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[url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/259487-the-major-comeback-role-play-a-change-of-history-registration-archive-not-startedaccepting-pg-16/"]OoC Thread, otherwise known as the Registration Archive[/url]

[SPOILER=Rules:]
1. No spamming, state the obvious.

2. No god-modding, look at the rules.

3. You can play as any member of your character's family, as long as it's listed and still exists.

4. You are allowed to mention any member of the family, EVEN though they are dead.

5. It would help if you stuck to the plot. Every person that takes part in these RP's, they don't stick to the plot. This RP's more serious this time, to HELP people, including noobs to stick to the plot.

6. Stick to the timeline, please. Helps a lot.

7. Basic vs Advanced Clause.. Who the hell needs that? We all SHOULD KNOW, that Advanced Clause is [u]COMPULSORY[/u]. They are separated into experiences. If I find anyone short posting, less than the 3 and a half line requirement, you shall be banned from the RP for 2 days WITHOUT prior warning.

7a. Basic RPers should be posting at least 4 lines, or near enough 4 lines. 3 and a half lines at a bare minimum. Any less than that and I WILL PM you to extend.

7b. Normal RPers should be posting EXACTLY 4 lines or more.

7c. Intermediate RPers should be posting a good paragraph or more, preferably 5-7 lines.

7d. Advanced RPers should be posting 2 paragraphs at least, or 8-12 lines.

7e. Experts should be posting 3-4 paragraphs long, preferably 13-24 lines.

7f. If you're brave enough, then 5-10 paragraphs should be a good challenge for you. If that's not hard enough, then post a chapter long, like 35+ lines! ;P

8. This RP is rated PG-16, with chance of strong language and some violence, with some scenes that can be disturbing (No gory bits, luckily). Keep all posts to that age standard, please.

More will come, if suggested.
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[SPOILER=Plot:]
[s][SPOILER=Prologue - Ron's Perspective: Beings of The Past Introduced (COMPLETED)][/s]
[s][SPOILER=Yim Empire's Plot:][/s]
[s]In the year 2030, the futuristic side of the United Kingdom, our veteran, Ron Yim has settled in the future, had 3 kids and also settles in with his 2nd wife, Torn. His 1st wife, Chloe have deceased after a month of giving birth to his youngest daughter, Melissa in 2024.. However, destiny changes history.. In 2035, his elder brother, who was supposed to be deceased in the year 2015 was said to be alive, at the same time, siding with the family that despised Ron Yim himself. Ron seized the throne from his elder brother by murdering him the same year and made name for his family as well as fame.[/s]

[s]Ron, having injured and survived most of his life unscathed, still worries about the future and unable to make his life past the age of 50. Then, destiny changes history once more, as Ron's son, Dan, died in the year 2044, but Ron himself is able to live, despite being due to die in the year 2042. Ron wept with sorrow, fearing that his family name would fall before the year 2100.[/s]

[s]Now in the year 2045, 3 years after Ron was due to be deceased, he still lives healthily and awaits what may come up to him in the future, so grabs his weapon, leaves his son behind and gathers with his family to defeat a new threat, otherwise known as the "Beings Of The Past." Not even Ron knows what that may be. He now needs help, to re-live history and defeat The Beings Of The Past... But will another new threat await him?[/s]

[s]Since then, the new threat crashes into the United Kingdom and starts to crumble to its knees like it is the end of the world. All Ron needs to do, is find the help from the likes of his old friends and defeat The Beings of The Past. Defeating them is not going to be easy, however. You will need to go back in time... Ron will take you back there, find The Beings of The Past back in 2011 and meet his younger self. Ron is middle aged, however... Therefore unable to fight The Beings of The Past by himself without unsealing the curse that they possess. With the help of Ron's younger self, will YOU be able to change history back the way it should be planned? Only fate will find out. You must now, find those beings of the past, in order to defeat them, working with other people of the past, including the younger versions of Ron Yim, Chloe Moase and Torn Richards, all of which they were friends at the time.[/s]
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[s][SPOILER=Beings of The Past Plot:][/s]
[s]Taking place in the year 2045, your threat have only just been discovered by Ron Yim, who is now the age of 50. According to your history, he was supposed to die 3 years before 50. Your task, is to defeat Ron's family, one by one, and prevent them from changing history forever. You lurk in the underground basement, taking place in the year 2011. You wait for the middle-aged Ron to take his companions back in time. You haven't got long until history changes FOREVER. It's either the execution of the middle-aged Ron, or looking back to the ways on how the younger version of Ron could possibly die. Ron has 4 possible ways of dying in 4 different years. 2011, 2018, 2042 or 2068. All for different reasons.[/s]

[s]Your task will take a long time. Ron might not even go back in time? Who will know. There's not one person that has ever found you yet, mainly because they were getting on with their lives. One of your missions is to halt the Yim family's lifestyle, you only want Ron. No one else.[/s]

