chaosreaper Posted October 28, 2013 Report Share Posted October 28, 2013 Broken Card is Broken, i really need help in balancing and rewording it to make it less text heavy. I would have preferred it to be No.6, but we already have OOParts Atlanthal D: Any help for a good image would be appreciated. Text - 2 or more (Max 5) level 4 or higher "Fortune Lady" monsters. This cards attribute is also treated as DARK, WATER, FIRE, EARTH and WIND. This cards ATK and DEF are equal to its Rank x 500. Increase this cards Rank by 1 during each of your Standby Phases (max 12). During either players turn; you can detach 1 xyz material from this card; activate one of the following effects depending on the attribute of the detached material - LIGHT - Special Summon 1 "Fortune Lady" Monster from your Deck or Graveyard. FIRE - Send 1 Monster your opponent controls to the Graveyard, and if it was Face-Up, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half its ATK. This card cannot attack the turn you use this effect. WIND - You can send Spell/Trap cards your opponent controls to the Graveyard Equal to the number of face-up "Fortune Lady" Monsters you control. WATER - Draw cards equal to this cards Rank divided by 2 (rounded Down). DARK - Increase the Level/Rank of all "Fortune Lady" Monsters you control by up to 2. This card cannot attack this turn. EARTH - Inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. Then you can Draw 1 card. If this card would be destroyed while it has a Xyz material: return it to your Extra Deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
William Wilder Posted October 31, 2013 Report Share Posted October 31, 2013 2 or more (Max 5) level 4 or higher "Fortune Lady" monsters. This cards attribute is also treated as a DARK, WATER, FIRE, EARTH and WIND attribute monster. This cards ATK and DEF are equal to its Rank x 500. Increase this cards Rank increased by 1 during each of your this cards controllers Standby Phases (to a maximum of 12). During either players turn; you can detach 1 xyz material from this card; activate one of the following effects depending on the attribute of the detached material - LIGHT - Special Summon up-to 1 "Fortune Lady" Monster from your Deck and/or Graveyard. FIRE - Send 1 Monster your opponent controls to the Graveyard, and if it was Face-Up, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half its ATK power. This card cannot attack the turn you use this effect. WIND - You can send Spell/Trap cards your opponent controls to the Graveyard Equal to the number of face-up "Fortune Lady" Monsters you control. WATER - Draw cards equal to this cards Rank divided by 2 (rounded Down). DARK - Increase the Level/Rank of all "Fortune Lady" Monsters you control by up to 2. This card cannot attack this turn. EARTH - Inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. Then you can Draw 1 card. If this card would be destroyed while it has a Xyz material: return it to your Extra Deck instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
........! Posted November 4, 2013 Report Share Posted November 4, 2013 Eeeeh, bit OP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chaosreaper Posted November 7, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2013 Eeeeh, bit OP. note i did say i need help re-wording and balancing it XD 2 or more (Max 5) level 4 or higher "Fortune Lady" monsters. This cards attribute is also treated as a DARK, WATER, FIRE, EARTH and WIND attribute monster. This cards ATK and DEF are equal to its Rank x 500. Increase this cards Rank increased by 1 during each of your this cards controllers Standby Phases (to a maximum of 12). During either players turn; you can detach 1 xyz material from this card; activate one of the following effects depending on the attribute of the detached material - LIGHT - Special Summon up-to 1 "Fortune Lady" Monster from your Deck and/or Graveyard. FIRE - Send 1 Monster your opponent controls to the Graveyard, and if it was Face-Up, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half its ATK power. This card cannot attack the turn you use this effect. WIND - You can send Spell/Trap cards your opponent controls to the Graveyard Equal to the number of face-up "Fortune Lady" Monsters you control. WATER - Draw cards equal to this cards Rank divided by 2 (rounded Down). DARK - Increase the Level/Rank of all "Fortune Lady" Monsters you control by up to 2. This card cannot attack this turn. EARTH - Inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. Then you can Draw 1 card. If this card would be destroyed while it has a Xyz material: return it to your Extra Deck instead. thans for th wording fixes. modding it now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
death00 Posted November 7, 2013 Report Share Posted November 7, 2013 if there's no pic it should be in written cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
........! Posted November 7, 2013 Report Share Posted November 7, 2013 note i did say i need help re-wording and balancing it XD thans for th wording fixes. modding it now. 1600 ATK is kinda low for a Level-6 Monster. Maybe 2000? 350 x 6 gives 2100. As for OCG errors, I don't see a whole lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chaosreaper Posted November 11, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2013 someone already helped me fix the ocg errors and its stats will be 6k atk and def at rank 12. light/fire 200per lvl, wind/water 300per lvl, dark earth 400 per lvl, so i gave this gal 500 per lvl. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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