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3 Level 4 Monsters
Once per turn, if a Zombie-Type monster is Special Summoned from your Graveyard this turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to negate the activation of 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls and destroy it. Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to add 1 Banished Level 4 or lower Zombie-Type monster to your Graveyard.


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Instead of WHEN a Zombie is SSed, use IF.

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An amazing card in Zombie Decks! I can see this being a real plague for your opponent! xD

9/10
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Cause I'd miss you babe
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Cause even when I dream of you
The sweetest dream will never do
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And I don't want to miss a thing

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Really, really, really, really cool! There are only really minor errors! This card also looks mega-cool.
For the want of love, a friendship was lost,
for want of a friendship, a friend was lost,
for want of a friend a mind was lost,
and so it was that a life was lost, all for the want of love...

Sad poem right? I wrote it myself.

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Thanks. Effect Changed.

"... Life without change might be called anything except life, it's nothing more than experience. ... Yes, Emperor Charles sought the past, you seek the present, but I seek the future."


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What's the first effect meant to do?
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Don't want to close my eyes
I don't want to fall asleep
Cause I'd miss you babe
And I don't want to miss a thing
Cause even when I dream of you
The sweetest dream will never do
I'd still miss you babe
And I don't want to miss a thing

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What's the first effect meant to do?

The effect isn't even confusing...
Unless you don't know s*** about XYZ monsters.

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Could you spoiler your sig please?

The effect is very confusingly worded.
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Don't want to close my eyes
I don't want to fall asleep
Cause I'd miss you babe
And I don't want to miss a thing
Cause even when I dream of you
The sweetest dream will never do
I'd still miss you babe
And I don't want to miss a thing

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The new effect does not miss timing in activation. That's the difference between "If" and "When"...I think thats it. Am I wrong Konoe?

How is the first effect worded confusingly? Its clearly stated.

Once per turn, if you Special Summon a Zombie monster, you can detach a material from this card to negate it.

"... Life without change might be called anything except life, it's nothing more than experience. ... Yes, Emperor Charles sought the past, you seek the present, but I seek the future."


Song of the Moment: Hey Love - By: 12 Stones



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Misguided Ghosts - By: Paramore


Every Time You Go - By: Ellie Goulding


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What are you negating?
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Don't want to close my eyes
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Cause I'd miss you babe
And I don't want to miss a thing
Cause even when I dream of you
The sweetest dream will never do
I'd still miss you babe
And I don't want to miss a thing

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Please read the effect.It tells you right after "to negate the"

"... Life without change might be called anything except life, it's nothing more than experience. ... Yes, Emperor Charles sought the past, you seek the present, but I seek the future."


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Misguided Ghosts - By: Paramore


Every Time You Go - By: Ellie Goulding


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So the first effect negates cards like Saber Hole that activate when a monster is Special Summoned?
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Don't want to close my eyes
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Cause I'd miss you babe
And I don't want to miss a thing
Cause even when I dream of you
The sweetest dream will never do
I'd still miss you babe
And I don't want to miss a thing

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It can negate the activation of any Spell or Trap Card. Say the opponent activates randomface Dust Tornado, if you think its worth negating, have fun wasting an Xyz Material on it. But yea. Its ment to stop pesky traps such as Bottomless / Compulsory / ect. Anyways, I made another edit :/ forgot to mention it destroys the negated cards.

"... Life without change might be called anything except life, it's nothing more than experience. ... Yes, Emperor Charles sought the past, you seek the present, but I seek the future."


Song of the Moment: Hey Love - By: 12 Stones



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If I Could - By: 12 Stones


If It Means Alot To You - By: A Day to Remember


The Ballad of Mona Lisa - By: Panic! At the Disco


When it Rains - By: Paramore


We Are Broken - By: Paramore


Misguided Ghosts - By: Paramore


Every Time You Go - By: Ellie Goulding


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Playability: 9/10
OCG: 8/10
Balance: 10/10
Creativity: 9/10
Name: 5/5
Pic: 5/5
Total: 46/50 (9.2/10)

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This is a tremendous card,IMO it don't need any changes, it's perfect, i like it,

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The others are right about the wording, by the way.

The way you word it implies that you can negate the activation of a Spell or Trap card that has been chained to the Special Summon of a Zombie-Type monster. However, you should word it "Once per turn: You can negate the activation of a Spell or Trap Card activated in response to a Zombie-Type monster Special Summoned from your Graveyard." If you leave it how it is however, it would be implied is that if you've Special Summoned a Zombie-Type monster from the Graveyard in the current Duel, then you can use it. That's nearly no restriction so I believe it's the wrong implication here.

If you want it to imply that, if you've Special Summoned a Zombie-Type monster from the Graveyard this turn, you can negate a Spell/Trap, then you need to add "If a Zombie-Type monster has been Special Summoned from your Graveyard this turn".

If it's none of the above, I'm a bit confused.

But, in any of them, it's a great card for Zombies to have. First effect is some nice negation either way which is something Zombies don't tend to have and the second effect is a mini Burial from the Different Dimension, but slower, which is great for re-using your Mezuki and Plaguespreader Zombie.

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I told you that it was confusing.
The Flag

Don't want to close my eyes
I don't want to fall asleep
Cause I'd miss you babe
And I don't want to miss a thing
Cause even when I dream of you
The sweetest dream will never do
I'd still miss you babe
And I don't want to miss a thing

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change only 1 thing, LLD:

"Once per turn, if a Zombie-Type monster is Special Summoned from your Graveyard, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to negate the activation of 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls and destroy it. Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to add 1 Banished Level 4 or lower Zombie-Type monster to your Graveyard."

<----You should have said you can't activate BOTH of these effects in the same turn

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That would nerf it. It requires 3 materials already, just let it use both in one turn :D

I hate Solemn Warning, thus I stand behind this card. (Well, I'm not sure it can negate Solemn, unless it is Spell Speed 3, which I doubt)


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The new effect does not miss timing in activation. That's the difference between "If" and "When"...I think thats it. Am I wrong Konoe?


Correct.

Because for example, if you had WHEN, you could only negate it RIGHT when the monster is SSed, so the only cards that could be negated are Torrential, Bottomless, etc

With IF, you can use the effect like Shi En, where it can negate any S/T during the turn.




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