[Written] Acid Corrosion Gateway

[DoctorMiracle]

So I decided to make this card for whatever reason. This card won't be for every deck as it specifically targets certain types of monsters. However, please review the card to see if it can use some work.

 

Acid Corrosion Gateway

Continuous Spell Card

 

When a machine, dragon, aqua, fish, or rock-type monster is summoned to the field, they gain 1 Corrosion counter. At the end phase of the turn they attacked, they gain 1 Corrosion Counter. They lose 700 ATK and DEF for each Corrosion counter on the monster. If the ATK or DEF of the monster reaches 0, destroy that monster. You can remove all Corrosion counters on the field to deal 500 damage to the opponent for each Corrosion counter sent by this effect. 

 

[Azure Wolf]

The main things this would affect would be Red-eyes and other Dragon decks along with any Machine decks like Qlis. The Aqua, Fish and Rock aren't as noteworthy currently but could be sometime in the future but might not. his is basically a different version of Venom Swamp which affects select types rather than non-venom monsters. The additional burn is adding in Venom Burn on a much larger scale and then switching the damage and ATK reduction, as well as lowering DEF so it kill high ATK/low DEF monster easier. While it is up to the opponent to decide whether or not let counters stack, it does mean they need stronger monsters to bring out in order to get over most level 4 so 2300+ ATK is the best to summon. Aqua and Fish have no easy to summon monsters to get over this. Aqua could with Mobius and Gishkis but Fish would require more set up just to get out a decent attacker. Rock could benefit from this as it does allow them cards to banish for Megarock Dragon or Gaia Plate but could have a hard time getting over. That said it is weak to removal and is only good against certain decks so it is on/off on how effective it is.

[Trebuchet MS]

So, this suffers from the same issues that the whole Venom archetype suffers from - counters do nothing without the field. Admittedly, the field itself is the only source of the counters so far...