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This RP has now ended. If you're thinking about viewing this, pick yourselves, and read our epilogue [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/264499-lone-the-original-story-introduction-to-the-franchise-pg-16-character-requests-are-welcome-chapter-1-is-up-chapter-2-coming-out-8102011/"]Fan Fic[/url], or view my next RP, [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/264832-lone-the-role-play-travelling-to-ancient-china-registration-archive-originalnot-startedaccepting-pg-16/"]Travelling to Ancient China[/url], thanks.

[SPOILER=Rules:]
1. No spamming, state the obvious.

2. No god-modding, look at the rules.

3. You can play as any member of your character's family, as long as it's listed and still exists.

4. You are allowed to mention any member of the family, EVEN though they are dead.

5. It would help if you stuck to the plot. Every person that takes part in these RP's, they don't stick to the plot. This RP's more serious this time, to HELP people, including noobs to stick to the plot.

6. Stick to the timeline, please. Helps a lot.

7. Basic vs Advanced Clause.. Who the hell needs that? We all SHOULD KNOW, that Advanced Clause is [u]COMPULSORY[/u]. They are separated into experiences. If I find anyone short posting, less than the 3 and a half line requirement, you shall be banned from the RP for 2 days WITHOUT prior warning.

7a. Basic RPers should be posting at least 4 lines, or near enough 4 lines. 3 and a half lines at a bare minimum. Any less than that and I WILL PM you to extend.

7b. Normal RPers should be posting EXACTLY 4 lines or more.

7c. Intermediate RPers should be posting a good paragraph or more, preferably 5-7 lines.

7d. Advanced RPers should be posting 2 paragraphs at least, or 8-12 lines.

7e. Experts should be posting 3-4 paragraphs long, preferably 13-24 lines.

7f. If you're brave enough, then 5-10 paragraphs should be a good challenge for you. If that's not hard enough, then post a chapter long, like 35+ lines! ;P

8. This RP is rated PG-16, with chance of strong language and some violence, with some scenes that can be disturbing (No gory bits, luckily). Keep all posts to that age standard, please.

More will come, if suggested.
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[SPOILER=Plot:]
[s][SPOILER=Prologue - Ron's Perspective: Beings of The Past Introduced (COMPLETED)][/s]
[s][SPOILER=Yim Empire's Plot:][/s]
[s]In the year 2030, the futuristic side of the United Kingdom, our veteran, Ron Yim has settled in the future, had 3 kids and also settles in with his 2nd wife, Torn. His 1st wife, Chloe have deceased after a month of giving birth to his youngest daughter, Melissa in 2024.. However, destiny changes history.. In 2035, his elder brother, who was supposed to be deceased in the year 2015 was said to be alive, at the same time, siding with the family that despised Ron Yim himself. Ron seized the throne from his elder brother by murdering him the same year and made name for his family as well as fame.[/s]

[s]Ron, having injured and survived most of his life unscathed, still worries about the future and unable to make his life past the age of 50. Then, destiny changes history once more, as Ron's son, Dan, died in the year 2044, but Ron himself is able to live, despite being due to die in the year 2042. Ron wept with sorrow, fearing that his family name would fall before the year 2100.[/s]

[s]Now in the year 2045, 3 years after Ron was due to be deceased, he still lives healthily and awaits what may come up to him in the future, so grabs his weapon, leaves his son behind and gathers with his family to defeat a new threat, otherwise known as the "Beings Of The Past." Not even Ron knows what that may be. He now needs help, to re-live history and defeat The Beings Of The Past... But will another new threat await him?[/s]

[s]Since then, the new threat crashes into the United Kingdom and starts to crumble to its knees like it is the end of the world. All Ron needs to do, is find the help from the likes of his old friends and defeat The Beings of The Past. Defeating them is not going to be easy, however. You will need to go back in time... Ron will take you back there, find The Beings of The Past back in 2011 and meet his younger self. Ron is middle aged, however... Therefore unable to fight The Beings of The Past by himself without unsealing the curse that they possess. With the help of Ron's younger self, will YOU be able to change history back the way it should be planned? Only fate will find out. You must now, find those beings of the past, in order to defeat them, working with other people of the past, including the younger versions of Ron Yim, Chloe Moase and Torn Richards, all of which they were friends at the time.[/s]
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[s][SPOILER=Beings of The Past Plot:][/s]
[s]Taking place in the year 2045, your threat have only just been discovered by Ron Yim, who is now the age of 50. According to your history, he was supposed to die 3 years before 50. Your task, is to defeat Ron's family, one by one, and prevent them from changing history forever. You lurk in the underground basement, taking place in the year 2011. You wait for the middle-aged Ron to take his companions back in time. You haven't got long until history changes FOREVER. It's either the execution of the middle-aged Ron, or looking back to the ways on how the younger version of Ron could possibly die. Ron has 4 possible ways of dying in 4 different years. 2011, 2018, 2042 or 2068. All for different reasons.[/s]

[s]Your task will take a long time. Ron might not even go back in time? Who will know. There's not one person that has ever found you yet, mainly because they were getting on with their lives. One of your missions is to halt the Yim family's lifestyle, you only want Ron. No one else.[/s]