[s]Your master, Kev Yim was on the verge of defeat during the year 2035, in Ron's plot to sieze his family throne. He still existed in 2011, so this maybe your chance to meet him, as he looks back on how Ron murdered him in 2035 for the family throne and a new start to the Yim Empire. Work together with him to antagonise the whole of the United Kingdom and make the fall of the new Yim family a quick, and painless one. Remember. You don't have long...[/s]
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[s][SPOILER=Chapters 1-9][/s]
[s][SPOILER=Chapter 1 - Dan's Perspective: The Second Emperor, After Ron's Death (COMPLETED)][/s]
[s][SPOILER=Yim Empire's Plot:][/s]
[s]The RP gets rewound. Back to the year 2011, in the United Kingdom. Ron is currently tormented by a several people, proving him useless, giving off his anger. He was also re-united by Saskuto Uchigya, another important character the same year. Then, in 2013, he defects from the Yim family, to start a new life, and a new Yim Empire. When Ron lost his parents in 2017, unsurprisingly, his brothers still lives. Then, in 2018, Ron weds his first wife, before anything could happen in 2019, as such then, before Ron could ever know it, his younger brother was removed from the database. From then on, The Beings of The Past was founded by member of the Yim Family, Kev Yim.[/s]

[s]However, in 2020, the Yim Empire grew bigger every 2 years, as Dan Yim was born, then Sasha Yim was next in 2022 and then Melissa Yim was born in 2024. But, a new tragedy was struck. Ron's first wife, Chloe Moase, passes away from fatal illness when Melissa was just a month old. To make up for Ron's loss, he decided to turn to Torn and marry her, unexpectedly in 2030. The war begins in 2035, as Ron plots to rid of his older brother from the family throne, so therefore tries, and successfully seizes the throne. The same year did Ron kill Kev and proclaims himself Emperor of The Yim Empire, the Yim family gave way to the Yim Empire, therefore growing domination. However, the RP will follow history this time, so in 2040, Ron falls ill in 2040, then becomes terminal the next year.[/s]

[s]In 2042, Ron dies of terminal illness, as Torn couldn't find a way to recover him, so Dan takes Ron's place as Emperor of The Yim Empire, but then, The Beings of The Past was discovered by Dan himself the same year, as he manages to live longer than he thought. With his sisters, Melissa and Sasha by his side, they both managed to stay intact for years to come, alongside Dan. Now in 2045, all 3 kids manages to stay intact, but Dan's condition gets worse because of the illness he once recieved.[/s]

[s]Dan will now need your help to not only maintain The Yim Empire, but to rid The Beings of The Past from the world, for good. He shall not be alone, however, as both his sisters manage to stay by his side. Your task in 2045 is to discover the Beings of The Past by following Dan to 2011 where the young Ron resides, follow the young Ron's lifestyle and discover the Beings of The Past. But, for now... This is 2011, so Ron will enjoy most of his life in College and re-visiting his old school.[/s]
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[s][SPOILER=Beings of The Past Plot:][/s]
[s]The RP gets rewound. Back to the year 2011, in your underground HQ, you are just a wanderer. You just look above Ron's lifestyle and waits for your chance to join forces with evil. Eventually, in 2019, Yim family member Kev Yim founds The Beings of The Past and you decide to apply for a place. The next year, you see The Yim Empire grow bigger by the years to come. In 2020, Dan was born. You see Sasha come to life in 2022 and Melissa in 2024. Ron loses his first wife, Chloe Moase one month after the birth of Melissa. In 2035, you see Kev, the eventual founder of The Beings of The Past, murdered before Roon's knees, founding The Yim Empire. In 2042, Ron passes away, much to your will. You then get discovered in 2042 by Dan, The Yim Empire's successor, after the death of Ron, as the story was his perspective.[/s]

[s]As you cross blades with Dan, he will accept no prisoners, cowards or insults. Therefore, you have nowhere to run. Not especially with his mother, Torn in his place, alongside his two sisters, who ultimately outlived themselves. Now in 2045, Dan's condition worsens because of his past illness, which proves to be your chance of killing him. But no, he prevails and therefore sets an attack on you instead.[/s]

[s]Your task for 2045 is to bring Dan to his knees and force him to surrender to you, making the whole of The Yim Empire fall to its knees. However, it's not going to be an easy ride, as Dan will not act cowardly and has slashed 1000 people in 5 minutes when he was just aged 20, which proves his popularity with females. If you don't want to become his 1001st victim, then act now... He shall be waiting for you...[/s]
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[s][SPOILER=Chapter 2 - Sasha's Perspective: Torn's Leadership (COMPLETED)][/s]
[s]With Ron, now passed away, Dan takes over as Emperor and The Yim Empire still maintains its strength. Dan's condition gets worse due to his illness, but he didn't let that get in his way, unlike his father. Now recovered, he seeks to avenge the death of his father, to defeat The Beings of The Past, hence taking out a 4-6 figured amount of victims within a time of 5-10 minutes. Taking no prisoners, Dan takes his revenge seriously.[/s]

