zerospacian Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 [IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/2j1swv4.jpg[/IMG]this is my card[img]http://i55.tinypic.com/oazrlt.jpg[/img][img]http://i53.tinypic.com/121zp8m.jpg[/img][img]http://i56.tinypic.com/iejn1l.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iFantasy Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 You might wanna re-edit your post so that we can see your card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zerospacian Posted June 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 [quote name='iFantasy' timestamp='1308370765' post='5291674'] You might wanna re-edit your post so that we can see your card. [/quote] im trying its cuz im new just give me a few minutes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MidknightTheHedgehog Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 You should view post before actually posting it. That way you will be able to see what your posting and Fix any problems. 4 Out of 10. There over powered. Lower the attack and defense or raise the level. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zerospacian Posted June 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 [quote name='zerospacian' timestamp='1308371064' post='5291684'] im trying its cuz im new just give me a few minutes [/quote] now im done[quote name='midknightthehedgehog' timestamp='1308371511' post='5291687'] You should view post before actually posting it. That way you will be able to see what your posting and Fix any problems. 4 Out of 10. There over powered. Lower the attack and defense or raise the level. [/quote] i didnt focus that much on atk and def i mostly wanted to have good effects but vegeta isnt that overpowerd and he is a better level. plus they are al saiyans so they are gonna be super strong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MidknightTheHedgehog Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 [quote name='zerospacian' timestamp='1308371694' post='5291698'] now im done i didnt focus that much on atk and def i mostly wanted to have good effects but vegeta isnt that overpowerd and he is a better level. plus they are al saiyans so they are gonna be super strong. [/quote] You do have a point. but don't you think Goku is abit over powered. take a look at this [img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/320/398973.jpg[/img] That's proper leveling. But still not bad for a Newby. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KAX Ko Kitty KAX Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 [img]http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/1782/428072.jpg[/img] [img]http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/1782/428072.jpg[/img] [img]http://img855.imageshack.us/img855/1782/428072.jpg[/img] [img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/1782/428072.jpg[/img] [img]http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/3469/428072o.jpg[/img] this is some of the few i have, the last one isn't DBZ but i'd like a vote plz. I like yours, though not stating Goku as super saiyan makes me wonder is if all your gokus are just named....goku lol Also that vegeta is still the teenage form. not even strong enough to take on kaiokan goku but i guess these are your cards. Not bad overall. id give a solid 8.9/10.0 Nice job rate me???? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 First of all you need to improve your OCG.Well I'm terrible at OCG too but I could try to fix it if you want. Vegeta is OPed because every turn you can give him 1000 more atk (sorry if I'm wrong but to my understanding that is what the effect says). Goku is pretty OPed because every turn he can destroy a monster without any cons. For Gogeta when hes destroyed Goku and Vegeta both come back which is pretty OPed again but I see no point of fusing if Vegeta can keep gaining 1000 Life Points every turn and Goku can destroy a monster on the field then attack every turn. If you are to ever try to improve these card, please nerf the effect. Also you spelled Vegeta wrong and with the Potara earing they make Vegeto (Or I think the name might be Vegito but not sure) not Gogeta. Also midknightthehedgehog don't paste your cards on other peoples threads. KAX Ko Kitty KAX make your own thread if you want to show your DBZ cards. EDIT: I forgot to give you a rate, right now a solid 3/10 it really needs to be worked on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bogey67 Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 Okay I saw some of flaws in your cards. I'll name them. 1. Goku is OPed for it's level. 2. Potara earings aren't used for Gogeta. Potara = Vegito, Fusion Dance = Gogeta. 3. Goku and Vegeta's effects are so cheap. Here are examples of what good DBZ cards look like, Ko Kitty already show you some but why don't you look at some more examples, hmm? [img]http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/4536/153604.jpg[/img] [img]http://img689.imageshack.us/img689/4536/153604.