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Posted Image is it balanced or not rate it 1 out of 10

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Broken.

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how bout banish 2

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Broken.

Rather than claiming its 'broken', try and suggest a fix for it.

OT: I'm not one to point out if a card is broken or not as i'm useless at that, but the concept seems solid and interesting.

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OT: I'm not one to point out if a card is broken or not as i'm useless at that, but the concept seems solid and interesting.

How can you judge cards if you don't know about the game?

With a lack of restrictions, nothing stops me from banishing spells or traps that I won't be using again for a costless draw.
Tons of monsters now like being banished, and there's quite a few ways to bring them back, unlike olden times.
Level 4 with low ATK makes it spammable too.

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i rate it 7-10 because circulation is like "limited edition" or "1st edition" and i would have made the defense higher.

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fix Posted Image

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"Once per turn, you can banish 1 Pyro-Type monster from your Graveyard to draw 1 card."
That's much more controlled.

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Expel, wrong way to fix it. You used the old Card Grammar.

Once per turn: You can banish 1 Pyro-Type monster from your Graveyard; draw 1 card

It looks a bit fun to use, but I personally wouldn't use it. Still, it gives its Type well needed draw power. Maybe make it FIRE monsters?

Card Grammar: 5/10
Balance: 8/10
Usefulness in Deck: 9/10
Total: 22/30

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Expel, wrong way to fix it. You used the old Card Grammar.

Which is technically correct.
I think NCG looks stupid expecially on Dark Worlds, oh, my god.

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I've seen them. The only exception to the good of NCG.

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im going to post here my other cards because i dont want to make another topic and ill turn it soon into archetype.
ok here are cards


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effect:Once per turn: You can banish 1 Pyro-Type monster from your Graveyard;special summon 2
lizardion tokens (0atk/0def pyro lv2) those tokens cannot be used for tribute summon or set.When this card is banished discard 1 random card from your opponent's hand.


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eff:When this card in your graveyard is banished; destroy one set spell/trap card your opponent controls.You can send this card from your hand to graveyard;during your next standby phase special summon a pyro-type monster with 1500 or less atk from your hand

pls rate those!1 of 10 and ill soon add more to

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look my other post devil archetype




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