[s]Now in 2046, Dan, Sasha and Melissa outlives themselves by keeping the empire safe, and, as Second Emperor, it seems as though Dan knew what to do, however....[/s]

[s]Your task, for The Yim Empire, is to help Dan seek revenge on The Beings, as he blames, for killing Ron and causing his terminal illness, but it may seem simple enough as Dan's speed is that of light itself. For the Beings, it's completely different. Dan tries to invade your HQ, lurking in the past times of 2011. The young Ron may be able to help, but he doesn't have enough information to give you. Repel the forces of The Yim Empire and kill off what you can. Sometimes, Young Ron is able to help The Yim Empire? But... Because it is Sasha's perspective, she is placed in command in favour of Dan, only to keep him safe. Who would win, The Beings, or The Yim Empire?[/s]
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[s][SPOILER=Chapter 3 - Melissa's Perspective: Legacy of Ron Yim (COMPLETED)][/s]
[s]It is now the year 2061, the fall of The Yim Empire, due to the decline of Dan's popularity as Emperor. Now, we look back at how Ron lived in the past. But. His past is at stake and the history may be changed. Dan has no power left, other than his own. His authority has been stripped by history and if he was to re-claim it, Saskuto Uchigya, the veteran, has to undertake the quest alone for the rest of his life, leaving just himself, Neo and Hikari to re-claim Dan's authorities.[/s]

[s]However, Dan's sisters also turn against him, temporarily, but for the right reasons being. Kayne White VI, an intruder of this RP, takes over as an Emperor of a newly found empire, The Dark Empire, which is also a counterfeit version of The Yim Empire.[/s]

[s]Your task is to bring Kayne to his knees and regain Dan's authorities, before it's too late. However, you can't use Dan himself. You have to use the past to help, such as the young Ron, who recently visited the future. It is up to you... To restore The Yim Empire, and take down Kayne White. Remember, The Rebels of The Past are here to help too. As it's Melissa's perspective, Sasha has lost command. But, it was Melissa's turn to take over. You must prevent her from dying in any way possible, as invasions may come...[/s]

[s]Will it be Kayne White VI, who will steal Dan's throne forever, or will it be Dan, the second Emperor who tries his absolute best to keep everything as it is? It is up to Melissa to keep everything under control. Remember. Dan is not allowed to everything by himself.[/s]
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[s][SPOILER=Chapter 4 - Saskuto's Perspective: Travelling to Ancient China (COMPLETED)][/s]
[s]Now, the RP is rewound back to the year 2035, the year that Ron begins his reign as Emperor of The Yim Empire. With Ron being able to live past the year 2042, he prepares to go to Ancient China in the year 2035 to actually explore the past as a trip for his children. Then, he teams up with the intruders of this RP, claiming to be from Ancient China to rid the place of the Jin Kingdom. However, Saskuto was placed in charge as Ron was busy with forming an alliance with Shu's Emperor, Liu Bei. But, he died before he had the chance, so Liu Shan took over, in order to make the alliance possible.[/s]

[s]With the Rebels of The Past also helping, it is also possible that they could be in Ancient China, seeking your help. You prepare to go to the year 260, 3 years before the fall of Shu, as you will experience the trip of your life. Endless fights and The Yim Empire creates their own troops. Sima Zhao, who siezed authorities of Wei, decides to hold a rebeillion against The Yim Empire, much to his elder brother's disapproval, so your task is to defeat Sima Zhao, and prevent the fall of Shu, before it's too late. You also have help from Wu as well, as Wei have sided with Jin.[/s]

[s]Beware of other intruders as well. If Kayne White VI and L.O.N.E intrudes, it is already too late, as all kingdoms and empires have to side with each other to kill the two of them off. You start off by talking The Rebels of The Past into helping out, then Ron has to create a time machine to enter Ancient China, but getting there isn't simple... We will see the outcome, soon enough...[/s]
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[s][SPOILER=Chapter 5 - Ron's Perspective: Intrusion from Ancient China (COMPLETED)][/s]
[s]With the fight against L.O.N.E STILL not settled, the people Ron and the others have met, visits the future from Ancient China. Whilst Sasha was pregnant in the year 2048, she awaits her first child with husband Harry Gavins. Saskuto Uchigya, Ron's best friend, has been put in charge in favour of Ron, in order to find those that intruded the United Kingdom at this very time in 2048. It is rumoured that all those people from Ancient China were looking for Ron.[/s]

[s]The Beings of The Past also makes their appearance, but it was up to Zhu Yuan, former Being of The Past member, to defeat The Beings' master, Kev, Ron's elder brother.[/s]

