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[Toot.]

The title

Edited by ♠Toot♠, 14 February 2012 - 11:44 PM.

[Agro]

I'll judge for this, but only if you switch the amount of points given for Images/Names and those given for Usefulness.

[Toot.]

Yeah I was thinking about doing that xD

[Ambrosia]

Joinage.
Should I post the entry exam card now?

[Toot.]

sure why not

[Enɢuin]

I want to enter. This is my exam card:



P.S. I posted this before then started reading the requirements again and thought I did something wrong so I deleted the post. Then I reread again and realised I was right in the first place. So this post might appear twice.

[~Renegade~]

I might as well join, looks like fun.

My card:

-Terra Pulse Launcher
-LIGHT
-****
-Rock-Type
-Effect:

Once per turn: You can banish 1 Thunder-Type or 1 Rock-Type monster from your Deck; Activate 1 of the following appropriate effects, depending on the Type of the removed from play monster:
Thunder: Select 1 face-up Spell or Trap Card: and negate its effect, until your opponent's next End Phase(The card is not destroyed).
Rock: Destroy 1 face-down card on the field, card effects cannot be activated in response to this effect.
-ATK:1650
-DEF:1700

[101100111000]

I'd like to join up. Here's my test card:



Lore: Cannot be Special Summoned from your hand. When this card inflicts Battle Damage: Draw 1 card. If that card is a Spell Card: You can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Bedlam Ciphers" monster from your hand.

[Toot.]

I want to enter. This is my exam card:



P.S. I posted this before then started reading the requirements again and thought I did something wrong so I deleted the post. Then I reread again and realised I was right in the first place. So this post might appear twice.

Kinda iffy on the banishing part
but eh... 7/10

I might as well join, looks like fun.

My card:

-Terra Pulse Launcher
-LIGHT
-****
-Rock-Type
-Effect:

Once per turn: You can banish 1 Thunder-Type or 1 Rock-Type monster from your Deck; Activate 1 of the following appropriate effects, depending on the Type of the removed from play monster:
Thunder: Select 1 face-up Spell or Trap Card: and negate its effect, until your opponent's next End Phase(The card is not destroyed).
Rock: Destroy 1 face-down card on the field, card effects cannot be activated in response to this effect.
-ATK:1650
-DEF:1700

lol its actually pretty good... I'm liking the negation effect
8.5/10

I'd like to join up. Here's my test card:



Lore: Cannot be Special Summoned from your hand. When this card inflicts Battle Damage: Draw 1 card. If that card is a Spell Card: You can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Bedlam Ciphers" monster from your hand.

The effect is kinda boring and could probably be abused some how... but eh... 7.5/10

Those are my ratings... just wait for wraith to post his and it will determine if you are in or not

[Ambrosia]

Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Cannot be Special Summoned except by banishing 1 Level 5 or higher LIGHT and 1 Level 5 or higher EARTH Monster in your Graveyard. During the End Phase of the turn this card was Summoned: Return it to it's owner's hand. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn: You can banish 1 EARTH or LIGHT Monster in your Graveyard; Apply 1 of these effects depending on the Attribute of the banished Monster:
*LIGHT: Your opponent takes all Battle Damage from battles involving this card until the End Phase.
EARTH: Switch all Monsters on your opponent's side of the field into face-down defense position. Then, inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each card affected.

[- Dingo -]

I'll Join.

Lore

Each time a monster is Summoned, Place 1 "Shine Counter" on this card. (Max. 5) this card gains 300 ATK for every "Shine Counter" on this card. If this cards ATK exceeds its DEF, This card gains the following Effect:
- Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points to Draw 1 card.
If this card's ATK is below 2000, this card gains the following Effect:
- Twice per turn, if this card would be destroyed by battle, it is not.
Once per turn, you can remove 3 "Shine Counters" from this card to gain 1000 Life Points.

[Toot.]

lol i love the book of eclipse effect it has seems pretty straight forward... 8/10

I'll Join.