[s]Your master, Kev Yim was on the verge of defeat during the year 2035, in Ron's plot to sieze his family throne. He still existed in 2011, so this maybe your chance to meet him, as he looks back on how Ron murdered him in 2035 for the family throne and a new start to the Yim Empire. Work together with him to antagonise the whole of the United Kingdom and make the fall of the new Yim family a quick, and painless one. Remember. You don't have long...[/s]
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[s][SPOILER=Chapters 1-9][/s]
[s][SPOILER=Chapter 1 - Dan's Perspective: The Second Emperor, After Ron's Death (COMPLETED)][/s]
[s][SPOILER=Yim Empire's Plot:][/s]
[s]The RP gets rewound. Back to the year 2011, in the United Kingdom. Ron is currently tormented by a several people, proving him useless, giving off his anger. He was also re-united by Saskuto Uchigya, another important character the same year. Then, in 2013, he defects from the Yim family, to start a new life, and a new Yim Empire. When Ron lost his parents in 2017, unsurprisingly, his brothers still lives. Then, in 2018, Ron weds his first wife, before anything could happen in 2019, as such then, before Ron could ever know it, his younger brother was removed from the database. From then on, The Beings of The Past was founded by member of the Yim Family, Kev Yim.[/s]

[s]However, in 2020, the Yim Empire grew bigger every 2 years, as Dan Yim was born, then Sasha Yim was next in 2022 and then Melissa Yim was born in 2024. But, a new tragedy was struck. Ron's first wife, Chloe Moase, passes away from fatal illness when Melissa was just a month old. To make up for Ron's loss, he decided to turn to Torn and marry her, unexpectedly in 2030. The war begins in 2035, as Ron plots to rid of his older brother from the family throne, so therefore tries, and successfully seizes the throne. The same year did Ron kill Kev and proclaims himself Emperor of The Yim Empire, the Yim family gave way to the Yim Empire, therefore growing domination. However, the RP will follow history this time, so in 2040, Ron falls ill in 2040, then becomes terminal the next year.[/s]

[s]In 2042, Ron dies of terminal illness, as Torn couldn't find a way to recover him, so Dan takes Ron's place as Emperor of The Yim Empire, but then, The Beings of The Past was discovered by Dan himself the same year, as he manages to live longer than he thought. With his sisters, Melissa and Sasha by his side, they both managed to stay intact for years to come, alongside Dan. Now in 2045, all 3 kids manages to stay intact, but Dan's condition gets worse because of the illness he once recieved.[/s]

[s]Dan will now need your help to not only maintain The Yim Empire, but to rid The Beings of The Past from the world, for good. He shall not be alone, however, as both his sisters manage to stay by his side. Your task in 2045 is to discover the Beings of The Past by following Dan to 2011 where the young Ron resides, follow the young Ron's lifestyle and discover the Beings of The Past. But, for now... This is 2011, so Ron will enjoy most of his life in College and re-visiting his old school.[/s]
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[s][SPOILER=Beings of The Past Plot:][/s]
[s]The RP gets rewound. Back to the year 2011, in your underground HQ, you are just a wanderer. You just look above Ron's lifestyle and waits for your chance to join forces with evil. Eventually, in 2019, Yim family member Kev Yim founds The Beings of The Past and you decide to apply for a place. The next year, you see The Yim Empire grow bigger by the years to come. In 2020, Dan was born. You see Sasha come to life in 2022 and Melissa in 2024. Ron loses his first wife, Chloe Moase one month after the birth of Melissa. In 2035, you see Kev, the eventual founder of The Beings of The Past, murdered before Roon's knees, founding The Yim Empire. In 2042, Ron passes away, much to your will. You then get discovered in 2042 by Dan, The Yim Empire's successor, after the death of Ron, as the story was his perspective.[/s]

[s]As you cross blades with Dan, he will accept no prisoners, cowards or insults. Therefore, you have nowhere to run. Not especially with his mother, Torn in his place, alongside his two sisters, who ultimately outlived themselves. Now in 2045, Dan's condition worsens because of his past illness, which proves to be your chance of killing him. But no, he prevails and therefore sets an attack on you instead.[/s]

[s]Your task for 2045 is to bring Dan to his knees and force him to surrender to you, making the whole of The Yim Empire fall to its knees. However, it's not going to be an easy ride, as Dan will not act cowardly and has slashed 1000 people in 5 minutes when he was just aged 20, which proves his popularity with females. If you don't want to become his 1001st victim, then act now... He shall be waiting for you...[/s]
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[s][SPOILER=Chapter 2 - Sasha's Perspective: Torn's Leadership (COMPLETED)][/s]
[s]With Ron, now passed away, Dan takes over as Emperor and The Yim Empire still maintains its strength. Dan's condition gets worse due to his illness, but he didn't let that get in his way, unlike his father. Now recovered, he seeks to avenge the death of his father, to defeat The Beings of The Past, hence taking out a 4-6 figured amount of victims within a time of 5-10 minutes. Taking no prisoners, Dan takes his revenge seriously.[/s]

[s]Now in 2046, Dan, Sasha and Melissa outlives themselves by keeping the empire safe, and, as Second Emperor, it seems as though Dan knew what to do, however....[/s]

