PrimeAceJohn Posted July 29, 2012 Report Share Posted July 29, 2012 So I made this new deck called the 'Orphic Wings' that's for my fanfic. I know some of the pics are overused, but I like the drawings a lot so I just had to use them. Please comment and rate, (1-10 or 1/10), and tell me suggestions on the cards. Tell me what should be limited or not limited and what should be fixed and give examples. Please give me an honest opinion on what you think. Thanks for reading, and enjoy:) [img]http://i.imgur.com/klKnd.jpg[/img] LORE: Only once, you can discard 1 card from your hand to negate and destroy 1 of your opponent's spell cards. [img]http://i.imgur.com/SpjWN.jpg[/img] LORE: Only once, you can discard 1 card from your hand to negate and destroy 1 of your opponent's trap cards. [img]http://i.imgur.com/3xxRr.jpg[/img] LORE: During battle phase, this card gains 300 ATK for each level 3 or lower 'Orphic' monsters on your side of the field. [img]http://i.imgur.com/zNGL1.jpg[/img] LORE: When this card battles a defense position monster, inflct piercing damage. [img]http://i.imgur.com/5iOxN.jpg[/img] LORE: Once per turn, if your opponent controls at least 1 monster on their side of the field, all other 'Orphic Wing' monsters you control gain 200 ATK until the end phase. This card cannot attack the turn it uses its effect. [img]http://i.imgur.com/47APn.jpg[/img] LORE: When this card battle with one of your opponent's monster with less ATK then this card, negate it effect and instead of it sent to the graveyard, remove it from play. [img]http://i.imgur.com/nBkPW.jpg[/img] LORE: When this card is summoned, you can send 1 'Orphic Wing' monster in your graveyard to your hand. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the graveyard, draw 2 cards from your deck. [img]http://i.imgur.com/awZvx.jpg[/img] LORE: During the turn this card was summoned, if you control another face-up 'Orphic' monster on your side of the field, your opponent must reveal 1 random card in their hand. If the card was a trap card, send it to the graveyard. [img]http://i.imgur.com/sl3S3.jpg[/img] LORE: During your opponent's battle phase, you can negate 1 attack that targets this card. If you control another 'Orphic Wing' on your side of the field, this card can negate two attacks. [img]http://i.imgur.com/v0Ywh.jpg[/img] LIMITED - 1 LORE: This card can only be used as a synchro material for the synchro summon of a 'Orphic Wing' Synchro monster. When this card is summoned and you control one other face-up 'Orphic Wing' monster, draw 1 card. [img]http://i.imgur.com/eVr03.jpg[/img] LORE: When this card is destroyed and is removed from the field, you can remove 1 other 'Orphic Wing' monster in your graveyard to destroy the monster who destroyed this card, or, if this was destroyed to a card effect, you can remove 1 other 'Orphic Wing' from your graveyard to negate and destroy another spell/trap on the field. [img]http://i.imgur.com/Bcz24.jpg[/img] LORE: If this card is used as synchro material for the special summoning of a 'Orphic Wing' Synchro monster, you gain life points equal to half the ATK of the Synchro monster. [img]http://i.imgur.com/kldj0.jpg[/img] LORE: You can special summon this card, (from your hand), if you control a face-up 'Orphic Wing' monster. you can destroy this face-up card to destroy 1 face-up spell/trap on the field. [img]http://i.imgur.com/MlLww.jpg[/img] LORE: 1 "Orphic Wing" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters For each spell/trap you control, inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent. This card cannot attack the turn it uses it effect. [img]http://i.imgur.com/kn9Oc.jpg[/img] LORE: 1 "Orphic Wing" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters Once per turn, you can negate the effect of 1 spell/trap card. If you do, you can draw 1 card. [img]http://i.imgur.com/jIAaW.jpg[/img] LORE: 1 "Orphic Wing" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters When this card attacks one of your opponent's defense position monster, remove it from play, negating its effect. During the end phase, inflict 700 points of damage for each defense position monster this card destroyed this turn. [img]http://i.imgur.com/s6Kgv.jpg[/img] 1 "Orphic Wing" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters Once per turn, you can inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent for each 'Orphic Wing' monster you control. This cannot attack the turn it uses its effect. [img]http://i.imgur.com/Wdt2U.jpg[/img] LORE: Once per turn, you can negate one of your opponent's attacks by sending 1 'Orphic Wing' monster to your deck. If you have no more 'Orphic Wing' monsters in your graveyard, destroy this card. PLEASE give feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MK-ultra Posted July 29, 2012 Report Share Posted July 29, 2012 some off the card effects wording is off but past that not a bad archtype feels like its missing something though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimeAceJohn Posted July 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2012 Yeah, I didn't finish all of it yet....this is just the main ones...and yeah, i still need to edit.BumpBump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister E Posted July 29, 2012 Report Share Posted July 29, 2012 6/10, good cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimeAceJohn Posted July 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2012 [quote name='Mister E' timestamp='1343598425' post='5992138'] 6/10, good cards. [/quote] Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimeAceJohn Posted July 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2012 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nimigoha Posted July 30, 2012 Report Share Posted July 30, 2012 I would say about 8/10. The art may be overused, but that doesn't matter. The cards are good and seem to fit nicely. A little wording fix would help, and maybe some more spell cards, but otherwise it's very solid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimeAceJohn Posted August 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2012 buuuuuuuuumppppp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Tim Posted August 2, 2012 Report Share Posted August 2, 2012 [quote name='MK-ultra' timestamp='1343584146' post='5991932'] some off the card effects wording is off but past that not a bad archtype feels like its missing something though [/quote] What's missing is the lack off connection throughout the archetype. What do these card's have in their effects, that is similar or the same? Not that much, good artwork selection but I think you should rethink the set and make it connect and flow together better 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimeAceJohn Posted August 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2012 Bumpity bump bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Tim Posted August 13, 2012 Report Share Posted August 13, 2012 [quote name='Admiral Tim' timestamp='1343865891' post='5994898'] What's missing is the lack off connection throughout the archetype. What do these card's have in their effects, that is similar or the same? Not that much, good artwork selection but I think you should rethink the set and make it connect and flow together better 5/10 [/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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