I'm back to this site. I've decided to start work on a new card set. It's not finished yet but I felt like uploading some now to get ratings or suggestions on what effects would be good for other cards.
These cards are supposed to be a bit OP, But feel free to tell me if some are too powerful. Like I said, feedback, ratings, and advice would help a lot.
Despair is very OP'd. I think you need to ramp up the summoning conditions if your going to use an effect like that. 1000LP for an invincible 2900 ATK beater is way too small a cost. Rest of the them look interesting and usable enough though. Change Despair and you'll have a very respectable little set.
Not sure how balanced this would be - but if kept the LP cost but added something extra e.g. "Pay 1000 Life Points and return two Zombie-type monsters you control to the hand to Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard."
Like the latest cards effect btw. Reminds of Stardust.