[s]With Ron living an extended life, he recieved a new form by luck, which involves him in blood knight armour and Blood Omega, which happens to be in an explicit side of things, such as blood and gore. Your task now, is to bring down those intruding the present days, and force them back to Ancient China. Remember, none of them recognises you. They just want SWEET vengeance. One more thing, all must listen to Saskuto Uchigya throughout the plot, unless instructed by Ron Yim, the first Emperor of The Yim Empire.[/s]
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[s][SPOILER=Chapter 6 - Ron's Perspective: Death Sentence (COMPLETED)][/s]
[s]As The Yim Empire travels to the year 2011, it only brings them to America, to face the Time Reapers. But, before that, they had to face the absolute darkness, and avoid bringing the world it's supposed end. Now, with Torn Richards aquiring the Blood Maiden form by luck, she too can help The Yim Empire bring themselves back on track. However, according to the Time Reapers, Kayne White VI claimed to be the owner of the Time Reapers, but however, it was actually Zhu Yuan's.[/s]

[s]With the investigation of the Time Reapers complete by Sasha and Dan, they have found out that Kayne White VI have been plagiarising Zhu Yuan's work, and therefore sentenced.[/s]

[s]In Part 2, also known as Chapter 7, Ron claims to be missing again, however, it won't be easy, as L.O.N.E will yet again, intrude, just like the battle after the visit to Ancient China. More information will appear in Chapter 7.[/s]
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[s][SPOILER=Chapter 7 - Saskuto's Perspective: Death Sentence Part 2 (COMPLETED)][/s]
[s]Now, with Saskuto inside Ron, he has to fight L.O.N.E by himself, with guidance from Dan. Though, the fight will not be easy this time. L.O.N.E will burrow from organ to organ. No one is allowed to help either, according to L.O.N.E's fiendish rules. Saskuto Uchigya makes his way inside Ron and progresses on defeating L.O.N.E with everything he had, including his cryo-filled Ice Wolf appearance, which he had recieved by luck.[/s]

[s]L.O.N.E, becoming stronger, also has consequences, as he too was covered in Ron's blood, making it hard to fight Saskuto, but its darkness can overcome all. Your task for this part of the chapter, is to bring down L.O.N.E, and force it out of Ron, who initially burrowed in his spine.[/s]

[s]Remember, only Saskuto is allowed to fight in this plot. The plot finishes as soon as Saskuto is finished with L.O.N.E. But, it may prove to be endless, despite guidance with communication devices.[/s]
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[s][SPOILER=Chapter 8 - Torn's Perspective: The Rightful Emperor (COMPLETED)][/s]
[s]With Ashley pulling back, and Yuri in coma, Ron and his people are finally preparing for their final battle, the battle of their lives, as they first rid the place of Ashley Walker, Kayne White, then Yuri Walker, when he rises from coma. This is a chapter, NOT to be missed, as activity is expected at all times, within 24 hours. Torn Richards is placed in charge of the battle, as she orders Ron and Dan to strengthen up. Perhaps, you might do the same...?[/s]

[s]So, do you have your RP paragraph in your application? If not, now's your chance... You cannot place your RP paragraph once this chapter ends, so hurry....[/s]

[s]Your task now, both the Beings and The Yim Empire, must help each other, then, defeat each other. But, there are twists... You are to defeat Ashley, Kayne and Yuri in order, and perhaps recieving a new form for Saskuto, the Blood Wolf form, including a Cursed Omega Blade, which is upgraded to Blood Omega, also comes with the Blood Wolf form. But, you only recieve it, if you're lucky...[/s]

[s]This plot, as I will say, is NOT to be missed. If you miss it, it will be suicide.... So, Good luck...[/s]
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[s][SPOILER=Chapter 9 - Neo's Perspective: Looking Back at The Father's Memories (COMPLETED)][/s]
[s]With the final battle over, time stops forever, never to start again, until the next time. Everyone, that has died, comes back to life, and enjoys the rest of their days, relating to those unexpected.[/s]

[s]Well, since it's the final, official chapter before the epilogue, now transformed to a Fan Fiction, we now look back to our photo album, then look back from the first timeline, until the third timeline, where battles, the unexpected intruders, and yes, even vampires intrude the RP. Even Ron has all the photos, but those removed from history, will not be able to exist, or assist in looking back at the whole RP.[/s]

[s]I do hope you enjoyed the RP, and I'll see you in my November RP, L.O.N.E: Travelling To Ancient China![/s]

