001:" Highboson the Great Gravity of Grief " (First Card)

[Dokutah]

 

3 or more Level 12 monsters (max. 5)
If your opponent would Pendulum Summon a monster(s): You can reveal this card from your Extra Deck; negate that Summon, then Special Summon this card from your Extra Deck, using those monsters and all face-up Pendulum monsters your opponent controls as the Xyz Material. (This Special Summon is treated as an Xyz Summon.) During either player's turn, when this card is targeted for an attack or by a card effect whose controller controls Pendulum Monster(s) and/or Pendulum Summoned monster(s): Negate that attack/effect, and if you do, attach that card to this card. You cannot attach Xyz Material to this card except by this effect. When this card has 15 or more Pendulum Monsters, attached to this card, you win the Duel.

 

CnC?

[Trebuchet MS]

3 or more Level 12 monsters (max. 5)
While this card in your Extra Deck, you can negate If  your opponent would Pendulum Summon a of your opponent monster(s): You can reveal this card from your Extra Deck; negate that Summon, then Xyz Special Summon this card from your Extra Deck, using by attaching all those monsters and all face-up Pendulum monsters card(s) your opponent controls as the Xyz Material. (This Special Summon is treated as an Xyz Summon.) During either player's turn, when this card would be is targeted for an attacked or effected by a card effect whose of the controller controls of Pendulum Monster(s) card(s) and/or Pendulum Summoned monster(s): Negate that attack/effect, and if you do, attach that card(s) immediately to this card instead (this is a Quick Effect). You cannot attaching more Xyz Material(s) to this card except by this effect. When this card has 15 or more Pendulum Monsters card attached to this card, you win the Duel.

So, about how high were you when you made HighBoson?

 

You have a 5000/5000 monster that can eat up the opponent's resources the moment they attempt a Pendulum Summon. It proves to be utterly immune to everything (because you worded effected) and draws those cards into itself. Never mind the win condition - if you actually achieve that alt-wincon, something's wrong with you not steamrolling the opponent with an invincible 5000/5000 monster that you just Summoned with their resources.

 

Why would you think it was a good idea? I have forcibly edited a bit of your effect such that HighBoson only absorbs effects that try to target it, such that it is still vulnerable to non-targeting removal. Despite this, nobody's going to bother Xyz Summoning HighBoson normally when they can wait for their opponent to walk right into it and get a massive plus in card advantage.

[Dokutah]

thank you Gadjiltron, when you mention it... yes is indeed overpowered... when i made this card i just thinking about high number of splashable cards out there that gain more field access through pendulum summon mechanic... it was pure miscalculation... any suggestion beside stat reduction?

[Progenitor]

Also Pendulum summons are inherit, as in they are not declared, and cannot be chained too.  I don't know if this cards effect would override that, but as worded now, I'm pretty sure it would miss its summoning timing.  The fix would be to make the summoning occur after the monsters have hit the field.  But like Gadjiltron said, this needs some major reworking to be even remotely fair.  However I do like the concept of turning the pendulum summon on its head, so the summoning condition might be ok if the other stats are in balance

[Dokutah]

thank you luckysword12, are stat between 4000 and 3000 is still considered overpowered ? (sorry for bad english)

 

oh yes, thank you also for liking the concept... many more yet to come. mostly anti meta, retrain and support for classic forgotten cards, and just like this card i do have anti-synchro fusion monster, anti-xyz synchro monster concept to be finished soon

[Dokutah]

edited : stat reduced ( credits by : Gadjiltron )