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[The Monster of Surrealton!]

Remember Goblin Attack Force, Vorse Raider, and Gemini Elf? Basically, it's beatdown. You summon beater, and wreck havoc. Effects make them more than just beaters. It let's them deals with current game stuff. While they're in the Graveyard, they can equip themselves to other Fiend-Type monsters to give the equipped monster their effects. They're also Rekindling and Flamvell Firedog targets, adding more swarming. Their Xyzs make them crazier and add bigger monsters to the arsenal.

NOTE: ASSUME ALL THE ONIS CAN ONLY EQUIP TO OTHER ONIS. I'M GOING TO START FIXING THEM TO SAY THAT SOON.

Main Deck monsters

Jigokunoni
If this card attacks, card effects that activate in your opponent's hand are negated, until the end of the Damage Step. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard: You can target 1 face-up Fiend-Type monster you control; equip this card to that target. The equipped monster gains this card's effects.


Shiboni
When this card attacks a monster: Halve that target's ATK and DEF during the Damage Step. Each time this card destroys a monster by battle: This card gains 300 ATK. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard: You can target 1 face-up Fiend-Type monster you control; equip this card to that target. The equipped monster gains this card's effects.


Kanaboni
This card gains 100 ATK for each face-up monster your opponent controls. If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing Battle Damage to your opponent. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard: You can target 1 face-up Fiend-Type monster you control; equip this card to that target. The equipped monster gains this card's effects.


Amazoni
When this monster battles an opponent's monster, unless the opponent's monster is destroyed by battle: It is returned to the bottom of the owner's Deck at the end of the Damage Step. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard: You can target 1 face-up Fiend-Type monster you control; equip this card to that target. The equipped monster gains this card's effects.


Demoni
If this card destroys a monster by battle: You can Special Summon 1 Level 4 FIRE monster with 200 DEF (from your Deck), other than a monster with this card's name. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard: You can target 1 face-up Fiend-Type monster you control; equip this card to that target. The equipped monster gains this card's effects.


Hadoni
If your opponent activates a card effect that inflicts damage to you; Negate that damage, and this card gains ATK equal to that damage until your opponent's next End Phase. If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate Spell/Trap Cards until the end of the Damage Step. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard: You can target 1 face-up Fiend-Type monster you control; equip this card to that target. The equipped monster gains this card's effects.


Sonshoni
You can send 1 face-up Equip Card you control to the Graveyard to destroy 1 card your opponent controls. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard: You can target 1 face-up Fiend-Type monster you control; equip this card to that target. The equipped monster gains this card's effects.


Usoni
You can switch this face-up Attack Position card to face-up Defense Position to target 1 Defense Position monster your opponent controls; Destroy that target. If it is a Flip Effect Monster: Special Summon it to your side of the field in face-down Defense Position. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard: You can target 1 face-up Fiend-Type monster you control; equip this card to that target. The equipped monster gains this card's effects.


Kemononi
This card is unaffected by the effects of Trap Cards. If your opponent activates a Spell Card: You can Tribute this face-up card; negate the activation of the Spell Card and destroy it. This effect can only be activated during the opponent's Main Phase. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard: You can target 1 face-up Fiend-Type monster you control; equip this card to that target. The equipped monster gains this card's effects.


Sapotoni
Once per turn, you can Normal Summon 1 "oni" monster in addition your Normal Summon or Set. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard: You can target 1 face-up Fiend-Type monster you control; equip this card to that target. The equipped monster gains this card's effects.


Buredoni
If you control a face-up "Bushidoni": You can Special Summon this card (from your hand). If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle: It can attack once again in a row. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard: You can target 1 face-up Fiend-Type monster you control; equip this card to that target. The equipped monster gains this card's effects.


Shizuoni
All face-up Special Summoned monsters your opponent controls lose 400 ATK and DEF for each face-up "oni" monster you control. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard: You can target 1 face-up Fiend-Type monster you control; equip this card to that target. The equipped monster gains this card's effects.


Midoni
Once, while this card is face-up on the field: You can have this card lose 300 ATK; Destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard: You can target 1 face-up Fiend-Type monster you control; equip this card to that target. The equipped monster gains this card's effects.


Bushidoni
If you control a face-up Level 4 Fiend-Type monster, other than "Bushidoni": You can Special Summon this card (from your hand). If this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster: Destroy that monster (without applying damage calculation). Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard: You can target 1 face-up Fiend-Type monster you control; equip this card to that target. The equipped monster gains this card's effects.