Lore

Each time a monster is Summoned, Place 1 "Shine Counter" on this card. (Max. 5) this card gains 300 ATK for every "Shine Counter" on this card. If this cards ATK exceeds its DEF, This card gains the following Effect:
- Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points to Draw 1 card.
If this card's ATK is below 2000, this card gains the following Effect:
- Twice per turn, if this card would be destroyed by battle, it is not.
Once per turn, you can remove 3 "Shine Counters" from this card to gain 1000 Life Points.

Haven't seen this guy in a while... Welcome Back...
lol i thought the 1st effect would be better if it payed Attack points instead... it might be a little better that way imo xD
the last 2 effects are okay... 7.5/10

[Lost Child]

Haven't made a card in a while. Let's see how this goes.


Once per turn: Lower this card's Level by 1 for the duration of the duel. When this card's Level reaches 1 by its own effect, send it to the Graveyard. When this card is in your Graveyard: you can destroy 1 face-up monster you control with the same Level as this card; Special Summon this card in face-up DEF Position.

[Zextra]

Well, I don't know for sure whether I'll have the time to make cards later, but I guess I'll post an entry card anyways:

Lore:

You can discard this card; add 1 “Black Garden” from your Deck to your hand. While “Black Garden” is face-up on the field, this card gains 1200 ATK and cannot be destroyed by card effects. When a Token is Summoned: You can add 1 Plant-type monster from your Deck to your hand with a Level equal to or less than the Level of the Token.

[Blue-Eyes493]

Here you go:


This card must attack if able. When this card is Normal Summoned: You can Special Summon one "Autoassault" Tuner monster from your Graveyard.

If you want to see the set for this card:
http://forum.yugiohc...utoassault-set/

[Toot.]

Haven't made a card in a while. Let's see how this goes.


Once per turn: Lower this card's Level by 1 for the duration of the duel. When this card's Level reaches 1 by its own effect, send it to the Graveyard. When this card is in your Graveyard: you can destroy 1 face-up monster you control with the same Level as this card; Special Summon this card in face-up DEF Position.

So when you destroy a monster with the same level does it have to be a level 1 monster or does it go back to 4?... lol
EDIT: Lol I see... it doesn't have to be level 1... i could have been destroyed while it was level 3 or something... lol... kinda situational though 7/10

Well, I don't know for sure whether I'll have the time to make cards later, but I guess I'll post an entry card anyways:

Lore:

You can discard this card; add 1 “Black Garden” from your Deck to your hand. While “Black Garden” is face-up on the field, this card gains 1200 ATK and cannot be destroyed by card effects. When a Token is Summoned: You can add 1 Plant-type monster from your Deck to your hand with a Level equal to or less than the Level of the Token.

This is pretty good in naturias... I really like it...
8/10

Here you go:


This card must attack if able. When this card is Normal Summoned: You can Special Summon one "Autoassault" Tuner monster from your Graveyard.


If you want to see the set for this card:
http://forum.yugiohc...utoassault-set/

Well the effect is kinda bland... eh... 6/10


Oh BTW Guys... I Just Edited The 1st post...
the pot and how you're entry cards will be accepted...

[Agro]

Though I may be a bit against the grading scale, especially the obvious lack of Official Card Grammar AND how little the usefulness of the card matters, here are my grades. If I'm supposed to add a point to people for adding to the pot, add it yourself, toot, though looking at your grades, I'm not even sure I did this right. WELL SCREW THAT THEN. Here they are anyway:

Blue-Eyes493
Balance: 5/20
Creativity and Originality: 0/30
Effect: 0/25
Usefulness: 0/15
Image/Name: 5/5
Total: 10/100
Grader Note: This is a single card contest here, so technically, having a card from a CC set is just asking for trouble. Whether you've made the cards or not, I'm not going to grade this card with any other cards in mind than those currently in the TCG/OCG. I'd say your best bet would have been to just replace "Autoassault" with "Karakuri" and this card would fit right in.