[s]Better to say, Travelling to Ancient China, hopefully, will turn out better than this RP alone... If it lasts...[/s]
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[s][url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/264499-lone-the-original-story-introduction-to-the-franchise-pg-16-tbc-character-requests-are-welcome/"]Epilogue - L.O.N.E: The Pre-Story[/url][/s]
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[SPOILER=Timeline]
[s]1945 - Tai Tara was born[/s]
[s]1947 - Kao Tara was born[/s]
[s]1963 - Eric Yim was born.[/s]
[s]1964 - Nadine Wong was born.[/s]
[s]1970 - Claire Moase was born.[/s]
[s]1978 - Kevin Richards was born.[/s]
[s]1992 - Kev Yim was born.[/s]
[s]1994 - Saskuto Uchigya was born. Ron Yim was born.[/s]
[s]1995 - Hikari Tara was born.[/s]
[s]1997 - Chloe Moase was born. Zhu Yuan was born.[/s]
[s]1999 - Victoria 'Torn' Richards was born. Charles Yim was born.[/s]
[s]2011 - Ron Yim's earliest possible death date from recieving a gun wound. Zhu Yuan initially dies from falling off the building.[/s]
[s]2013 - Ron Yim defects from his old family and starts a new Yim empire.[/s]
[s]2014 - Saskuto Uchigya weds Hikari Tara.[/s]
[s]2015 - Kev Yim's initial death from drinking problems and accidents.[/s]
[s]2016 - Harry Gavins was born.[/s]
[s]2017 - Ron Yim's parents die from car accident, family throne succeeded by Kev Yim. If Kev dies before then, Ron takes the throne ultimately. Neo Uchigya was born.[/s]
[s]2018 - Another one of Ron Yim's earliest death dates by recieving stab and gun wounds at once. If that does not happen, then Ron Yim weds Chloe Moase.[/s]
[s]2019 - Charles Yim removed from world's database. Not mentioned at all from then onwards until 2100.[/s]
[s]2020 - Dan Yim was born.[/s]
[s]2021 - Elise Robins was born. David Verona was born[/s]
[s]2022 - Sasha Yim was born.[/s]
[s]2024 - Melissa Yim was born, One month on, Chloe Moase dies of fatal illness.[/s]
[s]2030 - Ron Yim weds Torn Richards. Saskuto Uchigya initially dies from a massive blood loss.[/s]
[s]2035 - Ron Yim murders Kev Yim and seizes the family throne, founding The Yim Empire. Ron proclaims himself Emperor of The Yim Empire.[/s]
[s]2038 - Tai Tara dies from assassination.[/s]
[s]2039 - Dan Yim weds Elise Robins.[/s]
[s]2040 - Ron Yim falls ill. Sasha Yim weds Harry Gavins, then Elise Yim (neé Robins) gave birth to twin sons, died at 3 weeks old.[/s]
[s]2041 - Ron Yim's illness become worse, then becomes ill terminally.[/s]
[s]2042 - Ron Yim initially dies from terminal illness. If that happens, Dan Yim succeeds the family throne. If not, Ron should recover from Torn's professional treatment.[/s]
[s]2044 - Dan Yim initially dies at a young age from illness, much like Chloe Moase. Melissa Yim succeeds the family throne ultimately if Ron have already died, as Sasha would have already been married.[/s]
[s]2045 - David Verona initially dies of a gunshot.[/s]
[s]2046 - Melissa Yim initially dies from an apparent train accident, the death was not mentioned until 2047. If Ron was deceased before then, this year would be the official fall of the Yim family, if Melissa took the family throne.[/s]
[s]2047 - News about Melissa Yim's death spreads to the public, if Melissa has died in this case.[/s]
[s]2049 - Gabriel Gavins was born. Kao Tara dies.[/s]
[s]2050 - Elise Yim dies from long-term illness.[/s]
[s]2055 - Kevin Richards dies.[/s]
[s]2061 - The Yim Empire falls as Dan's reign and popularity declines, if he still lives then.[/s]
2067 - Hikari Uchigya (neé Tara) dies.
2068 - Ron Yim finally dies of old age, also the fall of the Yim family.
2069 - Saskuto Uchigya dies.
2070 - Harry Gavins die from cancer.
2080 - Torn Richards dies.
2095 - David Verona dies.
2099 - Gabriel Gavins die from inherited cancer, inherited from his father, hindering the amount of time he has to live.
2100 - Charles Yim reappears in the aftermath, only to die the same year. Sasha Gavins (neé Yim) dies.
3011 - Zhu Yuan dies in battle.
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-----Plot 1 - Prologue - Beings of The Past Introduced-----

In 2045, Ron settles in healthily, despite his long term illness in 2040. Ron grabs his weapons and makes his move. Alongside him, are Torn Richards and Sasha Yim, who also fights. Ron finds a time machine, which could be a source to discovering The Beings of The Past. Ron himself goes back in time, saying "Guys... Look out for oncoming Beings of The Past... I'm going back in time..." while Ron heads to the time michine and transports himself back to the year 2011, where he saw his younger self as a 17 year old student, visiting his school for the first time in months. The younger version of Ron came up to Old Ron and said "Ahh, you're exactly who I need!" then Young Ron shows the Old Ron the path to where the Beings of The Pasts are, without prior concern.

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waiting consciously above Ron, Zhu Yuan followed him so discreetly that even a passer-by did not stare. he thought to himself, [i]the other beings would be so proud if i caught BOTH of them...[/i], grinning. he followed them all the way to a secluded corridor, and became a solid form. just as he was about to catch them, however, the young Ron turned around. Zhu Yuan managed to return to spirit form before he was sighted by either of the two.

