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story 1


Story 2


Story 3


Story 4


Story 5


story 6 NEW


And here is the YCM fanfic using the info from the questions I sent out. I also included 2 old stories based on things that happened on th Status Bar. Enjoy.


EDIT- Since this is so popular, I'm going to conitnue writing stories.

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It's not the same without sexual innuendos... or at least something to ship...

Still, I applaud you for trying but it's just good... not suggestive...

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It neads moar innuandios. Still...I'm in a fiiic :D And I'm the first to use the machine too~
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Reading this made me smile. Did what it set out to and did very well. I enjoyed.

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Nothing is better than laughing at myself. Well done indeed. These shorts really do bring some humor to this place.

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Nothing is better than laughing at myself. Well done indeed. These shorts really do bring some humor to this place.


Thank you. And thank you to everyone who has commented and read so far.

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Story four was hilarious


Not just because I featured (although I enjoyed doing so, though why do I not get a cool weapon?!) but was just generally hilarious. And well written, waiting for Koko to come into it biding her time until she got back at the end.


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Story four was amazing, and kept me smiling all the way through. Thanks for writing that.

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Really? You cook me and give me pie to forgive? That is hilarious. Actually does sound like something I would do too! xD

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I changed my avi to a Fuya one in honour of this story and will follow it with excitement.

Good job so far, I laughed at chapter 4 (and 3 to a lesser extent).
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Thank you so much everyone. It really means a lot. Thank you. I have half of story 5 up. I would finish it tonight, but I'm falling asleep at my laptop. I need some sleep. I'll finish it tomorrow. Sorry about the inconvinience.

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But sleep is for the wea-

It's alright, take your time. :D
It's better to write something decent rather than rushing it.

And this site seriously needs more of these things.
It's mostly lols and ego-boosting for the people who are included, but people like them and they're entertaining.=o

I just read your Desu x Alice fanfic and my reaction was mostly

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Number 1 is an alright premise. It might have even the promise of turning into a full fledged fic. YCM-ers picking and choosing different anime-verses to go into. It'd be a bit problematic since not everyone knows every anime, or doesn't know it that well so it's appeal might be limited.

Story 2 is, obviously, just pretty much a scene lifted from Spongebob, except for the ending where "Pinhead Larry" gets cake and then... something about a rocket launcher and station wagons.

Story 3 is really, really stupid. It's not as bad as Story 2, which is both stupid AND unoriginal, but it's still pretty... bad. The problem is just it's random for the sake of random. Some random guy is being bothered by some other random guys and then... nothing really happens.

Story 4 is kind of dumb, but not too bad. Two random guys ruin everything for the 9 other people in this story, and then a 10th person ruins their s***. At least it has a clear beginning, middle section, and ending.

Story 5 is kind of... just feels like a waste. Like, Jord's metal-detecting and he finds a box, but nothing ever becomes of it. Likewise, Desu seems some girls playing volleyball, but nothing ever becomes of that either. The girls go tanning, but none of that is important to the plot, and then Burning Soul gets possessed by a number. The end? The whole story is nothing but a series of barely connected events that all lead up to nothing. It's a complete waste of time.

Rankings?

4 > 1 >>> 5 >>>> 3 >>> 2

But that's not saying much.


Biggest problem of these:

There's lots and lots of characters, but no characterization. All the characters are easily interchangeable with any other character in the story.

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My Little Busters ='[

Not a critic so I can't really say much, but these stories seem random like Carnival Phantasm. However, that had prior things to base the characters on but for this, some members don't know others, making it difficult.

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i can't wait to see the rest of Story 5...to see what Number i got possessed by, it should be interesting

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Story 5 is now done. I will eithe rupdate again tommorrow or sometime this weekend. Again, sorry about the delay on Story 5.

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hmm...so it ended up being Number 91, i might've guessed that whilst reading the bit about storm clouds and such. (when reading the first half, i thought i was possessed by Number 96 lol) Although whilst i was reading the story, i could actually relate considering i hide a darker side which loves destroying stuff

This is as far as you go. Your life points will soon be reduced to 0, and your life will be dust. It over. The heart is pain. The heart that humans used to believe in hold this pain. All your wishes that you've ever had, are all just pain. How worthless! Your hearts are what caused the future to be destroyed. Little Boy, this is Despair... Turn End. - Aporia


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hmm...so it ended up being Number 91, i might've guessed that whilst reading the bit about storm clouds and such. (when reading the first half, i thought i was possessed by Number 96 lol) Although whilst i was reading the story, i could actually relate considering i hide a darker side which loves destroying stuff


Funny thing is, it was supposed to be Number 56: Goldrat, but I decided to change it and just hit randomize the Numbers we have. 91 was the first that came up. Sorry if Story 5 was a bit dry. Story 6 is going to have an interasting surprise.

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Why the actual f*** are you trying to ship me and Koko? ._.

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Why the actual f*** are you trying to ship me and Koko? ._.


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