SexyZexy
Balance: 14/20
Creativity and Originality: 20/30
Effect: 15/25
Usefulness: 13/15
Image/Name: 5/5
Extra: +4
Total: 71/100
Grader Note: The fact that this card can't be destroyed by card effects and has 2000 ATK when Black Garden is on the field is a very big warning to me. Not to mention it allows easy search for Glow-Up AND Spore, as well as the Inmatos (like they matter)

LC
Balance: 17/20
Creativity and Originality: 26/30
Effect: 10/25
Usefulness: 3/15
Image/Name: 5/5
Total: 61/100
Grader Note: I can see what you were trying to do with this, but unfortunately the level of the monster would reset to 4 when sent to the Graveyard with your current card grammar.

- Dingo -
Balance: 17/20
Creativity and Originality: 29/30
Effect: 15/25
Usefulness: 4/15
Image/Name: 3/5
Total: 68/100
Grader Note: I don't know why you did not make this a fairy. I really, really do not. You call it an angel then you give it what is pretty much an alt art of a counter fairy.

Clear Vice Dragon
Balance: 19/20
Creativity and Originality: 30/30
Effect: 18/25
Usefulness: 7/15
Image/Name: 4/5
Total: 78/100
Grader Note: It's like you mixed Yubel with Dark Simorgh and then let it get cockslapped. I just wanted to check with you on this, because I don't think that you meant for it to be destroyed in battle if LIGHT is banished for its effect.

101100111000
Balance: 10/20
Creativity and Originality: 2/30
Effect: 1/25
Usefulness: 1/15
Image/Name: 0/5
Total: 14/100
Grader Note: Look up to see why this is so low. The only reason you got ANY points is because drawing cards is fun, though this card does it SO much more poorly than others.

TheGreatEnguin
Balance: 18/20
Creativity and Originality: 10/30
Effect: 5/25
Usefulness: 6/15
Image/Name: 3/5
Total: 42/100

~Renegade~
Balance: 20/20
Creativity and Originality: 25/30
Effect: 18/25
Usefulness: 13/15
Image/Name: 4/5
Total: 79/100
Grader Note: IMO it could use more ATK, but this is a really well made card. I actually edited my grades when I finally compared this card with Clear Vice's so that this one was rated higher. My only complaint with this card is I don't see much usefulness in banishing Thunder and Rock monsters.

[Ambrosia]

Nope, I definitely didn't intend that.

[Toot.]

Though I may be a bit against the grading scale, especially the obvious lack of Official Card Grammar AND how little the usefulness of the card matters, here are my grades. If I'm supposed to add a point to people for adding to the pot, add it yourself, toot, though looking at your grades, I'm not even sure I did this right. WELL SCREW THAT THEN. Here they are anyway:

Blue-Eyes493
Balance: 5/20
Creativity and Originality: 0/30
Effect: 0/25
Usefulness: 0/15
Image/Name: 5/5
Total: 10/100
Grader Note: This is a single card contest here, so technically, having a card from a CC set is just asking for trouble. Whether you've made the cards or not, I'm not going to grade this card with any other cards in mind than those currently in the TCG/OCG. I'd say your best bet would have been to just replace "Autoassault" with "Karakuri" and this card would fit right in.

SexyZexy
Balance: 14/20
Creativity and Originality: 20/30
Effect: 15/25
Usefulness: 13/15
Image/Name: 5/5
Extra: +4
Total: 71/100
Grader Note: The fact that this card can't be destroyed by card effects and has 2000 ATK when Black Garden is on the field is a very big warning to me. Not to mention it allows easy search for Glow-Up AND Spore, as well as the Inmatos (like they matter)

LC
Balance: 17/20
Creativity and Originality: 26/30
Effect: 10/25
Usefulness: 3/15
Image/Name: 5/5
Total: 61/100
Grader Note: I can see what you were trying to do with this, but unfortunately the level of the monster would reset to 4 when sent to the Graveyard with your current card grammar.

