [img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/9480/511184x.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maynard Kemp Posted November 7, 2011 Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 For what I know of Ki Charge is that its not quick and leads you open so I have a surrgestion. Increase Ki gain and make them so they cannot attack. This could be a unique one for the Z fighters and is good. I just think that to limit the attack is a better idea with higher Ki gain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FF Fan Posted November 8, 2011 Report Share Posted November 8, 2011 I don't understand how you can put more counters on Gohan when he's already reached his max. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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