Nightmare Moon Posted September 4, 2011 Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]Thanks to the combined efforts of Zextra and myself, I made my first successful Xyz monster! ^^ Please enjoy and marvel at its awesome splendor. :3[/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][spoiler="Lugia, Oceanic Emperor (Version 2)"][img]http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/2599/lugialaurenv2.png[/img][/spoiler][/font][/size] [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][spoiler="Lugia, Oceanic Emperor (Version 3)"][img]http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/6624/lugialaurenv3.png[/img][/spoiler][/font][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dementuo Posted September 4, 2011 Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 To be honest, I think that the Battle Destruction effect should only encompass other monsters, similar to Morphtronic Boarden and other such cards. Other than that, the design is nice and simple, a good effect that requires a good amount of effort to bring out, balanced stats, and an overall good design. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bull3tM0nk3y Posted September 4, 2011 Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 V1: Overpowered as hell. V2: Still overpowered but not as much. [center][center]OCG: 10.0/10.0[/center][/center][center][center]Image: 8.2/10.0[/center][/center][center][center]Effect: 6.1/10.0 Originality: 5.1/10.0 Total: 29.4/40.0[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted September 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 [font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][size=3]Thanks for the comments, guys. But my first card won't load for some reason..[/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted September 4, 2011 Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 V1: OPED V2: Oped V2 is better. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted September 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 [size=3][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]Thanks, White Hollow. ^^ And I didn't think Version one scored well with the rest of the members.. T_T[/font][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted September 4, 2011 Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 Maybe making it require 2 Level 8 Monster would further justify V2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted September 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 [font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][size=3]You think so? But then I'd have to readjust the Xyz Summoning Requirements..[/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted September 4, 2011 Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 I think yes its worthing posting a V3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted September 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 [font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][size=3]Thanks for the suggestion, dude. I'll talk to Zextra later on and see what he can do to adjust the Rank. Ok? ^^[/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted September 4, 2011 Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 First of all, I would like to say that all the credit for the card should go to you - all I helped with was the Xyz background Anyway, I think V2 is fine as is. It may be slightly OP'ed, but hey, if a card weren't OP'ed, it wouldn't be used. @ White Hollow - It being a Rank 7 actually balances it out more than if it were a Rank 8, as Level 8 monsters are far easier to summon than Level 7 monsters. Why else would Number 11: Big Eye have a once per turn Change of Heart effect - because of the efforts to summon it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted September 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 [font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][size=3]@Zextra: So, should I get rid of the 3rd version and delete the original card?[/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
officedemon Posted September 4, 2011 Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 A lvl 7 monster + a lvl 7 monster = a lvl 7 monster? and whats up with the crazy high DEF? kinda op lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted September 4, 2011 Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 [quote name='officedemon' timestamp='1315175390' post='5492425'] A lvl 7 monster + a lvl 7 monster = a lvl 7 monster? and whats up with the crazy high DEF? kinda op lol [/quote] Its how you XYZ Summon stupid. And it doesn't equal to a Level. It equals to a rank. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bull3tM0nk3y Posted September 4, 2011 Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 Ah, V3: [center][center]OCG: 10.0/10.0[/center][/center][center][center]Image: 8.6/10.0[/center][/center][center][center]Effect: 7.1/10.0 Originality: 4.1/10.0 Total: 30.0/40.0[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted September 4, 2011 Report Share Posted September 4, 2011 [quote name='ハネクリボー' timestamp='1315173250' post='5492362'][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][size=3]@Zextra: So, should I get rid of the 3rd version and delete the original card?[/size][/font][/quote] You should probably delete the original, but you can keep V2 and V3 up to see what opinions others may have. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted September 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 [font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][size=3]@Zextra: Good point, dude. Thanks. ^^[/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
officedemon Posted September 5, 2011 Report Share Posted September 5, 2011 [quote name='✪✪✪~Star~✪✪✪' timestamp='1315175671' post='5492433'] Its how you XYZ Summon stupid. And it doesn't equal to a Level. It equals to a rank. [/quote] oh i see, didn't know how the XYZ works. still the v2 5500 DEF was way to high. 2700 is much better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted November 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2012 [size=3][font=arial, helvetica, sans-serif]Bump!! ^^[/font][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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