Firetrap (german with english translation)

[Saturiel]

English translation:
Firetrap
You can activate this card if a monster of the type Spellcaster and the attribute Fire gets attacked.
Negate the attack, destroy the attacking monster and deal effect damage equal to its ATK to your opponents life points.

[Trebuchet MS]

I certainly can't correct OCG in a different language.

 

Nevertheless, it's where Sakuretsu Armor meets Magic Cylinder... under a relatively strict activation condition. FIRE Spellcasters aren't quite something you see frequently.

 

Points for flavour, albeit at the cost of function. Maybe if the condition was loosened a little, either by working for any Spellcaster-Type monster or any FIRE monster, it might be more acceptable.

[Saturiel]

The OCG in German should be rather fine. I just don't read that much english cards so I am not familiar with the English OCG.

My first version was that it needs to be a fire monster and/or a Spellcaster. But I thought it was op. What do you think about that? Or maybe then treat it as limited card?

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

I'll try to rewrite it in proper English, using PSCT.

 

Activate this card if a FIRE Spellcaster-Type monster is targeted for an attack. Negate the attack; destroy the attacking monster, and if you do, your opponent takes damage equal to the destroyed monster's ATK.

 

I don't recall too many FIRE Spellcasters, other than Hiita the Fire Charmer and her evolutions, plus Blast Magician (and Flamvell Magician or something). It's essentially a fusion of Sakuretsu/Magic Cylinder, but its activation requirements won't be pulled off most of the time.

 

Making it require a FIRE monster to be attacked should be fine without serious problems; though there are a few common FIRE decks out there, but that shouldn't be too much of a problem. Or you go on the lines of what Gadj mentioned and strip the Attribute requirement; then it could be run as some form of monster removal for a general Spellcaster deck.