Astolfo Posted April 11, 2012 Report Share Posted April 11, 2012 [spoiler="V1"][img]http://i40.tinypic.com/es8569.png[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler="V2"][img]http://i42.tinypic.com/34zx05c.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [color=#000066][b]How about this?[/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted April 11, 2012 Report Share Posted April 11, 2012 Just fix the text and I am sure that this would be truly amazing for Byakuya! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted April 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 11, 2012 [color=#000066][b]=o Thanks Daemon. I didn't think it would be anything decent. And fix text? Fix it as in how? [/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted April 11, 2012 Report Share Posted April 11, 2012 Just make it less effectful. Make it flat and don't use an outer glow on it for this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Î’yakuya Posted April 11, 2012 Report Share Posted April 11, 2012 Hmmm...I agree with Daemon. But regardless of the text, I love it. Arigatou. :3 If you like, you can change the text to make it better. Flat seems nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted April 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 11, 2012 [color=#000066][b]Daemon, I put the outer glow to help distinguish the text from the background, but if outer glow's bad here, then what do I do to make it stand out again? Thanks~[/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Î’yakuya Posted April 11, 2012 Report Share Posted April 11, 2012 It seems fine enough as it is. If you want to make it better it's fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted April 11, 2012 Report Share Posted April 11, 2012 The text seems overly stylised but I really like the pastel style going on here. The subtle focal works well here actually. You could do tons with the lighting, but strangely I like the lack of lighting. It's overall a decent effort. Hope to see more of you in Showcase :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted April 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 11, 2012 [color=#000066][b]Thanks Rai~ Just played around with stuff, and hoped it looked good. XD Also, I agree with the over stylised text, but I wanted to keep that "sakura petal night" sort of look, but still be able to read it... so yeah. [/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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