:^) Posted September 7, 2013 Report Share Posted September 7, 2013 Probably the last card I'm making for today. Once per turn, target 1 Pyro-Type monster in your Graveyard and Banish it. Inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the targeted monster's ATK. When this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, add 1 level 4 or lower Pyro-Type monster, except for "Flaming Fighter", from your Deck to your hand. OCG Fixes are welcome. Peace. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted September 7, 2013 Report Share Posted September 7, 2013 MAKE IT A FIRE FIST YEEEEEEAAAAH No please don't we have enough of those things already. The first effect ain't so cool yo: a big burn that can end games prematurely. No me gusta. I'd lower the burn to half the ATK. The second effect is pretty sweet: sangan for Pyros, pretty nice. The third effect reeks of abuse: mill it, synch up for it, Xyz it, whatever, you get it back anyways. Ever heard if Sinister Serpent? Thus is essentially a Sinister Serpent with a good effect. So yeah get rid if the last clause please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted September 7, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2013 MAKE IT A FIRE FIST YEEEEEEAAAAH No please don't we have enough of those things already. I didn't even realize... Fixing card. For the third effect, what if I added "by battle" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted September 7, 2013 Report Share Posted September 7, 2013 [quote name="Multiloquent" post="6269237" timestamp="1378570909"]I didn't even realize... Fixing card. For the third effect, what if I added "by battle"[/quote] Still not so cool because you're essentially feeding into pluses. Also, I forgot to say that you should prevent it from searching itself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted September 7, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2013 Still not so cool because you're essentially feeding into pluses. Also, I forgot to say that you should prevent it from searching itself. Removed 3rd effect and fixed 2nd effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted September 7, 2013 Report Share Posted September 7, 2013 Removed 3rd effect and fixed 2nd effect. Looks fine now. Keep up the good work :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted September 7, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2013 Looks fine now. Keep up the good work :D Thanks, you should check out my "Number 27: Sly Goblin" that I made. Apart from that, I'm heading off because tired af. Might stick around for 10 more minutes though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXxSe7eNxXx Posted September 7, 2013 Report Share Posted September 7, 2013 OCG Fix: Once per turn: You can target 1 Pyro-Type monster in your Graveyard; banish it, and if you do, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half that monster's original ATK. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard: Add 1 level 4 or lower Pyro-Type monster, except "Flaming Fighter", from your Deck to your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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