[s]Your task, for The Yim Empire, is to help Dan seek revenge on The Beings, as he blames, for killing Ron and causing his terminal illness, but it may seem simple enough as Dan's speed is that of light itself. For the Beings, it's completely different. Dan tries to invade your HQ, lurking in the past times of 2011. The young Ron may be able to help, but he doesn't have enough information to give you. Repel the forces of The Yim Empire and kill off what you can. Sometimes, Young Ron is able to help The Yim Empire? But... Because it is Sasha's perspective, she is placed in command in favour of Dan, only to keep him safe. Who would win, The Beings, or The Yim Empire?[/s]
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[s][SPOILER=Chapter 3 - Melissa's Perspective: Legacy of Ron Yim (COMPLETED)][/s]
[s]It is now the year 2061, the fall of The Yim Empire, due to the decline of Dan's popularity as Emperor. Now, we look back at how Ron lived in the past. But. His past is at stake and the history may be changed. Dan has no power left, other than his own. His authority has been stripped by history and if he was to re-claim it, Saskuto Uchigya, the veteran, has to undertake the quest alone for the rest of his life, leaving just himself, Neo and Hikari to re-claim Dan's authorities.[/s]

[s]However, Dan's sisters also turn against him, temporarily, but for the right reasons being. Kayne White VI, an intruder of this RP, takes over as an Emperor of a newly found empire, The Dark Empire, which is also a counterfeit version of The Yim Empire.[/s]

[s]Your task is to bring Kayne to his knees and regain Dan's authorities, before it's too late. However, you can't use Dan himself. You have to use the past to help, such as the young Ron, who recently visited the future. It is up to you... To restore The Yim Empire, and take down Kayne White. Remember, The Rebels of The Past are here to help too. As it's Melissa's perspective, Sasha has lost command. But, it was Melissa's turn to take over. You must prevent her from dying in any way possible, as invasions may come...[/s]

[s]Will it be Kayne White VI, who will steal Dan's throne forever, or will it be Dan, the second Emperor who tries his absolute best to keep everything as it is? It is up to Melissa to keep everything under control. Remember. Dan is not allowed to everything by himself.[/s]
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[s][SPOILER=Chapter 4 - Saskuto's Perspective: Travelling to Ancient China (COMPLETED)][/s]
[s]Now, the RP is rewound back to the year 2035, the year that Ron begins his reign as Emperor of The Yim Empire. With Ron being able to live past the year 2042, he prepares to go to Ancient China in the year 2035 to actually explore the past as a trip for his children. Then, he teams up with the intruders of this RP, claiming to be from Ancient China to rid the place of the Jin Kingdom. However, Saskuto was placed in charge as Ron was busy with forming an alliance with Shu's Emperor, Liu Bei. But, he died before he had the chance, so Liu Shan took over, in order to make the alliance possible.[/s]

[s]With the Rebels of The Past also helping, it is also possible that they could be in Ancient China, seeking your help. You prepare to go to the year 260, 3 years before the fall of Shu, as you will experience the trip of your life. Endless fights and The Yim Empire creates their own troops. Sima Zhao, who siezed authorities of Wei, decides to hold a rebeillion against The Yim Empire, much to his elder brother's disapproval, so your task is to defeat Sima Zhao, and prevent the fall of Shu, before it's too late. You also have help from Wu as well, as Wei have sided with Jin.[/s]

[s]Beware of other intruders as well. If Kayne White VI and L.O.N.E intrudes, it is already too late, as all kingdoms and empires have to side with each other to kill the two of them off. You start off by talking The Rebels of The Past into helping out, then Ron has to create a time machine to enter Ancient China, but getting there isn't simple... We will see the outcome, soon enough...[/s]
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[s][SPOILER=Chapter 5 - Ron's Perspective: Intrusion from Ancient China (COMPLETED)][/s]
[s]With the fight against L.O.N.E STILL not settled, the people Ron and the others have met, visits the future from Ancient China. Whilst Sasha was pregnant in the year 2048, she awaits her first child with husband Harry Gavins. Saskuto Uchigya, Ron's best friend, has been put in charge in favour of Ron, in order to find those that intruded the United Kingdom at this very time in 2048. It is rumoured that all those people from Ancient China were looking for Ron.[/s]

[s]The Beings of The Past also makes their appearance, but it was up to Zhu Yuan, former Being of The Past member, to defeat The Beings' master, Kev, Ron's elder brother.[/s]

[s]With Ron living an extended life, he recieved a new form by luck, which involves him in blood knight armour and Blood Omega, which happens to be in an explicit side of things, such as blood and gore. Your task now, is to bring down those intruding the present days, and force them back to Ancient China. Remember, none of them recognises you. They just want SWEET vengeance. One more thing, all must listen to Saskuto Uchigya throughout the plot, unless instructed by Ron Yim, the first Emperor of The Yim Empire.[/s]
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[s][SPOILER=Chapter 6 - Ron's Perspective: Death Sentence (COMPLETED)][/s]
[s]As The Yim Empire travels to the year 2011, it only brings them to America, to face the Time Reapers. But, before that, they had to face the absolute darkness, and avoid bringing the world it's supposed end. Now, with Torn Richards aquiring the Blood Maiden form by luck, she too can help The Yim Empire bring themselves back on track. However, according to the Time Reapers, Kayne White VI claimed to be the owner of the Time Reapers, but however, it was actually Zhu Yuan's.[/s]

[s]With the investigation of the Time Reapers complete by Sasha and Dan, they have found out that Kayne White VI have been plagiarising Zhu Yuan's work, and therefore sentenced.[/s]

