Raymond Grover Posted February 22, 2014 Report Share Posted February 22, 2014 Target 1 face-up Xyz Monster you control; Special Summon from your Extra Deck, 1 "Magician" monster that is 1 Rank higher than that monster you control, by using it as the Xyz Material. (This Special Summon is treated as an Xyz Summon. Xyz Materials attached to it also become Xyz Materials on the Summoned monster.) After this card is activated, you can banish this card from your graveyard, and if you do, draw 2 cards. 3 Level 4 monsters When this card is Xyz Summoned: Add 1 Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. You cannot activate that card during the turn. Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material: Discard 1 card, then banish 1 card on the field. This card gains 500 ATK for each banished Spellcaster-Type monster. 4 Level 5 monsters This card gains 200 ATK for each Xyz Material attached to this card. If this card would be destroyed, you can detach 1 Xyz Material instead. Each time an Xyz Material is detached from this card; Draw 1 card, then banish 1 card your opponent controls. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raymond Grover Posted February 22, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2014 What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raymond Grover Posted February 22, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2014 Anything from anyone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted February 22, 2014 Report Share Posted February 22, 2014 First of all, you've posted multiple cards in the single cards section, so this topic will be moved to Realistic Cards - Multiple Cards accordingly. Also, you're only allowed to bump your topic once every 12 hours, and you've already done so twice in six hours. Please keep this in mind for next time. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raymond Grover Posted February 22, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2014 ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MR Unknown Posted February 22, 2014 Report Share Posted February 22, 2014 3 Level 4 monsters When this card is Xyz Summoned: Add 1 Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. You cannot activate that card during the This turn. Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material: Discard 1 card, then banish 1 card on the field. This card gains 700 ATK for each banished Spellcaster-Type monster. Not bad for a spellcaster, But the 700 ATK thing is kinda OP, Nah? You should add, This Card Gains 300/500ATK for each bannished Spellcaster-Type Monster by this effect. Target 1 face-up Xyz Monster you control; Special Summon from your Extra Deck, 1 "Magician" monster that is 1 Rank higher than that monster you control, by using it as the Xyz Material. (This Special Summon is treated as an Xyz Summon. Xyz Materials attached to it also become Xyz Materials on the Summoned monster.) The Xyz Monster Summoned by this cards effect cannot be target or destroyed by card effects controlled by your opponent this turn.( Kinda OP ) You can banish this card from your Graveyard: Draw 1 card for every Spellcaster-Type monster you control. Good Card, it should be used as a Limited Card, since its Powerful. 4 Level 5 monsters This card gains 200 ATK for each Xyz Material attached to this card. If this card would be destroyed, you can detach 1 Xyz Material instead. Each time an Xyz Material is detached from this card; Draw 1 card, then banish 1 card your opponent controls. I see that this is what you tried to summon by using the previous card, A good realistic Card. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raymond Grover Posted February 22, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2014 thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted February 22, 2014 Report Share Posted February 22, 2014 The last effect of Magician's Force is stupid because it's easily exploitable.Since you could, for example:Summoner Monk Discards it -> Summon Flamvell Magician -> Banish Force from the Graveyard and Draw 2 cards -> Proceed to Xyz/Synchro for whatever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raymond Grover Posted February 22, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2014 Are all the Rank-Up cards all exploitable tho, like stealing tho overlay unis, or negate all other card effects, in my eyes this is less dangerous than those other rank-up cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masaaki71484 Posted February 23, 2014 Report Share Posted February 23, 2014 Magican's Force will usually always be a +2-4 since by itself is OP and no the others are useful but not nearly as OP as this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raymond Grover Posted February 26, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2014 I have made changes to the cards effects and names, i hope they are all better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted February 26, 2014 Report Share Posted February 26, 2014 The Rank Up card, again, is stupid.Your missing the point, TC.See, Rank-Up cards in general are -1s. But that's the point. Why? Because you are, more often then not, literally upgrading your monster into a superior version that can do more damage then it previously could.Except, because yours nets you a draw 2, it then becomes a +1 play it.Not to mention, Magician Girl, in, and of herself, is 2900 right off the bat, then is stronger depending on how many Materials you used to make your Rank 4 beforehand. Add to it, each time she looses a Material, you basically +2 off that because you not only draw, but you also Banish any 1 card the opponent controls. Not to mention, the later of which is optional, so even if they lack anything to Banish, you still draw 1.In short; Fix your stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raymond Grover Posted February 26, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2014 How about in short: Get over it its my card, I made it, and I'm tired or editing it to here each person say its too OP, when i downgrade, you all move to the next card to say, change that, well $W% you, I'm done changing it!