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xN3xT Injexktz

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As you may know I created a Red Eyes Black Dragon Synchro Mode and Blue Eyes White Dragon Synchro mode monster. Well, after carefully thinking I chosen my favourite card/machine monster as the 'last' Synchro Mode. And here it is along with it's Brothers and Sisters: (The description in one of them was too small so I added it underneath the card) :)

[img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/2259/295807c.jpg[/img] XYZ Dragon Cannon Synchro Mode

"X-Head Cannon" + " Y-Dragon Head + "Z-Metal Tank" and Synchroniser
Once per turn you can special summon one 'X', 'Y' or 'Z' monster from your graveyard. For each 'X','Z' and 'Y' monster ont he field increase this Monsters ATK and DEF by 300. After you attack during your battle phase you can send one 'X', 'Y' or 'Z' Monster to the graveyard to destroy 1 monster on the field. If it was your own, increase your life points by 500.

[img]http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/4251/295807.jpg[/img] Red Eyes Black Dragon Synchro Mode

[img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/7549/295807v.jpg[/img] Blue Eyes White Dragon Synchro Mode

And here's the Tuner for them all:

[img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/4251/295807.jpg[/img] Synchroniser
After Editing, this is my new one, making it 5: [img]http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/4251/295807.jpg[/img] Gaia the Feirce Knight-Synchro Mode

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[quote name='xN3xT Injexktz' timestamp='1291227603' post='4822564']
If your going to start winging about it your pethetic, it's a vague outline/idea not a real thing you bunch of nerds. It's my post so quit posting your cards on here, the OCG is fien it's just your computers I have Windows 7 so ha!
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how does Windows 7 have anything to do with OCG errors?
And also, Synchronizer is WAY too powerful for that effect, 2000 ATK and DEF for a level 4 that can instantly summon LVL 8 Synchro monsters?
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[quote name='xN3xT Injexktz' timestamp='1291227603' post='4822564']
If your going to start winging about it your pethetic, it's a vague outline/idea not a real thing you bunch of nerds. It's my post so quit posting your cards on here, the OCG is fien it's just your computers I have Windows 7 so ha!
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They're not posting cards, the cards are part of their signatures. Also, in case you don't know, your computer's operating system has nothing to do with OCG, which btw stands for Official Card Grammar. Just saying...
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Lulz at double post.

1) There is no "and" when you explain a Synchro Monster's Synchro Material. It's only +. Gaia doesn't even have any Synchro Material man.
2) Very unoriginal pictures for all of them...
3) Synchronizer = very broken 2000 ATK and DEF beatstick. The Synchroes are OP as well.
4) Many words in there need to be capitalized and most of them should be replaced / removed.

2/10.
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First off...

XYZ Dragon Cannon Synchro Mode = [url="http://www.bbtoystore.com/mm5/yugioh/YU_MFC052.jpg"]XYZ Dragon Cannon[/url]

Blue Eyes White Dragon-Synchro Mode = [url="http://www.yugioh-cards.net/Merchant2/graphics/00000001/anpr/unl/huge/ANPR-EN092.jpg"]White Night Dragon[/url]

Synchroniser = [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Starlight_Road"]Starlight Road[/url]

Gaia the Fierce Knight-Synchro Mode = [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Swift_Gaia_the_Fierce_Knight"]Swift Gaia the Fierce Knight[/url]
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Now, my rate...

[color="#0000FF"][b]XYZ Dragon Cannon-Synchro Mode[/b][/color]
Konami image. Bad. So basically, it's a Monster Reborn for the XYZ Archetype. Well, that's OP'ed there. Your OCG is way, way off. Really bad. And if you say that it's the computer again, I'll say that I also have Windows 7. Suck on that. And you get to destroy a monster if it attacks. Sorry, OP'ed. Also, a Synchro that requires 4 monsters, whose Levels don't even match up? Unplayable.
Originality: 0/10
Image: 0/5
OCG: 1/25
Playability: 0/10
[b]Total:[/b] 1/50, or 2%

[color="#0000FF"][b]Red Eyes Black Dragon-Synchro Mode[/b][/color]
There should never be an "and" when listing Synchro Materials. Next, this is the [i]only[/i] original image of these cards. But it's a picture of Red-Eyes Black Metal Dragon. Still, that is really bad. Now, don't double-space after the Materials, either. About the card, you spelled From wrong in the last sentence. It's a double attacker with 3200 ATK to start with. That's OP'ed. And it's indestructible to Spells and Traps. Again, OP'ed. It would be less so if it had a drawback, other than a measly 200 point reduction.
Originality: 2/10
Image: 3/5
OCG: 5/25
Playability: 3/10
[b]Total:[/b] 13/50, or 26%

[color="#0000FF"][b]Blue Eyes White Dragon-Synchro Mode[/b][/color]
Hello, White Knight Dragon. Really difficult to read, mostly since you double-spaced again. Don't. It makes you look inexperienced, although that's obvious by your reaction to criticism. It's a 2000 burn with little drawback, since it doesn't specify where you need to send the Level 6+ LIGHT monster from. I could send it from the Deck, hand, etc. And again, the indestructibility to Traps and Spells. And again, your OCG is horrid.
Originality: 0/10
Image: 0/5
OCG: 1/25
Playability: 0/10
[b]Total:[/b] 1/50, or 2%

[color="#0000FF"][b]Synchroniser[/b][/color]
OP'ed without even looking at the effect. And, you used the image of a Trap Card for it. Which depicts Stardust Dragon. And it's effect will never activate, since for its effect to apply, it will have to be on the field, which then you will have a Tuner.
Originality: 0/10
Image: 0/5
OCG: 0/25
Playability: 0/10
[b]Total:[/b] 0/50, or 0%

[color="#0000FF"][b]Gaia the Fierce Knight-Synchro Mode[/b][/color]
OP'ed. But we all know that. A 2600 attacker that can attack twice. OP'ed. Also gains ATK for a Level 4 Warrior monster you control. That adds to the OP'ed-ness.
Originality: 0/10
Image: 0/5
OCG: 1/25
Playability: 0/10
[b]Total:[/b] 1/50, or 2%

[b][size="4"]Your Total Score:[/size][/b] [size="4"][color="#0000FF"]16/250, 8/125, or 6.4%[/color][/size]
Your rating: [color="#FF0000"]Less than horrible. Learn the mechanics and rules of the game, and learn balance. Look at real cards, but don't use their images. Look in JazinKay's archive, or try DeviantArt. Using Konami's images shows a complete lack of creativity and competence of a card maker.[/color]
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