Xcess Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 My first Synchro card ---------- Red Archfiend Knight ---------- [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/2560/345641f.jpg[/img] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters This card is unaffected by any Effect Monster's Effects. This monster gains 200 ATK when it successfully destroys a monster in battle. Rate and Comment And say if there are OCG corrections that have to be made Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue- eyes white dragon777 Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Not a bad card for your 1st synchro, no OCG errrors that I can see! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draconic Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Good Card. 9/10 Seems a little like Mystical Beast Serket Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xcess Posted January 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 tnx ^^ BTW: PMUB Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted January 27, 2011 Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Question: what is a trap of an Effect Monster's effect? Nice Pic, but OCG is off... It should have Effect Monster CARD's effectr to say the least I give it 7.6/ 10 Keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xcess Posted January 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 Whoops pressed the wrong key ... sorry it OR not OF (EDITED) tnx for the good rate ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xcess Posted January 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2011 BUMP-Er Sticker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xcess Posted January 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted January 28, 2011 Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 Ok that part is fixed but you still forgot to add CARD after Monster. Like so,your effect should be: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters This card is unaffected by[s] any[/s] Spell[s]s[/s], Trap[s]s[/s] or [s]Effect[/s] Monster [b]Card[/b][s]'s[/s] effects. This monster gains 200 ATK when it successfully destroys a monster in battle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xcess Posted January 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 The sentence is kinda cut from : [url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/index.php?title=Super_Polymerization&image=SuperPolymerizationPTDN-EN-R-1E-png][img]http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20080523033410/yugioh/images/thumb/0/0e/SuperPolymerizationPTDN-EN-R-1E.png/244px-SuperPolymerizationPTDN-EN-R-1E.png[/img][/url] (Spells, Traps, and Effect Monsters' effects cannot be activated in response to this card's activation.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted January 28, 2011 Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 Tell me; where is the balance for this monster? Its conditions are generic ("Marauding Captain" says hi) and it is completely immune to everything but battle. Not that that's much of a worry if you have a few "Wabokus", "Shrinks" or "Half Counters" in your Deck (which you will). And if it destroys a monster, it gains more ATK. So; how do you justify this monster's strength? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xcess Posted January 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2011 ok edited Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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