[s]In Part 2, also known as Chapter 7, Ron claims to be missing again, however, it won't be easy, as L.O.N.E will yet again, intrude, just like the battle after the visit to Ancient China. More information will appear in Chapter 7.[/s]
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[s][SPOILER=Chapter 7 - Saskuto's Perspective: Death Sentence Part 2 (COMPLETED)][/s]
[s]Now, with Saskuto inside Ron, he has to fight L.O.N.E by himself, with guidance from Dan. Though, the fight will not be easy this time. L.O.N.E will burrow from organ to organ. No one is allowed to help either, according to L.O.N.E's fiendish rules. Saskuto Uchigya makes his way inside Ron and progresses on defeating L.O.N.E with everything he had, including his cryo-filled Ice Wolf appearance, which he had recieved by luck.[/s]

[s]L.O.N.E, becoming stronger, also has consequences, as he too was covered in Ron's blood, making it hard to fight Saskuto, but its darkness can overcome all. Your task for this part of the chapter, is to bring down L.O.N.E, and force it out of Ron, who initially burrowed in his spine.[/s]

[s]Remember, only Saskuto is allowed to fight in this plot. The plot finishes as soon as Saskuto is finished with L.O.N.E. But, it may prove to be endless, despite guidance with communication devices.[/s]
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[s][SPOILER=Chapter 8 - Torn's Perspective: The Rightful Emperor (COMPLETED)][/s]
[s]With Ashley pulling back, and Yuri in coma, Ron and his people are finally preparing for their final battle, the battle of their lives, as they first rid the place of Ashley Walker, Kayne White, then Yuri Walker, when he rises from coma. This is a chapter, NOT to be missed, as activity is expected at all times, within 24 hours. Torn Richards is placed in charge of the battle, as she orders Ron and Dan to strengthen up. Perhaps, you might do the same...?[/s]

[s]So, do you have your RP paragraph in your application? If not, now's your chance... You cannot place your RP paragraph once this chapter ends, so hurry....[/s]

[s]Your task now, both the Beings and The Yim Empire, must help each other, then, defeat each other. But, there are twists... You are to defeat Ashley, Kayne and Yuri in order, and perhaps recieving a new form for Saskuto, the Blood Wolf form, including a Cursed Omega Blade, which is upgraded to Blood Omega, also comes with the Blood Wolf form. But, you only recieve it, if you're lucky...[/s]

[s]This plot, as I will say, is NOT to be missed. If you miss it, it will be suicide.... So, Good luck...[/s]
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[s][SPOILER=Chapter 9 - Neo's Perspective: Looking Back at The Father's Memories (COMPLETED)][/s]
[s]With the final battle over, time stops forever, never to start again, until the next time. Everyone, that has died, comes back to life, and enjoys the rest of their days, relating to those unexpected.[/s]

[s]Well, since it's the final, official chapter before the epilogue, now transformed to a Fan Fiction, we now look back to our photo album, then look back from the first timeline, until the third timeline, where battles, the unexpected intruders, and yes, even vampires intrude the RP. Even Ron has all the photos, but those removed from history, will not be able to exist, or assist in looking back at the whole RP.[/s]

[s]I do hope you enjoyed the RP, and I'll see you in my November RP, L.O.N.E: Travelling To Ancient China![/s]

[s]Better to say, Travelling to Ancient China, hopefully, will turn out better than this RP alone... If it lasts...[/s]
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[s][url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/264499-lone-the-original-story-introduction-to-the-franchise-pg-16-tbc-character-requests-are-welcome/"]Epilogue - L.O.N.E: The Pre-Story[/url][/s]
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[SPOILER=Application:]

Name:

Date of Birth:

Original Date of Death: (When the character was due to die.. Before or after 2045, you choose..)

Desired Date of Death: (Only applicable if this character still exists after the original death date.)

Original Cause of Death:

Desired Cause of Death: (Only applicable when character dies after original death date.)

Current Age: (Note, that it takes place in the year 2045!)

Gender:

Side: (The Yim Empire, The Rebels of The Past or The Beings of The Past)

Appearance: (Text or picture, it's up to you)

Beings of The Past Mark: (If you side with The Beings of The Past, a picture would be necessary.)

Family: (Optional, but if your character has a family, even if they are deceased, we would like to hear from that character's family!)

Biography:

Weapon(s):

Height:

Weight:

Original Game: (If applicable)

Sample Paragraph: (This proves that you're not a bot, or a spammer. Hehe. It also shows that you have read EVERY rule. You can leave this blank, as long as it's there before the end of the RP!)

It would be wise to rid the brackets from the app... Oh, and Sample Paragraph HAS to be visible by the end of the RP, OR ELSE! Yes, I do mean, a sample RP paragraph!
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[SPOILER=Sample Application:]

Name: Ron Yim

Date of Birth: 4th Nov. 1994

Original Date of Death: 11th Nov. 2042

Desired Date of Death: 6th Jun. 2068

Original Cause of Death: Terminal Illness

Desired Cause of Death: Old Age

Current Age: 50

Gender: Male

Side: The Yim Empire

Appearance: A middle-aged man from a Chinese descent, tall, with white hair, muscular build and one red eye, the other was wounded when attempting to murder his elder brother in the year 2035, so he had to wear an eye patch. He also wears worn jeans and a worn vest. Since he was half a century old, he still builds up muscles in order make up for the 2 year illness he had since 2040.

