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[spoiler=Merrick]Name: Merrick Seattle
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Personality: Concern runs rampant in Merrick mind. He feels obligated to do his part for the Demon Slayer, but he also feels as though he's been painted as a target, not only by the demons, but also by the DIADS and the Hell Guild, who both want him so they can force him to pave the way to his mother, who they've been after for the past few years now. Then there's his half-sister Jayden, who he cares for very much and wants to ensure is alive and well, but also has to fear getting attacked by out of a pure grudge. Still, Merrick tries to put all this past him, and his efforts are more likely to achieve this when no-one brings it up. Merrick tends to distance himself from most others, and has difficulty putting his trust where its due. He's also hesitant to speak of his past, just cause of the fact that it's a rather touchy subject for him personally. But he's certainly not afraid to speak his mind, whether he's almost at his breaking point or even when someone's just being a complete jerk. Interestingly, Merrick seems to know everything about Jayden, even though the two have never met in a single moment of their lives. This is speculated to be because of Merrick's innate abilities as an Arcana, but whether or not there's anything more to it than that is unknown.

Weapon: The Mighty Foot...work.
Ability: Merrick has the ability to transfer any pain he feels in combat towards whomever inflicts that pain, as a curse towards said being. This is the main curse that Merrick tends to run before getting straight into physical battle, but as an Arcana, he's capable of running several others.

 

On top of that, Merrick will learn the spell necessary to revive a human into an undead being, but [acronym='No prizes for guessing what it is.']a certain event[/acronym] needs to take place first.
Class: [acronym='He fights similarly to a Berserker, however.']Arcana[/acronym]
Faction: Demon Slayer
Appearance: About the only visual clue to Merrick's half-demon heritage is his black eyes and a paler coloured skin to most, but apart from that, he doesn't appear any different from your typical Japanese high school student. He even has the same frame as the average 17-year-old boy, and stands at about 5' 10". Only the clothes on his back separate Merrick from the rest; he almost always wears a formal attire wherever he goes, in the form of a tuxedo.

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Bio: Jayden and Merrick Seattle both have the same human father, but unlike Jayden, who also has her own human mother, Merrick's mother is a succubus, who is not only hated by the other demons, but is also wanted by the DIADS for crimes committed on the human populace, and has a bounty on her head from the Hell Guild. Currently, Merrick is on a mission to find his father again, and meet his half-sister Jayden for the first time, but in the meantime he has to fend for himself. Merrick was raised by her mother alone for the first 10 years of his life, before he had enough of being dragged around from place to place, and decided to leave her. The last time the two were seen together was with the Doji Clan's, many members of whom Merrick's mother began to become well acquainted with. However, Merrick's mother had been on the run for some time, taking Merrick with her as she went about her nomadic lifestyle. It wasn't until Merrick found out the reason why his mother was on the run and that most of the crimes charged against her were true that he finally took a stand, unwilling to risk being punished for her actions any more.

 

Merrick had made his way to the heart of Tokyo, where he was confronted with the Ouroborous first-hand. Thankfully, these demons had paid no mind to him, perhaps because they were unaware he was there to begin with. Merrick slipped out the way he came and continued to find a safe place, knowing that he could be hunted at any moment. That's when he found the Demon Slayer Guild. Still, Merrick was wary of the Demon Slayers, knowing that the Hell Guild was hiding their true intentions under the same façade. But he stuck with them for now. After all, it was better than having to keep an eye out for both the DIADS and the demons...[/spoiler]

 

[spoiler=Jayden (WIP)]Name: Jayden Seattle
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Personality: Apparently Jayden was trained to cast her emotions to the side and make her decisions based purely on logic. We say apparently because her emotions still tend to show through anyway. And although going with her gut has paid off in several occasions, there's a good reason why she was trained in the art of emotionless; her emotions tend to interfer with the telekinetic abilities granted by her power suit. This may explain why she struggles to control it. However, although the DIADS agents are meant to be after Masune Masashira due to the massive bounty on his head, Jayden has a different target in mind, and she won't rest easy while that target remains out in the open. Jayden's determination to her job as a DIADS agent is unprecedented, and she'll do everything she can to aid the task-force as a whole.
Weapon: Jayden's Caladbolg has yet to take form, but in the meantime, she uses a standard Dragunov SVD

 

