Alpakha Posted October 1, 2012 Report Share Posted October 1, 2012 Some of the card pics might be bad (as dino pics are soooo hard to find). Alot of them i had to rneder and add a background, so if the background doesn't fit... you know why (as i suck at doing these graphic stuff). Overall, i am really happy with this, but i am kinda wor.ried that it may abuse laggia [spoiler=Monsters] [img]http://i.imgur.com/OdrhT.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore]If this card is returned from the field to your Deck, you can send 1 "Tinisaur" monster from your Deck to the Graveyard. While this card is in your Graveyard, you can attach it to 1 "Tinisaur" Xyz Monster you control as Xyz Material. You can only use the effect of "Tinisaur Charge" once per turn.[/spoiler] [img]http://i.imgur.com/j6V7i.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore]If a face-up Dinosaur-Type monster you control is returned to the Deck, you can Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard. Once per turn, you can target up to 2 "Tinisaur" monsters on the field and raise their Levels by 1.[/spoiler] [img]http://i.imgur.com/M324C.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/P78ZX.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/Pk3l5.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore]If this card is returned from the field to your Deck, you can send 1 "Tinisaur" monster from your Deck to the Graveyard. During either player's turn, if you control a face-up "Tinisaur" monster, you can banish this card from your Graveyard to target 1 card on the field and return it to the Deck. You can only use the effect of "Tinisaur Pounce" once per turn.[/spoiler] [img]http://i.imgur.com/sxAxz.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/Y18ow.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore]You can Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard by returning 1 Dinosaur-Type monster you control back to the Deck. Once per turn, by returning 1 "Tinisaur" monster you control back to your Deck, you can return up to 2 cards on the field to the hand.[/spoiler] [img]http://i.imgur.com/o0D7n.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore]You can Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard by returning 1 Dinosaur-Type monster you control back to the Deck. Once per turn, you can target up to 2 "Tinisaur" monsters you control and raise their level by 1. Comments: Sweesh and Swoosh are similar cuz.... well just cuz (maybe they're siblings). Pounce and Swing might seem redundant but swing is to make combos/get rid of opponent's cards whereas pounce is used to disrupt your opponent's plays.[/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Spell/Trap] [img]http://i.imgur.com/EXaow.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/5kbHr.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler=The Xyz] [img]http://i.imgur.com/eE59t.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore]2 Level 3 Dinosaur-Type monsters When this card battles, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to destroy the card this card is battling before Damage Calculation. When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can attach 1 "Tinisaur" monster from your Graveyard to this card as Xyz Material.[/spoiler] [img]http://i.imgur.com/QckhG.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore]2 Level 4 "Tinisaur" monsters Once per turn, you can Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to have all face-up "Tinisaur" monsters you control gain 500 ATK. If this card is returned to the Extra Deck, Special Summon all monsters currently attached to this card as Xyz Material.[/spoiler] [img]http://i.imgur.com/rrjCL.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]2 Level 5 Dinosaur-Type monsters[/size][/font][/color] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]You can Xyz Summon this card, during either player's turn, using 1 "Tinisaur" Xyz Monster (any Xyz Material attached to that card also become Xyz Material on this card). If this card were to be destroyed by your opponent's card effect, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to negate and destroy that card. Once per turn you can target 1 card on both sides of the field and return them to the Decks.[/spoiler][/spoiler][/size][/font][/color] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]Please rate, review, and enjoy.[/size][/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted October 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 2, 2012 >.< bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted October 3, 2012 Report Share Posted October 3, 2012 I'm not really in the mood to read all these atm, but I'll probably get around to it. As for the pictures, they are mostly all pretty good actually. The only pic I saw that I really thought needed changed was "Swing". The XYZ's are not showing up, maybe just make them here on YCM, just cause they arent black doesnt mean we don't know what they're supposed to be ^^. "Charge" - I don't know how good the Xyz's are for this set, but giving them 1 extra material each turn seems very powerful, maybe after it has used its effect it gets shuffled back into the deck instead of sent back to the graveyard? "Clawz" - Based off these first 2 cards returning cards to the deck seems like what this set is loosely based off of, so having his first effect and being able to target up to 2 monsters (each turn) to edit their level (permanently) seems a little powerful, at least compared to monsters with a similar second effect. Possibly just change it to target 1 monster per turn instead of up to 2? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted October 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2012 Xyz updated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted October 5, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2012 [quote name='Kvn523' timestamp='1349221095' post='6036745'] >.< bump [/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted October 21, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2012 [quote name='AznKvn' timestamp='1349403643' post='6038126'] [/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted October 21, 2012 Report Share Posted October 21, 2012 These are an interesting take on dinosaurs, in fact they are unique for almost anything (some similarities to Glads). The seem to complement one another well and have good artwork to boot. I particularly like the Sweesh and Swoosh Tinisaurs, the effects they have are perfect as far as I am concerned. Note: One of your cards says "Tinysaur" in its effect not "Tinisaur" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted October 21, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2012 [quote name='gimmepie' timestamp='1350847358' post='6049982'] Note: One of your cards says "Tinysaur" in its effect not "Tinisaur" [/quote] Fail >.<, I'll change it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted October 21, 2012 Report Share Posted October 21, 2012 aren't these just the ones you submitted for the low level archetype contest? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted October 21, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2012 [quote name='AixDivadis' timestamp='1350853507' post='6050067'] aren't these just the ones you submitted for the low level archetype contest? [/quote] Yes, but this is off topic so if you want to converse about this then plz just pm me instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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