First card Exodia support

[jarkono41]

[Aix]

Whoa... an Exodia card that's not about playing solitaire... almost. It is almost perfectly balanced, so congrats on that, however, the design makes it so that it could abuse stall. To solve this I would suggest preventing you from having face-up Spell Cards when you use this card and also make him have to battle in order to get the counter. Then, make it so that to activate the last effect, he must be removed from the field by your opponent (either by battle or effect) to further encourage interaction and then, if you do all that, I suppose it would not hurt to lower the required counters to 2.

[Morgan LeFlay]

My thoughts:

 

I definitely think the name and picture fit something that could be used as Exodia support. I also think that you might be on the right track. With that being said, I think it's actually a bit underpowered, and there are definitely easier ways to add 2 Exodia pieces to your hand. I think that it would be hard to protect it for 2 of your opponent's turns in order to give it 3 counters. It would require a deck build arount this guy, and there are just easier methods of doing it.

 

+ that it can search a "Forbidden" monster. You could grab Exodius, as well as Disciple of the Forbidden Spell. This card might be interesting if you could grab any "Forbidden" cards (and not specifically monsters) as that would add about 7 more targets.

 

- that it's just too slow. I might shorten it to 2 materials and make it so that you can't detach the turn it is Summoned (and requiring 2 counters to activate).

 

Wording (Just in case you want it worded better):

 

3 Level 3 monsters

 

XYZ Material Monster should be Xyz Material. Semicolon goes after the cost, not a colon.

 

"Place" after the semicolon should be "place" (no capitalization).

 

"Forbidden" counter should be called Forbidden Counter (no quotes, capitalized Counter).

 

Monster should be replaced with "card" (also note that if you use the term "monster" it is not upper cased)

 

Graveyard should be uppercased. "add" (as well as all cards after semicolons) should be lowercase.

 

Final wording:

 

3 Level 4 monsters

Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; place 1 Forbidden Counter on this card. While this card has 3 Forbidden Counters: You can send this face-up card to the Graveyard; add up to 2 "Forbidden" monsters from your Deck to your hand.