The Manticore

Once it's unlocked, The Manticore will enter its 1st Stage, where it engulfs Jayden's forearm, wrist and hand of her right arm. A gargantuan tendon also grows on the other side of her elbow, and at the end grows a single eye, which has a reptilian pupil that shrinks and expands as it adjusts from close or far range. The Manticore itself appears as an elongated flesh-and-bone arm cannon, with the head of a lioness at the end of the "barrel", and wings on each side, presumably as further guidance of some sort, and the tail of a scorpion grows just behind the lioness' head to act as the bayonet. It also regurgitates shards of bone that look similar to the ammunition of your typical sniper rifle. To fire The Manticore, Jayden uses the same nerves she'd use to curl her right hand into a fist. The Manticore's birth leaves Jayden's left hand free to use a pistol.
Ability: Aside from the typical power suit goodies like superhuman strength and superhuman speed, Jayden is also blessed with telekinesis. This power happens to be engraved into her brain, so Jayden can strip off the power suit and whip on some civilian clothing, and still be able to cast telekinetic shenanigans. She doesn't have full control of it, however, and just so happens to have the worst luck whenever it runs amok. But if the DIADS scientists could fine-tune it...
Class: Sniper
Faction: DIADS
Appearance: With the power suit on, Jayden seems to stand at 6' 3", and weigh in at 231lbs. The suit itself is rather bulky though, so there's no doubt that's adding a bit of size to her. The suit is littered with green LED's, which blink at a speed that is dependant on her levels of telekinetic activity; obviously, the more amplified the telekinesis, the faster the LED's blink. The suit itself appears to be made of an amethyst-infused metal and a weave of spider silk that's genetically enhanced to be even more resilient than titanium, and is also handily fire retardant. Jayden's breasts have shown signs of rapid growth, and the armour around them is loosening as a result.

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Bio: Jayden Seattle used to have a good time growing up with her mother and father. They had always been nice to her, and never argued or anything. [/spoiler]

 

Thought I'd give myself a head start on both apps before continuing on with Merrick.

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@Stalfos: So Merricks pain reflector ability. Is that like an illusion of sorts? Because I noticed he is an Arcana class. Also, is Jayden going to have any actual abilities or just be a member of DIADS who uses a power suit to increase her speed and strength and such.

 

@Squid: It's better, but I still don't see a dynamic choice or change in his personality being made that would cause his Caladbolg to change.

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I know somethings will probably need editing, but I just wanted to get it out there, before I go off and do something else... >_>

 

[spoiler=Hibari] 

 

Name: Hibari Kuroshima

Age: 18

Gender: Male

 

Personality:  Though he may appear to be the strong silent type, Hibari is a very forward individual, often bluntly voicing his opinion no matter how rude it may be.  Due to his hatred of demons, Hibari’s battle style is highly aggressive, often using everything in his arsenal, in order to utterly obliterate his targets. This goes double for any encounters with his sister, in which he seems to abandon all reason, and will fight until his mind or body simply give out. Due to the incident in his past, Hibari is extremely sensitive about losing comrades, and I will do everything in his power to ensure that any person he is teamed up with, comes home alive. A Jack of all trades, Hibari’s only major flaws, are his weakness around women, and his hatred for anything related too Izumi. These are both direct consequences of the damage caused by Izumi’s rampage, but fortunately the former only serves as a minor hindrance in combat.

 

Weapon: Reito no sakura (Frozen cherry blossom)

Description: http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/3703/mikotoselementpf1.gif

Hibari's primary weapon, Its original form was that of a albino dagger, which was a direct reflection of Hibari's innocence. Finally taking the from above, when Hibari resolved to exact revenge upon his sister. The blade itself is always freezing cold, and it is said that any who attempt to wield this demonic weapon, shall be frozen on the spot, if it does not deem them worthy.  Reito no sakura contains an extremely powerful will, often able to subtly manipulate its wielder into doing its bidding.Those under its influence will begin to grow more demon like in appearance, sometimes morphing their bodies, to better suit the sword’s needs. The blade has a connection to Ryuketsu no sakura, but as of now only Izumi seems to know what the meaning behind it is. 

 

Abilities:

Water ejection: Hibari can expel a large amount of water from his mouth. The pressure of the attack varies from a light burst, to a bone crushing wave.