[SPOILER=Family:]

[SPOILER=Parents:]
Eric Yim (Deceased from car accident 2017) (1963-2017)

Nadine Yim (neé Wong) (Deceased from car accident 2017) (1964-2017)
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[SPOILER=Parents-in-law]

All are single parents.

[SPOILER=Chloe's side:]

Claire Moase (It is not known when she has died.) (1970-?)
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[SPOILER=Torn's side:]

Kevin Richards (Dies of old age) (1978-2055)
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[SPOILER=Siblings:]
Kev Yim (Murdered by Ron Yim 2035 (initially deceased due to car accident 2015)) (1992-2035 (initially 2015))

Charles Yim (Removed from world's database 2019. Revived in the aftermath 2100, but died the same year.) (1999-2019 (2100))
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[SPOILER=Spouse(s):]
Chloe Moase (Deceased 2024 from child birth and fatal illness) (Married 2018-2024, her death) (1997-2024)

Victoria 'Torn' Richards (Dies of old age) (Married 2030-2068, Ron's death, (initially 2030-2042)) (1999-2080)
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[SPOILER=Brother-in-law:]
Saskuto Uchigya (Dies of old age) (1995-2069)
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[SPOILER=Children:]
Dan Yim (b. 2020) (Deceased 2044 due to illness) (2020-? (initially 2044))

Sasha Yim (b. 2022) (Outlived the family. Turns into stone in place of her death) (2022-2100)

Melissa Yim (b. 2024) (Dies of an apparent train collision with her car) (2024-? (initially 2046))
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[SPOILER=Children-in-law:]
Harry Gavins (b. 2016) (Dies of brain cancer) (Married to Sasha 2040-2070, his death) (2016-2070)

Elise Yim (neé Robins) (b. 2021) (Dies from premature illness) (Married to Dan 2039-2044, Dan's death) (2021-2050)

Neo Uchigya (b. 2017) (His death is not known) (Married to Melissa ?-?) (2017-?)
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[SPOILER=Grandchildren:]
Gabriel Gavins (Sasha's son) (b. 2049) (Dies from inherited cancer from his father, Harry Gavins) (2049-2099) (If Ron was deceased in 2042, he would've become Ron's posthumous grandson.)

Keith and Rob Yim (Dan's identical twin sons) (b. 2040) (Deceased due to birth complications the same year they were born at 3 weeks old. (Keith) Rob died a day later from the same fate as his brother.)
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Biography: Born in the year 1994 to parents Eric and Nadine Yim. Ron lived a good life until the year 2010 when tormentors manipulated him into anger, sadness and loneliness. Since then, he ignored all that happened and thought about the future. In the year 2017, his parents died of a car accident and finds his elder brother was still living. Ron marries Chloe Moase a year later, but Ron finds in 2019 that his younger brother has been removed from the world's database, saying that he was never born. From 2020, Ron had 3 kids with his first wife, Chloe Moase. One month after having his youngest daughter in 2024, Ron lost his first wife to illness. In 2030, Ron marries Torn Richards, a friend of 20 years, before seizing the family throne from his elder brother, Kev in 2035. In 2039, Ron becomes Father-in-law to Elise Robins, following her marriage to Dan. A year later, Ron falls ill, but managed to recover thanks to Torn, who worked as a doctor at the time of the illness. Initially, he was set to die in 2042, if untreated. Also that year, Ron became a grandfather to twins Keith and Rob, sons of Dan. However, they died the same year at 3 weeks old, one day apart from each other due to birth complications. Ron then became Father-in-law to Harry Gavins, who married Sasha, who leaves the family the same year. In 2044, Ron loses his only son to illness yet again, much like the fate of his previous wife, Chloe Moase. Ron wept with sorrow, with his 2nd wife by his side. 2046 was the same problem as he loses his youngest daughter to an apparent train accident. A new threat posed from then onwards, although discovered in 2045. In 2049, Ron became a grandfather again, but this time, his daughter, Sasha gave birth to her son, Gabriel. Life was of endless threat until 2068, when Ron died of old age, causing the family to fall.

Weapon(s): Emperor's Spirit (Evolution from Cursed Omega Blade)

Height: 165cm

Weight: 102lbs

Original Game: N/A

Sample Paragraph: Not applicable to leaders of this RP.
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[SPOILER=Characters:]

[SPOILER=The Yim Empire:]
1. Ron Yim (Dark Necromancer)

2. Saskuto Uchigya (Chaos Sonic)

3. David Verona (Christian Exodia)

4.
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[SPOILER=The Beings of The Past]
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2.
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[SPOILER=Rebels of The Past]
1. Zhu Yuan (Ĝǿĺđëŋ Ħǿŗďēšmãŋ)

2.
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[SPOILER=Unconfirmed]
1. galesonic

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[SPOILER=Minor Characters]

Eric Yim - Ron's father. He used to be the Yim family's hope until he died from a car accident in 2017. He was the founder of the traditional Yim family before Ron defected. (1963-2017)

Nadine Wong - Ron's mother. She had 3 kids, including that of Ron, but they all went their separate ways after 2011, with Ron defecting in 2013 since he had fears of being despised by his traditional family. (1964-2017)