Ijimekkoni
You can return 1 face-up monster you control to the hand; Special Summon this card (from your hand). When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle: Special Summon 1 "Oni Token" (Fiend-Type/FIRE/Level 4/ATK 1500/DEF 200). This Token cannot be Tributed for a Tribute Summon. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard: You can target 1 face-up Fiend-Type monster you control; equip this card to that target. The equipped monster gains this card's effects.


Sumatoni
If this card destroys a monster by battle: You can add 1 "oni" card from your Graveyard to your hand. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard: You can target 1 face-up Fiend-Type monster you control; equip this card to that target. The equipped monster gains this card's effects.


Momoni
If you control a face-up Level 4 Fiend-Type monster, other than "Momoni": You can Special Summon this card (from your hand). Once per turn, this face-up Attack Position card cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard: You can target 1 face-up Fiend-Type monster you control; equip this card to that target. The equipped monster gains this card's effects.

Extra Deck monsters

Saikoni
Must be Xyz Summoned by using 2 Rank 4 "oni" Xyz Monsters you control that were not Xyz Summoned this turn as the Xyz Materials, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Special Summon 1 Level 4 Fiend-Type monster from your hand or Graveyard. Its effect(s) are negated, and its ATK becomes 3000. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard: You can target 1 face-up Fiend-Type monster you control; equip this card to that target. The equipped monster's original ATK becomes 4000.


Wendigoni
Must be Xyz Summoned by using an "oni" Xyz Monster you control that was not Xyz Summoned this turn as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) Once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; send up to 4 FIRE monsters with 200 DEF from your Deck to the Graveyard. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard: You can target 1 face-up Fiend-Type monster you control; equip this card to that target. The equipped monster's original ATK is doubled.



Sakuranonihana
3 Level 4 Fiend-Type Monsters
Once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card and send 1 "oni" Equip Card you control to the Graveyard; Special Summon 1 FIRE monster with 200 DEF (from your Deck). Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard: You can target 1 face-up Fiend-Type monster you control; equip this card to that target. The equipped monster's original ATK becomes 2800.


Busoni
2 Level 4 Fiend-Type Monsters
This card gains 200 ATK for each "oni" monster equipped to it. Once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Send 1 Equip Card equipped to this card to the Graveyard. Then, destroy 1 card your opponent controls.


Enmaoni
2 Level 4 Fiend-Type Monsters
Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; until your opponent's next End Phase, the monsters you currently control cannot be destroyed by card effects, and if they attack a monster, the target monster's ATK is halved during the Damage Step.


Nenshoni
2 Level 4 Fiend-Type Monsters
Once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target 1 other face-up "oni" monster you control that is equipped with an "oni" monster(s); Special Summon as many "oni" monsters equipped to that card as possible.


Helloni
2 Level 4 Fiend-Type Monsters
Once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Special Summon 1 Level 4 "oni" monster (from your Deck). Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card is in your Graveyard: You can target 1 face-up Fiend-Type monster you control; equip this card to that target. The equipped monster gains 400 ATK x its own Level.

Spells

Saigoni
When you control no face-up monsters: Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "oni" monster from your Deck, then take damage equal to its ATK.


Onigatojoni
Choose and activate 1 of the following effects:
● Add 1 Level 4 Fiend-Type monster with 200 DEF from your Deck to your hand.
● Send 1 Level 4 Fiend-Type monster with 200 DEF from your Deck to the Graveyard.


Shokanoni
Target 1 monster your opponent controls; switch it to Defense Position. Special Summon 1 Level 4 "oni" monster (from your hand), then the target monster loses ATK and DEF equal to the Special Summoned monster's ATK.


Gekidoni
Target 1 face-up "oni" monster you control; until the End Phase, it gains 800 ATK, and if it battles an opponent's monster: That monster's effect(s) is negated until the End Phase.

Traps

Duoni
Tribute 1 "oni" monster you control; Special Summon 2 "Duoni Tokens" (Fiend-Type/FIRE/Level 2/ATK ?/DEF 200). Their ATK are equal to half the original ATK of the Tributed Monster, and they gain the Tributed monster's effect(s). These Tokens cannot be used as Synchro-Material Monsters.


Reidoni
Can only be activated when your opponent Special Summons a monster(s). Special Summon 1 Level 4 "oni" monster (from your Deck).


Konigeki
Switch 1 face-up Attack Position "oni" monster you control to face-up Defense Position to target 2 cards your opponent controls. Send them to the Graveyard.


