Nightmare Moon Posted November 15, 2010 Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 [center][i][font="Franklin Gothic Medium"]For many centuries, Pokémon Trainers and novices have yet to tame the mighty beasts of darkness and light. Some have tried, and some have failed. And some said, "I'll catch it quicker than a Mareep can shake its tail." After an exausted battle between the two, the duo decided to call in a truce. Their spirits fought long and hard, and were sealed inside two Duel Monsters cards.[/i][/font] Here is now where my tale comes to a close, and 2 new cards to you I shall show. ^^[/center] [center][spoiler=Reshiram of the Light][IMG]http://img818.imageshack.us/img818/3708/reshiramofthelightygoca.jpg[/IMG] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 2 LIGHT Fairy-Type monsters you control. When this monster is successfully Summoned, place 1 Radiance Counter on this card (max. 5). This card gains 500 ATK for each Radiance Counter on it. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, remove 2 Radiance Counters from this card to increase your Life Points by 500 for each Fairy-Type monster in your Graveyard or removed from play.[/spoiler][/center] [center][spoiler=Zekrom of the Darkness][IMG]http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/903/zekromofthedarknessygoc.jpg[/IMG] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 2 DARK Fiend or Zombie-Type monsters on your field. When this card is successfully Summoned, Special Summon 2 "Zekrom Destroyer Tokens" (DARK/Machine-Type/Level 3/ATK 0/DEF 0) to your field in Attack Position. Increase the ATK and DEF of both Tokens for each Set card on your opponent's field x 500. If this card attacks a face-up or face-down Defense Position monster, destroy all face-up Attack Position monsters on your opponent's field and inflict damage to your opponent for each monster destroyed by this effect by 1200.[/spoiler] [center][spoiler=Duality of Dark and Light][IMG]http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/5116/dualityofdarkandlightyg.jpg[/IMG] This card can only be activated when you have 1 "Reshiram of the Light" or 1 "Zekrom of the Darkness" on your side of the field. Pay half of your Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Reshiram of the Light" or 1 "Zekrom of the Darkness" from your hand or Deck. Neither of those monsters cannot be destroyed by a Monster Effect. When "Reshiram of the Light" or "Zekrom of the Darkness" are selected as an attack target by an opponent's monster, pay 1000 Life Points and remove 1 LIGHT and 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard and remove them from play to negate the attack and end the Battle Phase. If "Reshiram of the Light" or "Zekrom of the Darkness" is removed from the field, destroy this card. If this card is removed from the field, destroy both Special Summoned monsters and increase your Life Points by the combined Level of both of the destroyed monsters x 800 points.[/spoiler][/center] [hr] [spoiler=Alternate Artwork Cards] [spoiler=Reshiram of the Light][IMG]http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/3708/reshiramofthelightygoca.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] [spoiler=Zekrom of the Darkness][IMG]http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/903/zekromofthedarknessygoc.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] [spoiler=Duality of Dark and Light][IMG]http://img602.imageshack.us/img602/5116/dualityofdarkandlightyg.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler][/spoiler][/center] [center]Please make sure you comment, thank you~ ^^[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yuni Katt Posted November 15, 2010 Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 Nice cards no errors 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted November 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 Thanks Nick, like the little story I added above? ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted November 15, 2010 Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 Man, I love those pics so much! The effects are nice, fitting, and you definitely have a common theme, though I think there might be one problem... Since you can't simultaneously summon two monsters at once, you have to be able to summon one of them first. However, the problem with that is that they can't stay on the field without each other, so...how do you keep them on the field? If you were to fix that, 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted November 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 BUMP!! ^^ "Duality of Light and Dark" has officially been added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted November 15, 2010 Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 they are broken... even with your spell, you can't keep one on the field without the other... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted November 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 Oh.. damn.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted November 15, 2010 Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 your taking on an awful tough task since not much is known about either of them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted November 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 Y..yeah.. uhmm.. *Is really uncomfortable* Their opposites of e..each other, and I decided to apply that into their effects. Since LIGHT monsters are about healing your Life Points. Whereas DARK monsters, deal massive damage to your opponent. Sorry, I'm just really unconfortable right now guys. Anyone else care to comment? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MortalKombatSmoke Posted November 15, 2010 Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 Good cards, no real OCG errors but it's risky doing cards on these two like the user above me stated, it's best to use pokemon that have already been revealed and a majority of information has been released. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted November 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 Thanks CombatSmoke. *sighs* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted November 15, 2010 Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 I made you uncomfortable Hokage? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted November 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 @jad2342: It's not you, it's something that happened in rl. No need to worry, I'm fine. And thanks for commenting. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted November 15, 2010 Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 The card effects maybe are broken...BUT I loved them!! 100/10!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted November 15, 2010 Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 I think you should change your spell card to where you CAN summon both.... seeing as how its called Duality of Light and Dark, since Duality means twofold, and since it can only work with both (keep that part) just add something along the lines that if its activated before one of them is summoned, it is not destroyed, you know what i mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted November 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 How can I reword it? Mind telling me in PMs? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted November 15, 2010 Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 idk how to reword it sorry... but do you understand what i mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted November 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 I think so. You mean change "Neither monster cannot be destroyed by its own effect."? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted November 15, 2010 Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 well no, cuz [b]Activate this card only when you control a face-up "Reshiram of the Light" and a face-up "Zekrom of the Darkness" on the field.[/b] is saying you can only activate it with both on the field... but how are you gonna be able to get both on the field in the same turn because both monsters say [b]If "Reshiram of the Light" or If "Zekrom of the Darkness" are not on the field, destroy this card[/b] they are both broken because of that first effect in both monsters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted November 15, 2010 Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 Change it like this: This card can only be activated when you have 1 "Reshiram of the Light" or 1 "Zekrom of the Darkness" on your side of the field. Half your life Points to Special Summon 1 "Reshiram of the Light" or 1 "Zekrom of the Darkness" from your hand or Deck. then add all the other effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted November 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 @GiovannyCapone: Ok, thanks. But I don't know your name though. What is it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted November 15, 2010 Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 Γιάννης or John in english. Yours? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted November 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 *smiles* Lauren, and I've added the changed effect to "Duality of Light and Dark". It'll be up in a bit. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted November 15, 2010 Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 Good! I'm glad I had a chance to help you!This card can only be activated when you have 1 "Reshiram of the Light" or 1 "Zekrom of the Darkness" on your side of the field. Pay half of your Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Reshiram of the Light" or 1 "Zekrom of the Darkness" from your hand or Deck. [b]Monsters cannot be destroyed by a Monster Effect[/b]. When "Reshiram of the Light" or "Zekrom of the Darkness" are selected as an attack target by an opponent's monster, pay 1000 Life Points and remove 1 LIGHT and 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard and remove them from play to negate the attack and end the Battle Phase. If "Reshiram of the Light" or "Zekrom of the Darkness" is removed from the field, destroy this card. If this card is removed from the field, destroy both Special Summoned monsters and increase your Life Points by the combined Level of both of the destroyed monsters x 800. cuz if they can be destroyed your card has a hole again ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted November 15, 2010 Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 The only real problem is that you can't get either of your monsters out without getting the other out at the exact same time. I'd remove the first sentence from both of your monsters, otherwise these are both comepletely unplayable without Skill Drain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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