- Dingo -
Balance: 17/20
Creativity and Originality: 29/30
Effect: 15/25
Usefulness: 4/15
Image/Name: 3/5
Total: 68/100
Grader Note: I don't know why you did not make this a fairy. I really, really do not. You call it an angel then you give it what is pretty much an alt art of a counter fairy.

Clear Vice Dragon
Balance: 19/20
Creativity and Originality: 30/30
Effect: 18/25
Usefulness: 7/15
Image/Name: 4/5
Total: 78/100
Grader Note: It's like you mixed Yubel with Dark Simorgh and then let it get cockslapped. I just wanted to check with you on this, because I don't think that you meant for it to be destroyed in battle if LIGHT is banished for its effect.

101100111000
Balance: 10/20
Creativity and Originality: 2/30
Effect: 1/25
Usefulness: 1/15
Image/Name: 0/5
Total: 14/100
Grader Note: Look up to see why this is so low. The only reason you got ANY points is because drawing cards is fun, though this card does it SO much more poorly than others.

TheGreatEnguin
Balance: 18/20
Creativity and Originality: 10/30
Effect: 5/25
Usefulness: 6/15
Image/Name: 3/5
Total: 42/100

~Renegade~
Balance: 20/20
Creativity and Originality: 25/30
Effect: 18/25
Usefulness: 13/15
Image/Name: 4/5
Total: 79/100
Grader Note: IMO it could use more ATK, but this is a really well made card. I actually edited my grades when I finally compared this card with Clear Vice's so that this one was rated higher. My only complaint with this card is I don't see much usefulness in banishing Thunder and Rock monsters.

lol nice... but you kinda overlooked this part

This Is Something New I Came Up With. It Might Have Been Done In The Past, But Eh...
In Order For You To Be Officially In The Tournament, You Will Need To Pass The Entry Exam.
For The Entry Exam, You Will Need To Create A Card And Post It Here.
(You Can Post Any Card)
The Entry Exam Cards Will Only Be Rated On A Scale Of 1 - 10. Me Or The Other Judges (If Any At The Time) Can Use Whatever Judging Methods As They Please, Just As Long As The Rating Is 1 - 10. Why 1 - 10? I Will Add Up The Ratings From Each Judge. So Right Now There Are Two Judges. So Means You're Rating Has To Be Over 10.

EXAMPLE:
I Give You A 7.5/10

Wraith Gives You A 2/10

You're Overall Will Be 9.5/10

With That, You Will Not Be Able To Join.

If You Fail The Entry Exam, You Can Keep Trying Until You Are Accepted; Unless There Are No More Spots Left.

1st round hasn't started xD

[Agro]

1st round hasn't started xD

I'll grade how I want.

Just divide the scores by 10 if you so choose.

I wanted to test the system to see how it worked.

Blue-Eyes493
Total: 1/10

SexyZexy
Total: 7.1/10

LC
Total: 6.1/10

- Dingo -
Total: 6.8/10

Clear Vice Dragon
Total: 7.8/10

101100111000
Total: 1.4/10

TheGreatEnguin
Total: 4.2/10

~Renegade~
Total: 7.9/10

See? Easy.

_____________________________________

The Great Enguin
7/10
4.2/10
11.2 PASS!

~Renegade~
8.5/10
7.9/10
16.4 PASS!

101100111000
7.5/10
1.4/10
8.9 FAIL!

Clear Vice Dragon
8/10
7.8/10
15.8 PASS!

- Dingo -
7.5
6.8/10
14.3 PASS!

LC
7/10
6.1/10
13.1 PASS!

SexyZexy
8/10
7.1/10
15.1 PASS!

Blue-Eyes493
6/10
1/10
7/10 FAIL!

So 101100111000 and Blue-Eyes493, feel free to try again.