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I wanted to create these cards when i found a set of elemental dragon pictures that looked really good. I really wanted to used them and this idea come up. The story is that pollution has spread too far and this awakened the workers. The workers join together in oder to make an Elemental Destroyer. Non of these pic are mine and plz rate and reply. Also share them among people you know ^^.

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Everyone, plz view over it (i know the elemental idea has been used a lot) but i rlly want to know if these cards are original or just bad :P

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Not bad or OP.
The OCG is good and overall a decent set however some monsters seem to have the same effects (which is probably deliberate but still).
Also I like the pictures! :D

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Thank you, and yes i know DARK and LIGHT monsters have basically the same effect. I wanted this deck to have swarm ability (like the thunder family http://yugioh.wikia....der_(archetype)). :)

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Bumped, anyways more comments plz

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pretty good
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Bump. Also, OCG fixed and cards edited.

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I really like this set. The cards are balanced, and although the effects are the same for light and dark,it does add swarming power and lets you use fire's eff easily. I've only seen a few of these pics before but I'm not on here alot so i couldn't tell you if they were overused. And I think it is a creative archtype ;)
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all over used images except the fusion and spell| rap cards
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all over used images except the fusion and spell| rap cards

Yes thank you for ur amazing review, i found nothing constructive about it. I want to hear about THE CARDS, not the pictures. Idc if they're overused. If it fits, it fits. If i find something better i WILL change it, but for now idc.

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These are some pretty awesome looking cards! Keep up the great work!
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I like this archetype. I am glad you made it revolve more around Normal Summoning to trigger effects (the Dark and Light ones are fine with the same effect). Umm I have problems with the fusions though, well actually just Maelstrom and Seism. You don;t have monster named "Elemental Worker, Ocean" or "Elemental Worker, Boulder" (probably forgot to change those when you renamed Brine and Gaia lol). Other than that, OCG on the cards are good, you possibly could update the card lore for ease of reading using colons and semi-colons. Great archetype. Oh, btw (whispers in your ear). Who gives a flying %*$@ if the images are overused!
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i like the cards but over used images
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i like the cards but over used images


I already said that i know they're overused and idc o.0

I like this archetype. I am glad you made it revolve more around Normal Summoning to trigger effects (the Dark and Light ones are fine with the same effect). Umm I have problems with the fusions though, well actually just Maelstrom and Seism. You don;t have monster named "Elemental Worker, Ocean" or "Elemental Worker, Boulder" (probably forgot to change those when you renamed Brine and Gaia lol). Other than that, OCG on the cards are good, you possibly could update the card lore for ease of reading using colons and semi-colons. Great archetype. Oh, btw (whispers in your ear). Who gives a flying %*$@ if the images are overused!
Overall: 8/10


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This WOULD be good, but theres only one problem...YOUR A f***ing BRONY! GROW UP THE SHOW IS MENT FOR FEMALES AGES 3-9!!!!! YUGIOH IS AGES 6+ SO U CANT MAKE FUN OF IT BUT WTF!!!!!! LITTLE HORSES! HERES AN IDEA! GO OUT AND PLAY POLO OR SOMETHING WITH REAL ASS HORSE YOU MOTHER f***ing fa****
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This WOULD be good, but theres only one problem...YOUR A f***ing BRONY! GROW UP THE SHOW IS MENT FOR FEMALES AGES 3-9!!!!! YUGIOH IS AGES 6+ SO U CANT MAKE FUN OF IT BUT WTF!!!!!! LITTLE HORSES! HERES AN IDEA! GO OUT AND PLAY POLO OR SOMETHING WITH REAL ASS HORSE YOU MOTHER f***ing fa****



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Mr UMI those cards can be called realistic and they are pretty good too!! (also loved the mind shock cards)
But in general 99% of the cards in the realistic section are not realistic or playable.
If you can give me any advice on how you make those images plz send me an email. I've made a ton of cards but they exist only as text.
For example

Sudden Destruction(or appearance) ( still can't decide)
( art: the shadow of a dragon flying over a town)
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normal summon a dragon type monster from your hand without tributes. during this turn, only that monster can attack. the monster summoned by this card can attack up to 2 monsters and any battle damage is halved. return that monster to your hand during end phase.

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...But in general 99% of the cards in the realistic section are not realistic or playable...

Someone doesn't know Toyo-tan ¬_¬

Also, you don't post your cards on other people's threads. Its rude, and not the place for your cards to get reviewed.
OT: Title called Elemental Destruction, so only reviewing the Destroyer of my favourite attribute.

Maelstrom is very generic support. That's it.

In all seriousness, your archetype does not have anything individual to its name that makes it an archetype. You've thrown generic effects + "Elemental Worker/Destroyer" to make a good set. That's fine, but not good.

These wouldn't see the light of day in the Metagame because they just support each other. They're not, really, any good for anything other than supporting themselves, so who'd make the deck, and why'd they use it?

Answer: they wouldn't.
If I do sound harsh, I apologize. However, you must comprehend that Realistic Cards is meant to be YCM's CC pinnacle, hence the heavy scrutiny. Sure, Finished Sets is Realistic Card's aborted baby who accidentally survived the scraping, but still.

They're a good attempt, but you can do better. Do better.

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