Still not the correct way to make a decent holo, ie your example is still below average. Go look at some cards like Thunder King Rai-Oh, and pay attention on how the holo is proportioned on the actual image.
Nickname:neos Card name:Elemental Hero Neos Trap?/Spell?/Monster?: warrior Normal/Synchro/Effect ect. : Type:light Effect (if you need) : ATK/DEF: Attribute: Description (if normal monster): A new Elemental HERO has arrived from Neo-Space! When he initiates a Contact Fusion with a Neo-Spacian his unknown powers are unleashed. Serial:RYMP-EN004 Sed-Id: 89943723 Symbol (if Spell or Trap): Gold Rare (Yes/No):no Holo (Yes/No): yes
Card name: Dark Magician Girl
Normal/Synchro/Effect ect. :
Effect (if you need) : This card gains 300 ATK for every "Dark Magician" or "Magician of Black Chaos" in any Graveyard.
Description (if normal monster):
Symbol (if Spell or Trap):
Gold Rare (Yes/No): No
Holo (Yes/No): Yes