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A little something I decided to create. YCM fics may have been done before, but not based on the antics and problems it faces. So give it a read and come back with each new chapter. You won't regret it.

NOTE: Don't beg to be in this fic. If I feel you are a good fit for the fic, I will.

Chapter One: The Meeting

Chapter Two: Bitter-Sweet Reaction


Chapter Three: A Glimpse Into a Broken Man

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Strikeman, Y U no include Chris and .Rai?


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Strikeman, Y U no include Chris and .Rai?


The Agro incident was funny. Also, I'm not done with the fic.

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The Agro incident was funny. Also, I'm not done with the fic.

So was this the fic you wanted people to beta read?


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So was this the fic you wanted people to beta read?


Just the first chapter, but yea. I'm a bit paranoid about what I post, so I had people beta read what I had. Still need to start the second chapter.

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Put me in the second chapter XD.


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the Aggro bit was funny, i'm glad i caught the hilarity that day. i liked the first chapter. There isn't any chance that i can be in there at some point?

This is as far as you go. Your life points will soon be reduced to 0, and your life will be dust. It over. The heart is pain. The heart that humans used to believe in hold this pain. All your wishes that you've ever had, are all just pain. How worthless! Your hearts are what caused the future to be destroyed. Little Boy, this is Despair... Turn End. - Aporia


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Surprised this is getting good reviews. And I'll think about it

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This is very good, and the bit with aggro was quite funny.

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Yeah, this is definitely one of those fics I just want to keep reading. The part with Agro is surprisingly funny, considering I wasn't there at the time. Also, any chance of me appearing?

The Ruler of Shotoku

Yes, we get it. YCM is a terrible place full of terrible people, half of which play a terrible card game made by a terrible company that does terrible things in a terrible world.

It sucks.


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This is good stuff Strikey. :o Kill the Treehouse! *shotgunned* Any chance I could be in it? Pwetty pweaze? D:

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Hmm a very good start with the fic.

Hope to see much more from this soon.

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Wasn't really expecting too much from this, seeing most of these kinds of fics don't have too much of a plot, but I was fairly impressed. As everyone has said, the part with Agro was pretty funny, hoping to see more of that throughout the fic. Can't wait to see where this is going! Looking forward to the next chapter.

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You're lack of spaces between hyphens makes me feel claustrophobic.

But yeah, nothing more hilarious than trolling terribads.

Also, a quick note for your future plan on including the Hotel in the fic: I carry an axe that extends on a long chain, and I can ignite it at will. Its name is Kevin, and it speaks in the form of voices in others' heads.

But yeah, I like this. Along with Jake's DEF sequel, this might be one of few fics I plan to keep reading.

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...not sure what to think.
I've seen starts like this before.

As said before though...disturbing lack of Cifer/Yankee DX

Edited by Cifer, 20 July 2012 - 10:26 PM.


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Don't worry Yankee, you're on the appearance list. Thar, thanks for the review.

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Absolutely loved reading this!
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Personify me as a WarGreymon. (Huge ass Claws, can fly, ect.)


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And word to the wise Striker, try not to give Aggro(my Night Guardian)the short end of the stick here XD

Only kidding ^^;

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Agro will get more face time. Gotta have some humor in the beginning.

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