 

Ice Aura: Hibari has spent the majority of his life training his Ice aura, to the point of mastery. He is able to flash freeze his aura, or the moisture in the air, allowing him to use a plethora of techniques. The Ice created using his Hibari’s aura is able to survive a substantial amount of heat, but is still far from unmeltable. It should also be noted , that the use of Ice Aura is severely hindered in desert areas.

 

Shiva’s whisper: By focusing his energies into his breath, Hibari is able to exhale a blast of cold air, freezing anything unfortunate enough to be caught in it's chilling winds.

 

Frost Shrapnel: Hibari charges a large amount of his aura into any ice structure, causing it shatter, and send razor sharp shards of ice at the opponent.

 

Frost Dragon’s Dirge: By far the most destructive technique in his arsenal, Hibari gathers a large amount of frost Aura, before hurling it in the form of a large serpent like dragon. Once this attack lands, it explodes in a flurry of diamond like snow, that begins to freeze all that it comes into contact with. Though powerful, using this attack puts a large strain on the user’s body.

 

Glacial coffin: Hibari channels ice aura into his right hand, allowing him freeze whatever or whoever he comes in contact with, including other auras. Though, the time it takes to freeze an aura is directly related to how potent it is, and he is unable to freeze heat based attacks.

 

Class: Knight

Faction:The Demon Slayer Guild:

Appearance: http://img15.hostingpics.net/pics/965441saitohajimehakuouki249156965a.png

Bio: Hibari is one of two children, born from an affair between a mortal woman, and a Demon from the 9th circle.  Abandoned, he and his elder sister Izumi were constantly moved from one foster home to another, before finally ending up in the home of a large demon slayer clan. Recognizing the sibling’s potential as half-demons, the head of the Kuroshima clan chose to raise them as his own children.  The two spent the following 10 years undergoing intense training, learning the clan’s secret techniques, and even following the senior members on missions, in order to hone their skills.

 

As the level of these missions escalated, it became painfully obvious that Hibari was nowhere near as gifted as his sister. Izumi continued to travel higher above the clan’s social hierarchy, while Hibari was left struggling to break from his elder sister’s shadow. The gap in between two seemed to solidify as Izumi secured her seat as the next clans head, leaving Hibari with a strong sense of jealously that ultimately became the fuel for his training.

 

This continued for over a year, until the leader of the Kuroshima clan was suddenly overthrown by a small group of rebels, who were led by no other then Izumi. The future heir slaughtered nearly every single one of the clan’s high-ranking officials, seizing control of the entire operation in a single night. After being forced to watch his entire family fall, Hibari lashed out in a fit of rage, managing to defeat a small number of the rebel forces, before confronting Izumi. Drenched in the blood of their father, Izumi looked upon her brother with disgust, before offering him a warning. “Don’t be mistaken, I’m only sparing your life because you hold the Reito no sakura, the sister blade of my Ryuketsu no sakura.As Hibari was banished from the clan, his sister’s final words echoed within his mind.  “Your anger should allow the blade to grow nicely… Appear before me again, once you have brought the Rieto no sakura to its full potential, then I’ll allow you to end your pathetic existence. You could do that much, can’t you?” With a new found motivation, Hibari went off in search of power, finally stumbling upon the demon hunter's guild.

 

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[spoiler=Izumi] 

 

Name: Izumi Kuroshima

Age: 20

Gender: Female

Personality: The quote, “It’s always the quit ones…” is the best way to describe Izumi. Her docile appearance is the perfect mask to hide her unimaginable bloodlust. Cold and calculating, Izumi has demanded to be addressed only as “President” by her subordinates, and is known to have held the most executions in her short time as leader, then all the other clan heads combined.  When it comes to anything involving her younger brother, she becomes extremely dismissive, and slightly more irritable. Those who don’t know her well would assume it was because she held some kind of regret for the slaughter of her clan, but they couldn't be further from the truth. She actually find’s Hibari’s weakness disgusting, and is still only waiting for the day that he unlocks his swords power, in order to increase her own power.  

 

Weapon:  Ryuketsu no sakura.