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masaaki71484 Posted February 26, 2014 Report Share Posted February 26, 2014 Don't Rage bro we are only trying to help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raymond Grover Posted February 26, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2014 I'm sorry, but some people are being quite rude with their words, I's sure if they made these cards and after editing them like a dozen times, they dont want to hear they they are stupid, im going to go to one of their post and say their card is stupid, and see what they think about it, im sure they wont be too happy, this isnt Rage, this is equality Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masaaki71484 Posted February 26, 2014 Report Share Posted February 26, 2014 Well dude your Rank-up card is...bad and needs work as a whole and when people give you Cnc at least be happy someone did because often time many new guys don''t their cards review especially one this OP. I said this before and I will say it again your Rank up spell nets you at least a +1-4 since is extremely powerful since most Rank up's are a -1 so you made a Rank up spell that gives you a +2 advantage over any other Rank-up spell.....and your Spellcasters are OP as well Banishing is an EXTREMELY POWERFUL effect...and you can do it four times....with one card :(. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raymond Grover Posted February 26, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2014 the point is, people shouldnt be so rude, its not whatt they say its how they say it, they way you say it, doesnt sound rude, it sounds like criticism, which are very deifferent forms of judgement, if you understand what i mean Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BatMed Posted February 26, 2014 Report Share Posted February 26, 2014 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Target 1 face-up Xyz Monster you control; Special Summon from your Extra Deck, 1 "Magician" monster that is 1 Rank higher than that monster you control, by using it as the Xyz Material. (This Special Summon is treated as an Xyz Summon. Xyz Materials attached to it also become Xyz Materials on the Summoned monster.) After this card is activated, you can banish this card from your graveyard, and if you do, draw 2 cards. +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ 3 Level 4 monsters When this card is Xyz Summoned: Add 1 Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. You cannot activate that card during the turn. Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material: Discard 1 card, then banish 1 card on the field. This card gains 500 ATK for each banished Spellcaster-Type monster. +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ 4 Level 5 monsters This card gains 200 ATK for each Xyz Material attached to this card. If this card would be destroyed, you can detach 1 Xyz Material instead. Each time an Xyz Material is detached from this card; Draw 1 card, then banish 1 card your opponent controls. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Rank-up Card: Nothing new... It's just a new Rank-up card that supports your Archetype 7/10 R4: D.M.G of Chaos ocg fixes: When this card is Xyz Summoned: Add 1 Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. You cannot activate that card during that turn. Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material: Discard 1 card, then banish 1 card on the field. This card gains 500 ATK for each banished Spellcaster-Type monster. Well... It has an interesting effect... Not OP I guess, and also you respect the fact that she's the Female counterpart of DM of chaos, by giving her the effect of each of them [DM of chaos: the first effect / DMG: the last one.] 9/10 R5: Magician Girl the Valkyrie Breaker This card is a little bit OP... Since you can easily summon it with that rank up card that you've made. I mean 2 advantages at the same time is a little bit harsh.. I suggest you change its effect to this: 3 Level 5 monstersThis card gains 200 ATK for each Xyz Material attached to it. If this card has "Magician Girl o Black Chaos" as an Xyz material, it gains this effect. ● If this card would be destroyed, you can detach 1 Xyz Material instead. Each time an Xyz Material is detached from this card; Draw 1 card, then banish 1 card your opponent controls. 8/10 Overall: 8/10 Well Done. Keep up the good Work the point is, people shouldnt be so rude, its not whatt they say its how they say it, they way you say it, doesnt sound rude, it sounds like criticism, which are very deifferent forms of judgement, if you understand what i mean C'moon.. cheer up. They just want to improve your card making skills... Even if they are rude... You should care about what they said... not the way how they said ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raymond Grover Posted February 27, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2014 ... Facepalm.., just read over my cards... It kinda is a little OP.. MGOBC can just add the rank up card and then draw 2 when it's used , this is a bad combo, well I guess I'm the dumb one, I'll get working on it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masaaki71484 Posted February 28, 2014 Report Share Posted February 28, 2014 ^ I just want you to be the best you can be bro and listen to both sides of the argument and find the middle ground. It has potential but it is too abusable by too many cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted February 28, 2014 Report Share Posted February 28, 2014 Whenever I said 'stupid', I meant that they were overpowered.I also gave details as to why they were, in the sense that they lead to abusive plays that net pluses for doing literally nothing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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