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The Loser, The Maniac


JessicaMuddy

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Hello all! This is my first story, which for now only has a temporary name. In this story I use my custom cards from the Maniac Archtype, so check that out if you haven't already. Also, I have no idea how to use spoilers... So the text will just be here.

 

 

Prologue

Minoru Takahashi examined his opponent. "How will I defeat him?" He muttered to himself.

"Make your move, loser!" Minoru's opponent was just one of the school bullies, who had been specially trained to win duels.

"O-Ok... I summon The Maniac's Right Leg in attack position, place two cards face down and end my turn." The bully bursted into tears, while laughing a tremendous laugh. "WHAT AN IDIOT! Attack it, Blue Eyes!" The giant dragon roared and flew towards the darkened head. "Not so fast!" The bully's laughs instantly became curiousness. A mark was placed upon the White Dragon and it fell to the ground. "I activate my trap card, Spellbinding Circle!"

 

"No! Now it can't attack!" The bully picked up a card, then laid it upon the field. "That's okay though, because I use Card Destruction! Get rid of all of the cards in your hand." Minoru placed the cards in his hand into the graveyard.

"Thanks..." Minoru muttered. Three of Minoru's discarded cards floated to the top of the bully's deck. Both of the duelists picked up the same amount of cards they discarded. The bully slid a card onto the battlefield, face-down. "It's over, give it up, loser." Minoru picked up another card from his hand.

"5 more turns and it's game over... For one of us. I summon The Maniac's Left Leg! Then destroy all the monsters on the field with Dark Hole!" The two monsters on Minoru's side of the field got added to the top of the bully's deck.

"Hey loser, thanks for giving me cards, you've only got 5 turns until you run out of cards now, idiot!" The bully drew a card. "What the hell? This card is useless! No point in summoning it. Instead, I play the spell card Premature Burial, and pay 800 life points to Special Summon my Blue Eyes from the graveyard!" The Dragon's roar echoed throughout the school as it burst out of the ground and back onto the battlefield. "Attack!" The dragon charged towards Minoru. If he was hit that would have been the end of the battle. "Hold up! I play Negate Attack, and stop your Battle Phase!" Minoru's face-down card rose up and blocked the dragon's attack. "Dammit Minoru! Give it up already! Just play your turn so I can crush you!" Minoru picked up another card. 'Four turns.' He thought to himself. "I set 2 cards face-down, and play the spell card De-Spell! This card will now destroy your Premature Burial, and along with that, your Blue Eyes White Dragon!" The giant beast exploded into pieces and was sent to the graveyard for a second time. I also pay 1500 Life Points to Special Summon my Toon Maniac! That cuts my life points down to just 600, but now I can attack you for 1800 damage!" A crowd had gathered around the two duelists.

 

"Ha! You managed to make a scratch in me! This is a news. Too bad I still have 1400 Life Points!" The bully picked up another card "The Maniac's Left Leg? What is this stupid stuff you put in my deck?! Whatever, I use the spell Raigeki to destroy the stupid Toon thing and play the magic card Monster Reborn!" The white beast once again rose from the ground and began to attack. "You fell for it again! Magic Cylinder!"

"Not so fast, dork! Seven Tools of the Bandit! At the cost of 1000 life points I will stop your trap. I will end this, attack!" The dragon attacked, but was nowhere to be seen. "What happened now?!"

"I sent its own power against it with Mirror Force! So now there's nothing on your side of the field and you only have 400 Life Points!" The bully started to panic.

 

Minoru: 600 LP

Bully: 400 LP

 

"I now summon the winning monster, Robotic Mani-"

"So stupid... You'd really think I'd just let you win? I use the trap card Torrential Tribute!" The summon was negated, and Minoru's card flew from his hand to his graveyard. The bully picked up yet another card. "Why would you want to put these useless cards in my deck, you loser?!"

'Two turns now...'

"Fine! I summon The Maniac's Left Leg and attack you! You're only on 100 life now. Give up!"

Minoru picked up another card. "Just what I needed! I will now Special Summon the Blue Eyes White Dragon, with my Monster Reborn!" For the fourth time the monster entered the battlefield. "I will also place a monster face-down, and attack with the dragon!"

"You really want a soul crushing defeat don't you? Mirror Force!"

"Don't seem so smug." Minoru grinned and stared into his opponent's eyes. The bully picked up a card. "Just one turn 'till it's over." Minoru said. His smile grew even wider.

"I summon The Maniac's Head and attack your face-down card with it!" The face-down monster flipped up and slashed towards the two monsters on the bully's side of the field.

"Penguin Soldier! With it's special ability I sent both of the Maniac cards back to your hand." Minoru picked up a card.

'Only one card left in my deck, but I can win this.' Minoru thought.

 "It's over. I end my turn." The bully picked up the final card. Minoru started to chuckle. His small grin turned into a massive smile. "Game Over."

"I know, because I summo-"

"No. Take a look at your hand. Have you heard of the legendary Exodia? They say it crushed foes from afar with its mighty power." The five cards floated away from the bully's hand and created a monster on the battlefield. "Well this is its more... Evil counterpart, The Maniac! And the holder of all of its five body parts is destroyed in an almighty explosion!" The bully broke down, crying. "No... I lost to the wimp... But how...?" The demonic creature on the battlefield broke out of its chains and sent a fiery blast towards Minoru's opponent.

 

So that's part one, I hope you guys enjoyed it! Constructive feedback is greatly appreciated. 

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