Description: http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs42/f/2009/139/d/8/Light_Katana_by_Kaeru_the_legend.jpg

The sister blade to the Reito no sakura, which took on the from above, the night Izumi decided to take over her clan. The sword itself has no defined shape, due to it using the wielders aura to form a blade. When activated, the sword can extend up to three meters, making it deadly at a multitude of ranges. Unlike it's sister, this sword seems to have no voice at all, making it a simple tool to further the welders goals. It is said that it can only reach its full potential, when met with the Reito no sakura, making the Ryketsu no sakura an incomplete weapon.

 

Ability:

 

Master swordsmanship: Izumi is extremely capable with any bladed weapon, though swords are her specialty.   

 

Hybrid Aura: Plasma: By combining her Fire, and Lighting auras, Izumi can create the Plasma aura. Using this power, she is able to create, control, and Manipulate Plasma. This aura is highly unstable, and requires that the user be extremely calm, and focused.Being a mixture of both Fire and Lighting aura, Plasma user's are able to convert low level attacks of those elements, and direct them at the user. 

 

Brilliant dance: Judgement : Using her Plasma Aura, Izumi releases several lasers in the form oriental dragons. These dragons shine with a beautiful emerald light, and swim through the air as if they were alive, electrifying any inorganic matter they come in contact with to the point of disintegration. Any organic being unfortunate enough to be cought in this attack, will suffer sever electrical burns.. 

          Brilliant Dance: Judgement, 2nd step: A more powerful iteration of 'Judgement'. This technique uses a single massive Dragon, that coils around its target, crushing and vaporizing them. Izumi cannot make use of her Plasma Aura for a short time after using this attack.

 

 

Brilliant Dance: Purge : Izumi expels a super heated smoke screen that hangs in the air for an extended period. This bright green gas has minor acidic properties, and will melt objects that spend an excessive amount of time in its vial.

 

Brilliant Dance: Disavowal: Izumi makes use of heat absorbing Plasma, allowing her to flash freeze objects to a laser extent of that of an Ice Aura user. This is primarily used as a defensive technique.

 

 

Class: Knight (?)

 

Faction:  Kuroshima clan: A clan that was formerly ran by demon hunter's, but is now under the control of the half demon Izumi. Under her power, the clan has become a brutal, and businesslike organisation, making the majority of its profit's from mercenary work. Due to the major success of its operations, the Kuroshima clan now contains a very mixed pool of members, ranging from converted demon hunters, oriental, and even western demons.  There objective seems is unclear, but the seem to be raising money for something big.

 

Appearance: http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/149/3/0/shiki_samurai_shodown_by_labylaby-d3hj3g4.jpg

Bio: Izumi is one of two children, born from an affair between a mortal woman, and a Demon from the 9th circle.  Abandoned, her and her younger brother were constantly moved from one foster home to another, before finally ending up in the home of a small demon slayer clan. Recognizing the sibling’s potential as half-demons, the head of the Kuroshima clan chose to raise them as his own children.  The two spent the following 10 years undergoing intense training, learning the clan’s secret techniques, and even following the senior members on mission, in order to hone their skills.

 

As the level of these missions escalated, Izumi proved countless times, that she was far superior to her brother. As he was left to stand in her shadow, she continued to travel higher above the clan social ladder. While the gap in the two's power became wider, Izumi began to detest her brother's weakness. In a last ditch effort to motivate him to grow stronger, she accepted the tittle as the clan's heir, only to find that her brothers growth rate was still much to slow. In the time all time they he had been training,  she had already mastered the use of her Hybrid aura, while he still struggled with his single element. This was when Izumi first began to lose faith in her brother, and then in the clan's teachings. 

 

This continued for over a year, until Izumi led a rebellion against the current Kuroshima clan leader. With her strength, she easily defeated the majority of the resistance without making use of her Plasma aura, leaving the young Hibari as the only survivor of the main family. Casting him out, she waited for the day he would return, and she could finally complete her weapon.   

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@Stalfos: So Merricks pain reflector ability. Is that like an illusion of sorts? Because I noticed he is an Arcana class. Also, is Jayden going to have any actual abilities or just be a member of DIADS who uses a power suit to increase her speed and strength and such.

 

 

No, Merrick's pain reflecting ability is a curse. Sorta like Iron Maiden in Diablo II

 

And Jayden will still have her Caladbolg, but it'll remain in a dormant state until she actually dies and gets revived. Apart from that she is just a DIADS member in a power suit. The suit will give Jayden the power of telekinesis though, as well as the typical power suit goodies.

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