Ovedrive Posted March 31, 2011 Report Share Posted March 31, 2011 [center][size="1"]HP Doom's pic[/size] [img]http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/6237/239164w.jpg[/img] [i]If you control no monsters, you can Special Summon this card from your hand (You can activate this Effect only once per duel). When this card is used for a Synchro Summon, you can Special Summon it during the End Phase. If you do, it is treated as a non-Tuner Monster and loses 400 ATK.[/i] Brokenz? CncCc...[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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The Sleeping Dude Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 Nice i like the Originality of the card. why don't you try this lore that i think about this 1? [i]If you control no monsters, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. If this card is used for a Synchro Summon, you can Special Summon it during the End Phase. [s]It is treated as a Effect Monster[/s] [b]It's Level becomes 2 [/b]and it loses 400 ATK. [b]You can only activate this effect once per Duel.[/b][/i] i think it should maintain as a Tuner so it can be used as for a Synchro again. Like after using it for Red Dragon Archfiend, you can Special Summon it back then it'll be ready for Red Nova Dragon. i added the [i]"You can only activate this effect once per Duel."[/i] so it wont make a loop of Synchro Summons until your field is full. though its a suggestion for a good lore. But i still like the card. (Sorry to ask but are you gonna open another Shop?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DRAPHINIX Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 Nice card. I like the effect, as for broken, it doesn't seem to be, but maybe add a restriction like this card cannot be tributed. Just a suggestion. 8/10 And isn't the picture of Blackwargreymon X? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 [quote name='DRAPHINIX' timestamp='1301652807' post='5104303'] but maybe add a restriction like this card cannot be tributed. [/quote] but it will still be able to use for a Synchro Summon but i like you idea but it should be like it cannot be tributed, or be used a Synchro-Material. or something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ovedrive Posted April 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 [quote name='AngryBird' timestamp='1301652569' post='5104300'] Nice i like the Originality of the card. why don't you try this lore that i think about this 1? [i]If you control no monsters, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. If this card is used for a Synchro Summon, you can Special Summon it during the End Phase. [s]It is treated as a Effect Monster[/s] [b]It's Level becomes 2 [/b]and it loses 400 ATK. [b]You can only activate this effect once per Duel.[/b][/i] i think it should maintain as a Tuner so it can be used as for a Synchro again. Like after using it for Red Dragon Archfiend, you can Special Summon it back then it'll be ready for Red Nova Dragon. i added the [i]"You can only activate this effect once per Duel."[/i] so it wont make a loop of Synchro Summons until your field is full. though its a suggestion for a good lore. But i still like the card. (Sorry to ask but are you gonna open another Shop?) [/quote] it's a good suggestion. But I would like to keep it like this =D. Thanks, tho. And about shop...I think not, yet. [quote name='DRAPHINIX' timestamp='1301652807' post='5104303'] Nice card. I like the effect, as for broken, it doesn't seem to be, but maybe add a restriction like this card cannot be tributed. Just a suggestion. 8/10 And isn't the picture of Blackwargreymon X? [/quote] Thanks. Eh...I rather wouldn't. Idk why. As for the pic...idk =D. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 [quote name='DRAPHINIX' timestamp='1301652807' post='5104303'] And isn't the picture of Blackwargreymon X? [/quote] Yeah, it is a digimon, don't know its name though. OT: Kinda broken. [i]If you control no monsters, you can Special Summon this card from your hand.[/i] It's easier to Special Summon than Cyber Dragon AND is a Tuner. A similiar Tuner that has this effect can only use it once per duel (Unknown Synchron) [i]When this card is used for a Synchro Summon, you can Special Summon it during the End Phase. [/i] On top of the easy Special Summon, you get this. Makes Karakuri OTK so easy. [i]It is treated as a Effect Monster and it loses 400 ATK.[/i] I don't get this part, to be honest xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ovedrive Posted April 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 [quote name='Hp doom' timestamp='1301656708' post='5104342'] Yeah, it is a digimon, don't know its name though. OT: Kinda broken. [i]If you control no monsters, you can Special Summon this card from your hand.[i] It's easier to Special Summon than Cyber Dragon AND is a Tuner. A similiar Tuner that has this effect can only use it once per duel (Unknown Synchron) [i]When this card is used for a Synchro Summon, you can Special Summon it during the End Phase. [/i] On top of the easy Special Summon, you get this. Makes Karakuri OTK so easy. [i]It is treated as a Effect Monster and it loses 400 ATK.[/i] I don't get this part, to be honest xD [/quote] Then, maybe I should add that "once per duel" effect to the 1st effect? The last effect means that it's not treated as Tuner anymore. Idk if I got the right OCG there, tho. Thanks Doom =D. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 [quote name='~Overdrive~' timestamp='1301657543' post='5104355'] Then, maybe I should add that "once per duel" effect to the 1st effect? The last effect means that it's not treated as Tuner anymore. Idk if I got the right OCG there, tho. Thanks Doom =D. [/quote] That changes much xD And I'd rather add it to the first effect. And it Special Summons during the end phase.... Ehhh. Sorry, I overlooked that part. [i] If you do, it is treated as a non-Tuner Monster and loses 400 ATK.[/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ovedrive Posted April 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 [quote name='Hp doom' timestamp='1301657855' post='5104362'] That changes much xD And I'd rather add it to the first effect. And it Special Summons during the end phase.... Ehhh. Sorry, I overlooked that part. [i] If you do, it is treated as a non-Tuner Monster and loses 400 ATK.[/i] [/quote] Thanks ;D. Fixing it right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 lowered the ATK and make it only can be Synchro Material Monster once per duel, just suggestion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ovedrive Posted April 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 Eh, I wouldn't really like to do it. I want it to be a mini-beatstick (I should be Level 4, but I made it 5 just to have a LV5 tuner). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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