Kev Yim - The master of The Beings of The Past, and elder brother of Ron Yim. He defected from the family in 2011, 2 years before Ron did, but not for the same reasons as Ron. He hated the traditional family. He was supposed to die in 2015, but ultimately he takes the family throne when he found that his parents have died, making him the king of the traditional Yim family, as he still lives. However, his throne was siezed by Ron in 2035, making him the founder of the new Yim empire. (1992-2035 (initially 2015))

Charles Yim - Younger brother of Ron Yim, he did not defect from the family, however, he was removed from the world's database before anyone would know about it. Nothing is known about him from then onwards. He comes back to the world in 2100, only to die the same year. (1999-2019(2100))

Claire Moase - Chloe's mother. She has supported both Chloe and Ron since their marriage. Since Chloe has died from illness, she does her best to help Ron, especially to sieze Kev's throne. No one knows when she had died. She is still present at the time of the RP. (1970-?)

Kevin Richards - Torn's father. He highly disapproved of Ron and Torn's marriage until he found out that Ron was a widowed man. He supported his daughter, and also helped Ron with siezing Kev Yim's throne. Kevin dies of old age in 2055. He is still present at the time of the RP. (1978-2055)

Harry Gavins - Sasha's husband. Had one son with Sasha, Gabriel. When he found that Gabriel turned against his family in 2060, he turned to Ron, asking for him to be subdued. His request was granted, as Gabriel was brought back by force. He dies of cancer in 2070. He appears in the RP during the marriage of himself to Sasha. (2016-2070)

Elise Yim - Dan's wife. Originally gave birth to twin sons Keith and Rob Yim in 2040, but died at 3 weeks old due to apparent birth complications. She never had anymore children since. She became ill and dies in the year 2050 because of it. She is still present at the time of the RP. (2021-2050)

Gabriel Gavins - Ron's grandson and Sasha's son. Born in 2049, he had no clue about the real world until 2055, when he turned against his own mother. He rebels against his family in 2060 and founds his new family era. Ron, who still lived at the time of the RP, subdued him and forced him back to the Gavins family. He appears in the RP in 2049 as a young child. (2049-2099)
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Ron Yim - The main character. Born in the year 1994, he had a good life until 2010, when people manipulated him to turning aggressive. In 2013, he defected from his family, fearing that he would be hated. In 2018, he wed Chloe Moase, but after 3 kids in 2020, 2022 and 2024, she died from fatal illness in 2024. Then he wed Torn Richards in 2030, but didn't have any kids. In 2035, he seized Kev's throne by murder, making him the King of the Yim Empire, founding the new Yim era and proclaiming himself Emperor of Yim. In 2040, he became ill, forcing Torn to find several treatments. In 2041, it became worse and soon enough, terminal. In 2042, he dies initially from terminal illness, which would've made Dan Emperor of the Yim Empire. However, in this RP, he recovers after Torn finds the treatment he needed, therefore recovering and keeping his throne. In 2044 and 2046 respectively, he lost 2 kids, Dan and Melissa respectively to illness and accidents respectively. Then in 2068, Ron dies of old age and caused the Yim Empire to fall. He is still present at the time of the RP. (initially 1994-2042, but he has 3 other possible ways of dying in 3 different years, 2011, 2018 and 2068) (1994-2068) (Played by Dark Necromancer, also listed in The Yim Empire) (Reign as first Emperor: 2035-2068 (initially 2035-2042))

Chloe Moase - Ron's first wife. Best of friends with Ron since 2008, they have been close ever since. Chloe wed Ron in 2018 and had 3 kids, Dan, Sasha and Melissa. But, in 2024, she dies of illness. She was widely beloved by Ron, therefore giving her a posthumous name 'Empress Yim'. (1997-2024)

Torn Richards - Ron's second wife. Works as the United Kingdom's only hope. She works as the only doctor in the United Kingdom, researching treatments that can be used for other patients. When Ron fell ill, she finds a treatment appropriate for him. She is still present at the time of the RP. (1999-2080)

Dan Yim - Ron's elder son. Professional samurai, he keeps to Ron's standards and almost always loyal. He initially dies of illness at a young age, losing his chance of succeeding the throne. If Ron had died before him, he would have become Emperor of the Yim Empire. (2020-? (initially 2044)) (Reign as second Emperor: 2042-2044 (initially 2042-2080, his surrender))

Sasha Yim - Ron's second daughter. The longest living member of the new Yim Empire, found by her father, Ron. She also fights to stay alive, but she prefers to stay away from all threats at all costs. She is still present at the time of the RP. (2022-2100)

Melissa Yim - Ron's youngest daughter, and the shortest living member of the new Yim Empire, found by her father, Ron. Her mother died when she was one month old due to illness, she does all she can to avenge for her mother's death, but Torn Richards, her second mother advised her, 'There is nothing to avenge'. She never took the chance of becoming Empress of the Yim Empire, unless Ron have died before Dan did. She initially dies of the train accident in 2046, which is not mentioned until the next year. She was present at the time of the RP, but dies a year after it starts. (2024-? (initially 2046))

