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Text is a no no. At your level right now focus more on the basics, don't worry about text unless completely necessary. I like what you were going for, but execution leaches the left side of the tag looking bland. Colours while lacking aren't too but, it isn't mono but it's kinda just yellow-red and a darker variant on the left. Depth is alright, you're getting better with that. Attempt at lighting is good but its still off.
You're definitely getting there.
I'm looking at this on my phone so soz if I said that like lighting or colours were different to what they are.

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