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 [b]Everyone here as to stop posting their own DBZ cards as a mean of showing off. [/b] Anyways, for the ratings, the cards are OPed. The DEF and ATK are too high. Although Saiyans are very strong and DBZ just get OPed and OPed [s][b]OVER 9000!!!!!!!!!!!!111!111!1!!11![/b][/s], stick to reasonable ATK and DEF. Also, fake types are unacceptable. Finally, The OCG is near to horrible. Try making more realistic effects, while giving more that DBZ feel in that card. On the brighter side, good pics, and I see good potential in your card making. Therefore I end with you, a 4/10. Keep going and follow my tips and everyone else's tips. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KAX Ko Kitty KAX Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 [quote name='Byakuya Kuchiki' timestamp='1308415126' post='5292674'] [b]Everyone here as to stop posting their own DBZ cards as a mean of showing off. [/b] Anyways, for the ratings, the cards are OPed. The DEF and ATK are too high. Although Saiyans are very strong and DBZ just get OPed and OPed [s][b]OVER 9000!!!!!!!!!!!!111!111!1!!11![/b][/s], stick to reasonable ATK and DEF. Also, fake types are unacceptable. Finally, The OCG is near to horrible. Try making more realistic effects, while giving more that DBZ feel in that card. On the brighter side, good pics, and I see good potential in your card making. Therefore I end with you, a 4/10. Keep going and follow my tips and everyone else's tips. [/quote] "anyone can post cards they think are good and people can rate them1-10" thats his subject. im not posting to show off. im just doing what he said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 Not to mini-mod, but it does count as spamming if you just post that in your post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Resident Fascist Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 [quote name='Byakuya Kuchiki' timestamp='1308415126' post='5292674'] good pics [/quote] Except the fact that Vegeta is sticking his middle finger up at you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 [quote name='Ｔｈｅ ｂｌａｚｉｎｇ ＭＡＲＳ' timestamp='1308425688' post='5293148'] Except the fact that Vegeta is sticking his middle finger up at you. [/quote] [img]http://knowyourmeme.com/i/000/065/681/original/i-have-a-top-hat-your-argument-is-invalid.jpg?1281843434[/img] Anyways, no flame wars kay? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KAX Ko Kitty KAX Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 [quote name='Byakuya Kuchiki' timestamp='1308425271' post='5293127'] Not to mini-mod, but it does count as spamming if you just post that in your post. [/quote] Oh no i spammed, may the gods forgive me for my incorrect ways. I'm sorry Minimod. Either way or i have another card i need rated. [img]http://img594.imageshack.us/img594/1782/428072.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home Slice Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 If you keep posting cards you[b] can[/b] get warned for it and cause this thread to get locked so try to listen the higher member (even if he/she did picture spam a little bit) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fabiulu Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 Btw Potara Earrings are used to summon Vegito not Gogeta. Gogeta fusion is the Fusion Dance [img]http://public.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/wink.gif[/img] And the cards are way too OPed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zerospacian Posted June 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 i didn't focus on making the cards realistic i just wanted some kool effects. i see the mistakes and i noticed that vegeta was spelled wrong after i had put it. i forgot to put that vegeta only gains the atk for one turn and goku needs 5 kai counters to convince vegeta to put on the earings. btw im gonna make all my fusion cards need potara earings. and i did realize bringing vegeta and goku back when gogeta dies was kinda to good an effect which is y i put it so their effects can't be used for a couple turns. i problaby should've made it so they can't atk for a while either but these are my first cards and i'll try to make them better next time. umm idk wat ocep and ocg are so i don't know how to take offense to that. ithink i should put vegeta effect to 500 atk instead and make gokus kamehameha 2 kai counters instead. i see nothing wrong with making up a fake type like saiyan but if you do thats ur problem. lastly i did say ANY ONE CAN POST CARDS AND WE CAN RATE THEM BUT IF U PUT ANYTHING EXCEPT DBZ CARDS THEN MAKE UR OWN THREAD FOR UR OWN CARDS. [img]http://i52.tinypic.com/33vozue.jpg[/img] i hope this one is better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HulkTySSJ2 Posted June 21, 2011 Report Share Posted June 21, 2011 Bad. Try again. Check mine for help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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