Saskuto Uchigya - Ron's friend. Has been supporting Ron since his debut appearance, in the One Winged Angel franchise, At World's End francise and now, appearing in The Major Comeback special, he hopes to make the RP a better world. He dislikes letting his friends die for unknown reasons. In 2030, Saskuto thought he was going to die in hospital due to blood loss, but fortunately, he has a blood transfusion, allowing him to live. He is still present at the time of the RP. (Played by Chaos Sonic, also listed in The Yim Empire) (1994-2069 (initially 2030))

Neo Uchigya - Saskuto's son. He too has been supporting Ron since his debut appearance, only from At World's End francise onwards. Now appearing in The Major Comeback special, he too dislikes the death of his friends for no reason. Much like his father. He is currently looking for a girlfriend. He is still present at the time of the RP. (2017-?)
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[SPOILER=Intruding Characters]
All intruding characters come from my future RP, or from crossovers. Expect them to appear near chapters 4-7. they will annoy the HELL outta ya.

[b][color=#FF0000][u]Wu[/u][/color][/b]

1. Sun Quan (182-252) (Games: DW2-7)

2. Sun Ce (175-200) (Games: DW3-7)

3. Zhou Yu (175-210) (Games: DW1-7)

4. Sun Hao (?-?) (Games: DW7)

[b][color=#008000][u]Shu[/u][/color][/b]

1. Liu Shan (207-271) (Games: DW7)

2. Liu Bei (161-223) (Games: DW2-7)

3. Jiang Wei (206-264) (Games: DW2-5, DW7)

4. Zhao Yun (?-228) (Games: DW1-7)

[b][color=#0000FF][u]Wei[/u][/color][/b]

1. Cao Pi (189-226) (Games: DW5-7)

2. Cao Mao (241-260) (Games: DW7)

3. Cao Shuang (?-?) (Games: DW7)

4. Cao Cao (155-220) (Games: DW)

[color=#40E0D0][b][u]Jin[/u][/b][/color]

1. Zhong Hui (225-264) (Games: DW7)

2. Sima Shi (208-255) (Games: DW7)

3. Sima Zhao (211-265) (Games: DW7)

4. Sima Yan (235-290) (Games: DW7)

[color=#FFD700][b][u]Others[/u][/b][/color]

1. Kayne White VI (?-?) (RPs: Apocalypse: A Battle for New Earth, Live by Honor, Die with Pride)

2. L.O.N.E (?-?) (RPs: L.O.N.E The Role Play: The Pre-Story, L.O.N.E The Role Play: Travelling to Ancient China (4th Nov. 2011))

3. Yuri Walker (?-?) (RPs: At World's End franchises, One Winged Angel franchises, Bleach franchises)

4. Ashley Walker (?-2016) (RPs: At World's End franchises)
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[SPOILER=Timeline]
1945 - Tai Tara was born
1947 - Kao Tara was born
1963 - Eric Yim was born.
1964 - Nadine Wong was born.
1970 - Claire Moase was born.
1978 - Kevin Richards was born.
1992 - Kev Yim was born.
1994 - Saskuto Uchigya was born. Ron Yim was born.
1995 - Hikari Tara was born.
1997 - Chloe Moase was born. Zhu Yuan was born.
1999 - Victoria 'Torn' Richards was born. Charles Yim was born.
2011 - Ron Yim's earliest possible death date from recieving a gun wound. Zhu Yuan initially dies from falling off the building.
2013 - Ron Yim defects from his old family and starts a new Yim empire.
2014 - Saskuto Uchigya weds Hikari Tara.
2015 - Kev Yim's initial death from drinking problems and accidents.
2016 - Harry Gavins was born.
2017 - Ron Yim's parents die from car accident, family throne succeeded by Kev Yim. If Kev dies before then, Ron takes the throne ultimately. Neo Uchigya was born.
2018 - Another one of Ron Yim's earliest death dates by recieving stab and gun wounds at once. If that does not happen, then Ron Yim weds Chloe Moase.
2019 - Charles Yim removed from world's database. Not mentioned at all from then onwards until 2100.
2020 - Dan Yim was born.
2021 - Elise Robins was born. David Verona was born
2022 - Sasha Yim was born.
2024 - Melissa Yim was born, One month on, Chloe Moase dies of fatal illness.
2030 - Ron Yim weds Torn Richards. Saskuto Uchigya initially dies from a massive blood loss.
2035 - Ron Yim murders Kev Yim and seizes the family throne, founding The Yim Empire. Ron proclaims himself Emperor of The Yim Empire.
2038 - Tai Tara dies from assassination.
2039 - Dan Yim weds Elise Robins.
2040 - Ron Yim falls ill. Sasha Yim weds Harry Gavins, then Elise Yim (neé Robins) gave birth to twin sons, died at 3 weeks old.
2041 - Ron Yim's illness become worse, then becomes ill terminally.
2042 - Ron Yim initially dies from terminal illness. If that happens, Dan Yim succeeds the family throne. If not, Ron should recover from Torn's professional treatment.
2044 - Dan Yim initially dies at a young age from illness, much like Chloe Moase. Melissa Yim succeeds the family throne ultimately if Ron have already died, as Sasha would have already been married.
2045 - David Verona initially dies of a gunshot.
2046 - Melissa Yim initially dies from an apparent train accident, the death was not mentioned until 2047. If Ron was deceased before then, this year would be the official fall of the Yim family, if Melissa took the family throne.
2047 - News about Melissa Yim's death spreads to the public, if Melissa has died in this case.
2049 - Gabriel Gavins was born. Kao Tara dies.
2050 - Elise Yim dies from long-term illness.
2055 - Kevin Richards dies.
2061 - The Yim Empire falls as Dan's reign and popularity declines, if he still lives then.
2067 - Hikari Uchigya (neé Tara) dies.
2068 - Ron Yim finally dies of old age, also the fall of the Yim family.
2069 - Saskuto Uchigya dies.
2070 - Harry Gavins die from cancer.
2080 - Torn Richards dies.
2095 - David Verona dies.
2099 - Gabriel Gavins die from inherited cancer, inherited from his father, hindering the amount of time he has to live.
2100 - Charles Yim reappears in the aftermath, only to die the same year. Sasha Gavins (neé Yim) dies.
3011 - Zhu Yuan dies in battle.