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The Young Ron looked back and said "You may have discovered it now, old timer! I'd better be going back to my old tutor now! Here, you can walk around and meet a several of my old friends, if you want!" while the old Ron walks around school and said to himself: "This school may have crumbled in my years..." then kneels down. "Ugh!" Ron's condition begins to worsen after years of being ill, but he couldn't care less. A young girl walks past the old man, which was Ron in the present days. She looked familiarly at Ron and said "Are you Ron from the future?" Ron replied "Yeah, I am..." "I'm young Torn, I guess you've married my present self, haven't you?" replied the young Torn as she walks off to tutor. Then Ron suspects someone who appears to be looking for him. "I heard there was a Zhu Yuan somewhere here... That's possibly why I came here..." Ron said as Sasha, his daughter enters the scene. "Dad, have you found something yet?" Sasha said. "No, but I believe he's here..." Ron replied as he kept looking around for the wierd presence.

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[i]discovery!? such a thought is blasphemy![/i], he thought to himself as he saw a shapeshifter walk through. it grinned at Zhu Yuan, and said, "i'm Zhu Yuan. have you got a problem?" his spirit laughed quietly, and rose up onto the roof to watch them from there. [i]i have you old man[/i], he thought, grinning. [i]and your silly little family as well... all have fallen into my trap![/i], he thought, watching the other beings spring from nowhere and surround Ron.

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"Pfft! Stun the lot of you!" Ron said as he twisted his blade handle. The eye in his blade opened and cast a flash, causing paralysis to Zhu Yuan and those surrounding him. Sasha said to Zhu Yuan "My old man used his blade since this time, in 2011! Still works..." "No, Sasha. We can't defeat them without unsealing the curse they possess... Have you forgotten already?" Ron said to Sasha. "We need to rethink our plans, but for now... It's back to the year 2045.." he bellowed as he and Sasha transports back to the present day in 2045. The younger Ron saw The Beings of The Past, stunned and said "Well done, old timer... I guess you stunned them before we knew it.. Now, it's time to bring them back to where they should be..." as he went to Zhu Yuan and the others and placed them all to the janitor's closet. "How's that for a change, hmm?"

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he laughed silently. [i]a shapeshifter with the others, leaving me to attack his younger form...aah, revenge at last...[/i], he thought, hissing and drawing out his hidden blade. he floated down to the boy and begun stalking him, like a hunter stalks its prey. he grabbed the boy and forced him over to the cabinet where his comrades were trapped. [i]open...it....[/i], he forced into the boys mind, watching as he opened it and let his fellow comrades go. "back to 2045...", he said to the other beings, still holding the boy.

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"Hey, let go of me, you dumbass!" shouted the young boy, but meanwhile, back in Ron's house in 2045, Melissa was missing from his home. Ron said "Where'd she go? I thought she was shopping?" then his phone rang. "Hello?" said Ron. "Dad, it's me!" shouted Melissa from the phone. "Mel, where are you? I'm worried dead about you, so is your mother!" replied Ron, as Melissa responded "I'm stranded in traffic, so I'm gonna have to stay in the hotel overnight!" "Damn! Didn't check how the traffic were! Possibly because of the snowstorm!" Ron shouted with a confused look. "Look, Dad, I'll see you when I get back, okay?" Melissa said as Ron doesn't look convinced. "Okay, see ya, then." Ron said, as he hung up and headed to the cemetery where Dan Yim and Chloe Moase were buried.

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[i]mission...accomplished. let us return to HQ.[/i], he said to the other beings, jumping up into the sky with the boy still in his grasp. becoming spirit from, he traveled to the headquarters a mile away from the school. entering the building, he went straight to the war room and brandished the boy. [i]the future form has returned to his own time...[/i], he said. [i]but this one is his young form... maybe we can get some information out of him?[/i]

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Kev Yim, now a Being of The Past master, said to Zhu Yuan "Let him go, he has no particular information to extract... He's a good for nothing b*****d! But, meanwhile, back in Ron's days, Ron let off a tear, saying: "I will never forget those guys... They have been an inspiration, ever since they were in my lives..." then he heads back home, lets himself in and helps himself to a coffee. Sasha said as she enters the scene "Dad, you're overdoing it!" "Sasha, you know how much I've been through over the years..." Ron replied but, as days pass, in the year 2046, early January, Melissa was driving home from being stranded in traffic for so long. "About time! Should the snowstorm go away, for once!" but as she stops by train traffic lights, rather than waiting for the train to pass, she was inside the train traffic lights, risking danger. She said "Damn! How am I meant to..." then a sudden silence bestowed and the train went storming into the driver's side of the car, where Melissa was, then Melissa was sent flying from London train station to Essex. No one took notice of the situation, or known whether or not she had died.

