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[Kenue]

A card I made for the anime Black Rock Shooter. It's my first card I made on YCM. Hope you like it!

Effect

Activate this effect during either player's turn, when an attack is declared involving this card and an opponents Monster. Battle Damage to both players from this battle becomes 0 and, after Damage Calculation, that opponent's monster is banished.

Any comments? I would like to know how I did and how I can improve.

EDIT: Here is the new card Ive made please view and compare and tell me if I made any improvements.

New Card

You can activate this effect during either Player's turn, When this card Battles, the Battle Damage to both players becomes 0. After Damage Calculation, If the Opponents monster was not destroyed by battle, Banish it.

-- Thanks to ~shadow~ for my OCG corrections and April and The Phantom for bringing to my attention my card needed some image and level changes.

[April and The Phantom]

You could probably use some better artwork. Some images just turn out fuzzy(usually due to size) and don't work. If you can't find an image that doesn't look fuzzy on ycm, you can always use that alternate site everyone is using now-a-days. Or that program everyone used to use. Both of those things can use a portion of an image so that it will be smaller, and therefore less fuzzy. But then, the alternative site has ugly-looking cards and the program requires you to upload each card individually, so it might just be easier to just find a better image.
As far as balance, I think you could make do with 5/6 stars. Since the card is still destroyed by battle, not taking battle damage probably isn't worth relatively weak monster that requires two Tributes.
I'm not sure whether or not you want OCG corrected, but if you do, I can try to help with that.

[~Pkmn Trainer Red~]

OCG correction

You can activate this effect during either Player's turn, When this card Battles, the Battle Damage to both players becomes 0. After Damage Calculation, If the Opponents monster was not destroyed by battle, Banish it.

It's a decent card, but it would be better with some support, such as Spells/traps.

[Kenue]

Thanks, both of you. I'll look into the image problem and try to find one that has better quality.

EDIT: I'll also correct my OCG and repost the card when I fix the problems...

[April and The Phantom]

OCG correction

You can activate this effect during either Player's turn, When this card Battles, the Battle Damage to both players becomes 0. After Damage Calculation, If the Opponents monster was not destroyed by battle, Banish it.

It's a decent card, but it would be better with some support, such as Spells/traps.

Actually, I thin the effect would be more along the lines of:

OCG

The controller of this card does not receive Battle Damage involving this card and an Opponent's Monster. When either you or your Opponent declares an attack involving this card, destroy your Opponent's monster after Damage Step.

I'm not as sure about the second half, but I'm just about 100% positive that the first half of the effect is how it's supposed to be worded.

[DarkS33d]

I really like it, and I have been watching this series. I like them both.