more one piece cards!

[lucky777dice]

Forgot to put the Arlong Arc villains in the last set. Put in Smoker and Tashigi for good measure. 
 

Next Up: Johnny and Yosaku, and Baroque Works!

 

I need some feedback: Made Smoker WIND attribute, because he moves like air, but he is a Pyro-type since it's smoke. Should I just make him FIRE-attribute?

[GaaraoftheSand]

I think Tashagi should have a stating ATK of 1500, then gain 300 for each equip card. Smoker should also start with around 2000 or so, and Hachi's ATK is really low for a level 6

[thegreatmightypoo]

A few things:
On Chuu, it should be take control of that monster, not switch control.

 

Kuroobi has the potential to be really overpowered if this is an equip card set that has powerful equip cards.

 

Hatachi really isn't that useful in this set. Most opponents aren't going to carry equip cards, so the large majority of the time, that card will be a waste.

 

Tashigi seems like it would be really counter-productive in this set. It only gets a max of 1500 atk, and having all the equip cards go back into the deck would seem like a disservice to all the cards you have with equip cards on them. Then again, I don't know what the equip cards are going to be.

 

With Arlong, you can just say it inflicts piercing damage.

 

Overall it's alright. I think the most major complaint I would have about it would be that it's supposed to be an equp card set, but most of the monsters don't have effects dealing with equip cards. Make it a bit more cohesive and it'll be good.

[lucky777dice]

Thanks for the feedback!

 

1. Tashigi is going through the shredder and being done all over again.

2. Hatchi's attack will be raised, but probably to only 2000, due to it's unorthodox effect.

3. I will change card lore as requested.

4. This is not necessarily a set for equip spell cards, although a lot of cards have to do with them. Since it's romance dawn, think of it like a Starter Pack with no real archetype or aim.

 

For the record, this is only part of the set. Can you look at the other one and give some feedback please?

 

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/323744-one-piece-east-blue-set-incomplete/