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[gangster yo4]

[hulkty]

We need the Joke Card Thread back, hehe.

[Expelsword - 黎明]

How about Light and L have normal stats because they are regular people, whereas their abilities are useful because they are analyical and have magical artifacts of power?

[Drewer]

Well, i'm not really into joke cards, but you could give them at least normal status and make their descriptions a little bit funnier.

sorry, but unfortunally this isn't even close to funny. =/

[Expelsword - 黎明]

These would be proper versions of such cards.




Note the phrasing, proper ATK/DEF values, and relavance to the source material.

[Drewer]

These would be proper versions of such cards.




Note the phrasing, proper ATK/DEF values, and relavance to the source material.

This i like. =3

[gangster yo4]

they wernt meant to be joke cards i just like deathnote is that such a bad thing

[Expelsword - 黎明]

Yeah, that's fine, but you can't make them ridiculous.
Who would want to play against 9999/9999 ATK cards that kill everything? That's not fun. Nor is it acurate to the series, where Light is definitely not invincible, and neither is L.You gotta stick closer to the source, my man.

Like, L's effect. He's a detective, so he can see his opponent's plays coming and punish them for it, not some unstoppable force of nature who could only be killed by magic...

[gangster yo4]

yeah but if you think about it noone knows who he is apart from a few people so in a way he is invincible same with light he has the deathnote so he kinda is invincible.

[Expelsword - 黎明]

My point is that Level 12 maxed out stat monsters with instant win effects show no creativity.
If you really liked Death Note, you could come up with better fitting cards than that, I did in 5 minutes.

[Xi-3]

gangster yo4, I agree with Expelsword that doing proper justice for a series and its characters by creating more realistic cards shows greater appreciation for that series than making entirely unrealistic cards against which no one would want to play. While my own cards are not perfect they are not invincible (apart from Jack Rakan who is meme-level invincible by definition of being Jack Rakan). L and Light really aren't invincible far from it, they are simply extremely intelligent, observant human beings, despite the chances of Light having forgotten that. The best ability that either have is the ability to see the opponent's play coming, and to try to mess with it: they do not have any physical feats of their own.

Death Note is a series that you can take far, potentially, if you manage to stay as true as possible to the characters. Otherwise, it can get very difficult -- for example, summoning your versions of L and Light will not be an easy thing to accomplish, because they are Level-12 (Tier-5) monsters. There are many more useful monsters in the game that can be summoned much more easily, because they are Tier-3 or lower.

[gangster yo4]

in a way if you tried to attack l or light in real life what would happen is light has the deathnote all he needs is your name which is dislayed on every card plus for L no one knows who he is noone can kill him apart from light and shinigami and misa plus again l is the worlds best detective what stops him from killing someone without people noticing

[Xi-3]

Better detectives or detecting skills, gangster yo4: it's not as if they're the best in the world, or even invincible -- and then again, even God Cards are not invincible. L does not have any combat feats or feats of strength, so I do not understand how you think he can destroy anything. His only weapon is his intelligence, and his method is psychological warfare. As for Light, he does not possess the Shinigami Eyes, so he needs to wait for someone to reveal his or her name before he can use the Death Note. Due to the Fourth Wall, he will not be aware of the names on the cards, nor of the players.

Even as they are, there are cards that can beat them: you have not created any "lollie (what is this, anyway?)" cards with which to keep "L" on the field. Witness "Raiten Sousou Negi Springfield" and "Magister Magi Negi Springfield" from my revised Ala Alba Set: When they battle DARK- or LIGHT-Types they gain half their ATK before Damage Calculation. That would no doubt tip the battle in their favour. Your cards' effects can also be negated once they are on the Field (I have created many monsters that do this). Their Special Summons can be negated to prevent them getting to the Field -- and because they are Level-12 monsters they require many Tributes to be Normal Summoned. All this means that not only do these cards not realistically reflect the characters on which they are based, they are also far more vulnerable than you think.

[Expelsword - 黎明]

L does not have any combat feats or feats of strength

He knows Capoeira.
L and Light compete against regular humans in their series. I'm sure any one of the magicians in the YGO world could easilly magically determine their locations. Plus, a lot of card names are titled, rather than actual names. Marauding Captain's name is not actually Marauding Captain, and Blue Eyes' name is Kisara.
The worst part of all is that Light and L both prove they are not invincible when

Death Note Spoiler

They are effortlessly killed by Shinigami.

If you want to make L immune to attacks, that's fine, but his offensive power is very low against anything not human.
We aren't hating on you here, we're trying to explain how to make good cards.

Example card based on someone actually powerful

This card is based on http://starocean.wik...om/wiki/Lucifer
He is incredibly powerful, and could easilly crush almost all YGO monsters, but still, I gave him downsides to make him less ridiculous. He also functions as part of a whole archetype based on his organization, which your cards do not. They are randomly made with bizzarre effects that are confusing.

[Drewer]

You took two things from the anime, gangster ,the fact that nobody knows who L is and the fact that Light has the Death Note, but lets face it:
What is left of L once his identity is discovered? A really smart guy with a thing for candies?
The same with Light, without the Death Note he is just a crazy teenager.
also, there are lots of cards that can negate effects and summons, Honest could also kill those cards in case you attack with them.
so,the point here is: The are no such things as an invicible card,every card has a weakness of somehow and the same applies to these cards.

Do you want to make cards of you favorite animes? Go ahead do it,that is simply awesome.but dont simply take 2 things from the anime, turn them into teorically unstopabble shields and call it a day. No, research, think a lot, see what fits the character persona, make some balancing after deciding effects, and if you made a mistake and someone tells you,please listen, because there are always something new to learn. =)

[EdgedsEmode]

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When you are looking for the more vague terms, like "dressy casual" or "casual elegance", things get a little trickier. In fact, they will often really be hinting more about the reception compared to they are a hint about what to wear. (For instance, you could possibly expect to find a buffet rather than formal seated dinner.) I would suggest the men wear a suit or dressy slacks and a blazer, perhaps associated with a festively colored or patterned tie. The women should just wear what they have to would normally wear to a afternoon wedding, something like a pretty day dress with pearl wedding jewelry.

o High-necked: Lose the necklace (it'll compete) and instead pair an increased necked dress with a simple couple of earrings and an elegant bracelet in exactly the same stone. Or stack several bracelets in lieu of a wrist corsage. Remember to choose a piece which don't compete while using bold neckline with this dress. Shoulder-grazing earrings are a possibility here when they suit the dress's style. They'll be dramatic and sophisticated for sure!

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http://www.mmssq.com
http://www.mmssq.com/gemstones.html
http://www.mmssq.com/jewelry.html
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[Yagami-kun]

Do you know where the joke card thread is? I just can't see how it is here.

[The Great Milenko]

These guys are being nice. Your cards suck. Move them to joke cards or delete them. Really. And the wording? And the complete lack of originality. Normaly I'm not very harsh, but you're actully defending your cards!!! Like just except that your cards suck. Why would you actully defend them? Be like "Oh yeah, you guys are all clearly right. I'll move them to joke cards. I am a big fan of Death Note, a great show. Let's agree thet the show is awesome and just leave it at that." But here you are, telling them things about the show as if it proves thet your cards are good Yu-Gi-Oh! cards. It proves nothing!!! You've just shown why parts of these cards would make sense in relation to the show. They're saying that in addition to the show, you have to remember that you also have to be relevent to the FREAKING CARD GAME!!! After all, you are making CARDS!!! Just saying.

[Expelsword - 黎明]

If you want, you can expand on the mechanics I set for my Death Note example cards above, but as they are, your cards are unusable.