The timeline in this OoC thread does NOT update, unless new characters are added. If you want the updated version, refer to the IC thread.
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[url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/259846-the-major-comeback-role-play-a-change-of-history-ic-thread-accepting-in-the-registration-archive-pg-16/"]IC thread[/url]

Upcoming RP: A new franchise is appearing on YCM!

L.O.N.E The Role Play: Travelling to Ancient China! Out November 2011! Watch this space!

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Name: Zhu Yuan

Date of Birth: 1997

Original Date of Death: 2011

Desired Date of Death: 3011

Original Cause of Death: Fell off a building

Desired Cause of Death: Death in battle

Current Age: 35

Gender: Male

Side: The Beings of the Past

Appearance: [img]http://images.wikia.com/dynastyforever/images/1/1b/Zhou_Yu.jpg[/img]

Beings of The Past Mark: [img]http://www.chinatownconnection.com/images/firechinese.gif[/img]

Family: N/A

Biography: when he was alive, he was a vehicle engineer. his death was officially accidental; an agent pushed him. he joined with the beings of the past a few years later. he became a spirit to aid his friend, for he was a weak person in solid form.

Weapon(s): Hidden Blade, Shortsword

Height: 6"11

Weight: N/A (spirit)

Original Game: N/A

Sample Paragraph: (This proves that you're not a bot, or a spammer. Hehe)

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[spoiler=Saskuto Uchigya]Name: Saskuto Uchigya

Date of Birth: Aug. 10th, 1994

Original Date of Death: Oct. 1st, 2030

Desired Date of Death: Feb. 22nd, 2069

Original Cause of Death: A massive loss of blood

Desired Cause of Death: Old age

Current Age: 17 (2011) and 49 (2045)

Gender: Male

Side: The Yim Empire

Appearance: Saskuto has black and blond spiky hair and blue eyes. He is tall and somewhat muscular, but he is also quick and agile. He wears black denim jeans, wears a dark blue shirt with the Uchiha Clan symbol(his master's clan), arm sleeves on both his arms, and black Converse on his feet.

[spoiler=Family:][spoiler=Parents:]Mother: Marrissa Uchigya - Deceased(Guesses, never knew his parents)
Father: Yamamoto Uchigya - Deceased(Guesses never knew his parents)[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Parents-In-Law:]Mother: Kao Tara (Old age) (1947 - 2049)
Father: Tai Tara (Dies because of an assassination) (1945 - 2038)[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Siblings]None, only child[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Spouse]Hikari Tara/Uchigya -At the moment his current girlfriend- (B. 1995, Married 2014) (1995 - 2067)[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Children]Neo Uchigya(B. 2017) (2017 - [/spoiler]

[spoiler=Children-In-Law]None yet, Neo currently looking for a girlfriend[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Grand Children]None yet[/spoiler][/spoiler]

Biography:
Born in the year of 1994, both Marrissa and Yamamoto Uchigya left their Saskuto with an old warrior. Saskuto didn't know much about his parents, only what their names were...but he didn't care much about that. The old warrior began to teach Saskuto how to defend himself, also passing down two weapons he once wielded. They were the Oblivion Keyblade and the Blade of Shadows. With these, Saskuto learned to wield them properly...which was a good thing too. The day he met Ron Yim, Saskuto's life turned upside down. He began to help his friend Ron defeat those that tried to harm him or his friends, but then he also met the love his life in 2013, Hikari Tara. A year passed and peace was now here and in 2014, Saskuto asked Hikari's hand in marriage. After three years, Saskuto held in his arms his only son, Neo Uchigya. With this happening, Saskuto became more focused on protecting his family more than anything. But in 2030, when Saskuto was helping Ron on a mission, he was attack by an ambush and lost a generous amount of blood. Right there and then, he thought he was going to die, but he woke up in the hospital. Saskuto never found out who gave him the blood transfusion, but he knew that whoever did it, must've really wanted to help him out. Saskuto continued living his life, waiting for his son Neo to find someone to have a child with. But only time will tell what will happen, but until then...Saskuto knows that he'll grow old with his wife, both dying of old age.

Weapon(s):
1.) Oblivion Keyblade (Main Weapon)
2.) OathKeeper Keyblade (after his son Neo is born)
3.) Blade of Shadows (Secondary Weapon)

Height: 174 cm (5'9") -will grow more later-

Weight: 61 kg (134 lbs) -will probably keep the weight, not like he'll get fat any time soon XD-

Original Game: N/A

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