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[i]he led his future form into our trap, my lord. maybe he knows more than we can imagine?[/i], he said to Kev, pushing him towards the master. [i]maybe his mind is somehow fused with his future forms mind, transferring thoughts and eventually thinking alike? he could be a valuable asset in defeating his future form....[/i], he stopped as he was cut short by a blast from outside. [i]could it be that they have found us?[/i], he said, walking through the door.

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"Huh... Don't worry... It's my niece... I've seen her face when Ron tried to abdicate me from the traditional Yim family throne... Then found a new Yim Empire and called himself Emperor..." Kev said as the young Ron moves forward to him and said "I thought you were dead, you traitor... Perhaps not..." as he let out his blade, then a sound was heard of someone attempting to enter the Beings of The Past HQ from the year 2046. That person was Torn Richards, Ron's second wife. She said "Hmm.. You joined the Beings of The Past... Just so you can kill this innocent boy..." as she let out the blade that looked similar to that of Ron's. She twisted the blade's handle, stunning the lot that surrounded her, including the young Ron, Zhu Yuan and Kev and pushed them all away. "Perhaps I would like to take this boy with me... He doesn't deserve to be there..." she said.

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he let out a cry of exasperation, and stopped trying to move. as soon as they walked out of the door, he flexed his arms and crouched, ready to strike. he moved forward. [i]do not worry. i will get them back...[/i] he returned to spirit form and proceeded to block off the exit. [i]battle mode alpha. commence.[/i] he jumped past both of them, and sealed the exit with a incantation. "no...escape...", he said as he drew his shortsword.

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Unsurprisingly, Torn too had the power to become either solid or liquid. Then she grabbed the young Ron and burrowed underneath Zhu Yuan and directly to Kev, shooting him out of the HQ, allowing her escape. Meanwhile, back in Ron's days, Ron recieves a phone call from the police saying that Melissa had passed away from an apparent train accident. "You, what! You know how much I cherished her!" he shouted on the phone, but Sasha, who was by his side, tried to calm him down. "Sorry, officer... I understand..." then Torn comes back home with young Ron on her arms. Ron hangs up and said "My dear... Why is my past self here...?" Torn replied "He was under attack by The Beings of The Past... I managed to kill off the leader, for now.." as she placed Ron's past self on the sofa, effectively freeing him from paralysis. Ron himself makes his past self a coffee, then goes out to investigate Melissa's death.

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[i]Damn! i will have to be leader. first though, we must perform final rites on our master....[/i], he said to the other beings. [i]how was that even possible? i knew no-one with the ability of transformation except the beings! i must investigate this... we must travel to 2046![/i], he said, gaining the appreciation of the other beings. he opened a portal into the future and set up a temporary HQ there. he then proceeded to go into the portal after all the beings to launch an attack at Ron and his family for the murder of his master.

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Sasha looked outside the window of the Yim Empire's house, then Ron said "They've launched an attack... Torn, Sasha, you two interrupt those beings with your entertainment! I'll take my past self to the attic, we'll watch from there!" as Ron and his past self headed to the attic and watched the fight. Torn and Sasha heads outside and they both say "This is for the Yim Empire! No one touches the Emperor!" as Ron and his past self watches the fight carefully. Sasha lets out her claws, growing from between her knuckles and Torn lets out her blade which resemble that of Ron's. Torn uses the blade to sharpen Sasha's claws, then created the shockwave with the blade's eye. Harry Gavins, Sasha's husband comes to the fray and says "My darling, mother, you must not be harmed!" as he let out his blade and ran straight into Zhu Yuan, starting the fight.

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he laughed as the sword and Harry went straight through him. he struck with his hidden blade and made the first blood in the fight. [i]attack! for our master![/i] he shouted to the beings as they overwhelmed the other two in a fury unseen by mortal eyes. he ran into the building and looked around for a door. [i]there![/i], he thought. he opened the door and found them hiding. "fight like men!", he hissed, drawing his blade.

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Ron threw his younger self out of the window, saying "Get down there, now! We don't want you killed!" as his younger self transports back to the past. Meanwhile, back in the past, Ron heads back to school, explaining his lateness, then gets shot anonymously. The young Ron coughed out blood and fell cold. Those wounding him, are those who tormented him. Back in 2046, Ron went down from the attic and outside, to see Harry, his son-in-law wounded. "You okay, mate? I'll take you inside!" as Sasha experienced pain as of herself. "I think I'm pregnant..." she said, as she locks herself in the bathroom and took out several pregnancy tests. She tested every one of them and came out negative. Torn puts away her blade and checks on Sasha. "Are you okay?" she said, as Sasha gets out of the bathroom and finds Zhu Yuan.

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"ha...", he said exhaustively. "you have been converted...you are carrying a being....this is why it does not show...", he said before collapsing. "you cannot harm me now. you are sworn by our law. welcome to our world, fellow being...", he said, watching ron walk in. "your other form was shot a few minutes ago... it's all over, old man...", he said before jumping out of a nearby window and landing by his troops. "mission...accomplished."