Raijinoni
Send 1 "oni" monster from your Spell & Trap Zone to the Graveyard; Destroy 1 card your opponent controls.

[adriannogiovanny]

try to make simple cards... not even the go cards have so much effects than those cards.... AWESOME pics !!!

[ragnarok1945]

for Demoni I'm unsure if you should make the effect gain a permanent one

Hadoni's atk gain effect you may want to cap a limit on, despite being just 1 turn

Busoni is good, shame it has no xyz reattaching effect though, would have been nice

overall, a very well done set

[The Monster of Surrealton!]

Sakuranonihana added

EDIT: Kemononi also added

EDIT #2: Duoni added

EDIT #3: Reidoni added

[ragnarok1945]

for Duoni, gaining the monster's effects might be a bit too much

after all, it applies to ANY oni monster, including those that aren't exactly easy to get out, so this seems wrong

along with the original atk, well that's beside the point

yes no usage for synchro is fine, but there's still the problem of tribute food

[d3ath79]

Broken, but cool. 7/10

[The Monster of Surrealton!]

Midoni added.

EDIT: Momoni added.

[ragnarok1945]

for Midoni, the 300 atk loss should be temporary, 1600 atk isn't much anyway

Momoni is meh for just one attack prevented from being destroyed in battle

beyond that they both do the same thing to gain other card effects, still meh

[The Monster of Surrealton!]

Usoni, Shizoni, Konigeki added. Oni Call replaced with Onigatojoni.

[ragnarok1945]

Usoni I guess can work due to taking flip effect monsters for yourself

with Konigeki it's really good card destruction effect, you don't even have to lose the Oni monster

does seem almost a bit too cheap for the cost though

[The Monster of Surrealton!]

Amazoni, Buredoni, Ijimekkoni, Saikoni, Wendigoni, Nenshoni, and Shokanoni added.


And...

Now, I think the archetype has good monsters/support.

[ragnarok1945]

for Ijimekkoni I'm sure you'll just use the token for synchro food

for Saikoni, even though the summoned monster's effects are permanently negated, 3000 atk still seems a bit high, I'd drop it to 2500 at the max

same with Wedoni's original atk is doubled, you should have made it slightly more specific

[The Monster of Surrealton!]

Working on a new archetype in-between studying art history and I'm gloating about being a university student cause I'm pretentious and being pretentious is cool and it is cool because I say it's cool and my word matters because I graduated community college with two associate's degrees.

Bump.

[The Monster of Surrealton!]

Bumpvator! Bring the best archetype to the top for maximum commenting!

[The Monster of Surrealton!]

Let's see...

Changed Amazoni's art

Added Sumatoni, Sapotoni, and Sonshoni to "Main Deck monsters"

Added Helloni to "Extra Deck monsters"

Added Gekidoni to "Spells"

[ragnarok1945]

for Hellioni, I'm unsure about the atk gain

a lv4 gets 1600 atk right off the bat, that's actually quite a bit given all the atk changing card effects out there

maybe you should have limited to 300 per level or something, but that's your call

see for Gekidoni you corrected this since 800 atk isn't THAT huge since it's only 1 turn

[The Monster of Surrealton!]

Updated for Advanced clause. How does it look, Koko?

[The Monster of Surrealton!]

Added Saigoni to Spells, Raijinoni to Traps. Changed Reidoni into a Counter Trap.

[REvan342]

Is there a reason for all the monsters having 200 DEF? (not a complaint im just wondering)

personally id add a special typing of the card similar to: Fiend / OniUnion / Effect.
this would strengthen the Arch type.
the names run together......... Ex: Jigokunoni. Suggestion: Jigoku-Oni
It dosent really feel like an arch-type the way you named them.

Also limiting the number of effects that can pile up on a single Oni would better balence the set.
Hope this was helpful in your pursuits =)

[Kyng]

Is there a reason for all the monsters having 200 DEF? (not a complaint im just wondering)

Y U NO READ?

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The Review

After an initial attempt to review them individually I've noticed a common theme in your monsters: they all have no drawbacks in response to their abusive nature, and therefore are without question overpowered. There's dealing with the current Meta, and then theirs just downright overpowered monsters. Give them some form of drawback, maybe have them all switch to Defense or something that will give some sort of chance against them. I also noticed that these monsters cannot protect de-equip from their wielder and re-Special Summon, which is somewhat a relief, but it doesn't tone down the substantial level of overpowered cards you've done. Spells and Traps don't exactly follow this pattern, but some are pretty ridiculously powerful.