KazukiCardsYugioh Posted December 26, 2014 Report Share Posted December 26, 2014 Mi primer carta Yugioh Español Carta 002 de mi coleccion Carta 003 de mi coleccionCuarta carta hecha por mi Quinta Carta hecha por mi Effect : Pay 500 LP per turn, back to your hand a card from your graveyard Effect : If this card remains on the field for 10 turns you win the duel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxhernanxx34 Posted December 26, 2014 Report Share Posted December 26, 2014 creo que estas cartas irian en esta seccion: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/forum/10-casual-cards-design tomate tu tiempo para leer las reglas... saludos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KazukiCardsYugioh Posted December 26, 2014 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2014 Se puede editar el post o lo elimino :D ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted December 26, 2014 Report Share Posted December 26, 2014 Voy a moverlo. No necesita editar el post. <<<Google Translate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KazukiCardsYugioh Posted December 26, 2014 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2014 Gracias !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted December 26, 2014 Report Share Posted December 26, 2014 Guys, speak English in this section. Don't expect Mugen or one of us who can speak Spanish well enough to translate everything. He combinado tus cartas en un hilo de foro, porque es más fácil para los miembros a evaluarlas. (I have combined your cards into one forum thread, because it's easier for members to evaluate them.) As for some of the cards in here, you need to put a proper translation. Without touching the translator, let's see how far my Spanish 202 really goes. Otherwise, we can always call Mugen for help. 1st Card: Field of Energy If activated during the Chain, your opponent's attacks this turn are negated. 2nd: Sword Knight Once per turn, this card can attack directly. 3rd: Blue Knight Warrior of the warrior style (Yeah, really makes no sense) 4th: Red Knight Knight of style and brother of Blue Warrior. 5th: Rocket Rocket of (whatever Naza is) 7th: Rocket Warrior (uh yeah, we already got a card with that name) 8th: Brilliant Black Knight (OK, I only had to use the translator 2-3 times; that's a good thing, I guess) ----------- Anyway, cards 6-8 have Fake Types. In this section, they're not allowed here; choose one of the 23 existing Types and use it. If you want to use a second Type, add it as an effect saying "This card is also treated as a/n (X)-Type monster", X is the second Type. Also, Brilliant Black Knight violates the max 5000 ATK/DEF clause, as well as being an alternate win condition. For what it's worth, it definitely does not deserve that much ATK; at the maximum, maybe 2800-3000. No, being Exciton and 101-weak does not excuse you from making something like this. Sword Knight needs to be toned down A LOT, considering it's essentially a free 2600 attacker. I recommend you design it to deal only half damage, so it doesn't hurt as much. Guess a translation here is necessary for this member. Please note that I am using the "vos" pronoun here [Latin American form of "tú"], but I'll do it in the "tú" form also, assuming TC is not Latin American. [I was taught by Argentine professors in college, hence why I use the former more often]) Todos modos, cartas 6 a 8 tienen típos falsos. En esta sección, son prohibidos; elegí un de los 23 típos existentes y usálo. Si deseás usar un típo segundo, poné como un efecto diciendo "Esta carta es tambíen como un típo de (X)", X es el típo segundo. También, Caballero Brillo Negro viola la clausula de maximo de 5000 ATK/DEF y es un condicíon de victoria alternativa. No merece tener tanto ataque definitivamente; el maximo debe tener es 2800 a 3000. No, estando débil a Exciton o número 101 no te excusa de creyendo una carta como esta. Caballero Espada necesita a ser atenuado mucho, porque es un atacador libre de 2600 ATK. Recomiendo que diseñes la a infligir sólo daño medio, así no doler como mucho. --- La forma de "tú" Todos modos, cartas 6 a 8 tienen típos falsos. En esta sección, son prohibidos; elije un de los 23 típos existentes y usalo. Si deseas usar un típo segundo, pone como un efecto diciendo "Esta carta es tambíen como un típo de (X)", X es el típo segundo. También, Caballero Brillo Negro viola la clausula de maximo de 5000 ATK/DEF y es un condicíon de victoria alternativa. No merece tener tanto ataque definitivamente; el maximo debe tener es 2800 a 3000. No, estando débil a Exciton o número 101 no te excusa de creyendo una carta como esta. Caballero Espada necesita a ser atenuado mucho, porque es un atacador libre de 2600 ATK. Recomiendo que diseñes la a infligir sólo daño medio, así no doler como mucho. Alright, that was a pain in the ass to write in two languages. But I suppose it's good review for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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