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"Not quite." said Ron, as he had set traps of his own, allowing even the whole of the Yim Empire to form as Beings of The Past, but that was a mere dream. Ron wakes up from such nightmare in 2048, only to be called out by Sasha. "Dad... I'm pregnant!" Sasha shouted as Ron replied "You are... I can see a slight bump now... Congratulations..." Ron then said "That dream was in 2045? I was not expecting that... I suspect Zhu Yuan's here somewhere... We have some unfinished business... As of the Yim Empire..." while he heads to his living room to see the traps being set for Zhu Yuan. "Hmm... This allows us to change forms, but that's only for Torn... I cannot risk doing that..." then he saw Zhu Yuan from behind. "Unfinished business?" asked Ron.

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"ha. you called?", he joked, hissing slightly. "will you fight like a man or will you be a coward? either way, it will be bad for you.", he said, drawing his blade. using his mark, he managed to light up his blade and started to march towards Ron. suddenly, Torn walked through a door behind Ron. "damn. until next time, old man!", he hissed, and disappeared from their sight without a second thought of how they would think of him.

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"Hey, Zhu Yuan! We're not finished with you! Y'know... I know where you are, so don't go hiding!" Torn shouted as Sasha started heading downstairs with her bump rather visible. "God, it looks rather big... Should be due any time now!" Ron said as checks if the baby is still moving inside Sasha. Then Zhu Yuan appears as a spirit from the ceiling. Ron turns into a spirit and heads to the ceiling alongside him. "What did I say about unfinished business...? I just want you done and out! Who cares what my brother thinks!? He's a dumbass, and you know it!" shouted Ron as his blade started evolving after 37 years. The blade was then renamed from Cursed Omega Blade to Emperor's Spirit, resembling that of the old blade, but golden and an improved look. "A new look, a new name... Brilliant! This should bring you down.. As I still have my trap activated! This is no dream... You're going down... NOW!" as he charged at Zhu Yuan and fights alone, as Emperor.

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"ha. old man. we live as long as we want, and our desire is to die in battle. you, however, live 100 years, and you die naturally. bring it on old man!", he shouted, taunting everyone. drawing his sword, it evolved into the 'Past, Present and Future blade, lengthening and sharpening it's blade. he begun to attack Ron mercilessly and struck a blow to his left leg. he then disappeared. "until next time, old man..."

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"Stop! I'm not done!" Ron said as the rest of his family, including Elise Yim, Dan Yim's widow, Harry Gavins, Ron's wounded son-in-law and Torn Richards, Ron's second wife all are liquidised and already set the plot to destory The Beings of The Past HQ. "We're one step ahead already. We have hidden explosives. One of which your HQ is destroyed and 2 of which your temporary one is destroyed... You must sacrifice ONE..." then Ron starts pursuit, chasing after Zhu Yuan. Then, Dan Yim's ghost appears and joins the fray. "Dad, I knew I wouldn't leave you behind, so here I am!" Dan's ghost said as he chases after Zhu Yuan back to The Beings of The Past HQ, only to discover Kev, who was back in his seat as The Evil Master. "So, Emperor Ron... You choose to fight me, yes? You murdered me in 2035... Now, it's time for me to pay you back!" Kev shouted as Ron responded with something else. "The girl you heard flying... It was Melissa! It was all because of you, her death was revealed to the public LAST YEAR! Have you anything to SAY!?" he responded.

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[i]well i certainly haven't. permission to attack, master?[/i], he said in time-language to Ken, putting his blade away and brandishing his hidden blade secretly, hissing. [i]make your decision wisely, master, as we could get rid of our eternal enemies right here, right now...[/i], he said as Ken drew his sword and threw it just by Ron's head. [i]wise decision, sir. proceeding to attack. i turned one of them also.[/i], he said, further injuring Harry.

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But, the further injuring of Harry caused the HQ to explode in 30 seconds. Kev said "You imbecile! Do you call yourself a slave!?" while everyone else retreats from the HQ. Elise then falls ill, and Sasha, back home starts to suffocate because of pregnancy in December 31st 2048. "Water's broke!" Dan's ghost disappears and Ron quickly takes her to the hospital in his modified Hybrid car. Torn said "Looks like someone made the wrong move..." as The Beings of The Past HQ explodes by a hidden explosive, causing no other Being of The Past to be mentioned other than Zhu Yuan. Torn comes up to Zhu Yuan and said "We have to work together now... Your master's gone, and you're alone, pretty much. It's either working together, or your other HQ's getting destroyed! Pick one!" Meanwhile, in hospital, Harry was called in to look after Sasha, as do Ron, who took her there. 4th January 2049, Sasha finally gives birth to a boy, named Gabriel Gavins. "Excited to become a grandfather for a second time... Such emotion.." Torn, on the other hand, eventually became bored and took her answer as the family and Zhu Yuan having to work together.

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