Necloth of Gungnir

[JustAnotherDuelist]

Cause its obviously going to happen.

The Necloth of Gungnir
Water Warrior / Ritual / Effect
LV7 2500/1700

Can be Ritual Summoned with a "Necloth" Ritual Spell Card. Must be Special Summoned by a Ritual Summon using a monster other than "The Necloth of Gungnir", and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. You can only use each effect of "The Necloth of Gungnir" once per turn. (1) You can discard this card; add 1 "Necloth" monster in your Banished Zone to your hand, except for "The Necloth of Gungnir". (2) Once per turn, you can shuffle up to 2 "Necloth" cards in your Banished Zone into your Deck; destroy an equal number of cards your opponent controls.

[Darj]

OCG fix:

 

Can be Ritual Summoned with a "Necloth" Ritual Spell Card. Must be Special Summoned by a Ritual Summon using a monster other than "The Necloth of Gungnir", and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. You can only use each effect of "The Necloth of Gungnir" once per turn. (1) You can discard this card, then target 1 of your banished "Necloth" monsters [acronym="Banished Zone" is an unofficial term and thus should be avoided if you want to stick with official card grammar]in your Banished Zone[/acronym], except for "The Necloth of Gungnir"; add that target to your hand. (2) [acronym=Redundant, you already wrote an OPT clause]Once per turn[/acronym] You can shuffle up to 2 of your banished "Necloth" cards in your Banished Zone into the Deck, then target the same number of cards your opponent controls; destroy them.

 

I took the liberty of adding targeting conditions to both effects, on the first effect because most recycling effects target (e.g. Dark Eruption, Warrior Returning Alive, Light of Redemption), and on the second because the original Gungnir targets.

 

 

On the effect, I think it is fine. The first effect is a slower version of Necloth Brionac's first effect that can recycle key Necloths, and the second effect provides more field control than Necloth Brionac and Trishula by being able to destroy monsters and Spell/Traps alike, while restocking the deck with banished Necloths.

[JustAnotherDuelist]

Thanks for the OCG fixes, had a hard time remembering how to word banished to hand and all that. I decided to make the destruction effect not target cause I might as well, considering there's already Moralltach / Tiramisu.