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[Sethers]

I posted these a long time ago in the realistic section, and I just recently improved them.
Hope you like them!
*I do not own any of the pictures*

Monsters:
9-headed Serpent form the Deep Sea

When a "Deep Sea" monster's attack is negated; Special Summon this card from your hand or deck. Once per turn send the top card of your deck to the Graveyard. If it is a WATER monster, add that card to your hand.

Angler from the Deep Sea

When this card is normal summoned, Send the top card of your deck to the Graveyard. If it is a WATER monster special summon it during your next Standby Phase.

Fleet from the Deep Sea

Once per turn you send the top card of your deck to the graveyard. If it is a WATER monster this card can attack directly. If this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent, place this card on top of your deck.

Hatchling from the Deep Sea

If this card was sent from your deck to the Graveyard by a "Deep Sea" monster's effect: Special summon this card in face-up attack position, then draw 1 card.

Small Fish from the Deep Sea

When a "Deep Sea" monster is normal summoned: Special summon this card in face-up attack position from your hand. This card cannot be used as a synchro material monster the turn you activated this effect.

Strangler Eel from the Deep Sea

You may Send the top card of your deck to the graveyard to special summon this card in face-up attack position from your hand. If the discarded card was a WATER monster, double this card's attack. This card cannot attack the turn you activate this effect.

Deep Sea Nightwatcher


Synchros:
Hammerhead from the Deep Sea


1 "Small Fish from the Deep Sea" + 1 or more Non-Tuner WATER monsters
Once per turn you may place 1 WATER monsters you control back on top of your deck, if you do so, this card gains 200 ATK.

Frost the Deep Sea Spirit


1 "Fish from the Deep Sea" + 2 or more Non-Tuner WATER monsters
When this card is Synchro Summoned place all of your face- up WATER Monsters on top of your deck in any order. Once per turn you may send the top 2 cards of your deck to the Graveyard. If both of them are WATER monsters this card can attack directly. No other monsters may attack this turn.

Alright that's all. I don't have any Spells or Traps, but I think these hold up on their own.
Suggestions are welcome.

[Nghtwing]

Man, Discarding and more discard. With a Deck like this you would lose the duel quickly by having no cards to draw! :/
Some of those cards are a GREAT Support for WATER Decks, but all of them together would waste too many cards! :/
7,5/10 for this
But other thing wrong is the OCG... Most common error I've seen is that "special summon", "normal summon", etc... are actually "Special Summon" "Normal Summon" "Summoned" etc...
The word "deck" is in fact "Deck".
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There is an EXCELENT tutorial named "The Grammar Thread" (or something like this) I recommend you to read it
Keep on the hard work man... I may be a GREAT Cardmaker!

[Winged Kuriboh lv10000]

it look pretty good

[Sethers]

Bump. New changes and cards.