Thar Posted September 9, 2011 Report Share Posted September 9, 2011 New card. Played around with the contrast to make it look better with the Promo foil effect that MSE had to offer. [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][i][b][size=6]~~~~~~~~~~[/size][/b][/i][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][img]http://i.imgur.com/qwxd7.jpg[/img] [/center][/center] [center][center] [center][center][b]When this card is [color=#0000FF]Summoned[/color]: [color=#0000FF]Tribute[/color] a monster you control and skip your next Battle Phase. No Spell or Trap Cards can be activated this turn as long as you or your opponent control 2 or more monsters. During your End Phase: You can banish a card from your Graveyard; return this card to its owner's hand and destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. Your opponent then skips his/her next Battle Phase.[/b] [/center][/center] [center][center][color=#0000FF][i]:: EDIT! ~Syns~ ::[/i][/color][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [/center][/center] [center][center][i][b][size=6]~~~~~~~~~~[/size][/b][/i] [b][i][color=#ff0000]"If I die, tell mother I love her, and if she's not there, then I'll tell her myself." [/color][/i][/b][size=2][color=#000000]~'No Country for Old Men' quote.[/color][/size] [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Chaos Zero- Posted September 9, 2011 Report Share Posted September 9, 2011 i like it pictures ok and i dont think there are any ocg errors 9.2 /10 ZERO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 9, 2011 Report Share Posted September 9, 2011 "[i][b]During your End Phase, by Banishing a card from your Graveyard: Return this card to its owner's hand and destroy target Monster card your opponent controls. Your opponent then skips his or her next Battle Phase."[/b][/i] You should say either destroy a monster your opponent controls OR force him to skip his next battle phase, don't do both Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marco Polo Posted September 9, 2011 Report Share Posted September 9, 2011 [i][b]When this card is put into play: Sacrifice a Monster card you control and skip your next Battle Phase. No Spell or Trap cards can be activated this turn as long as you or your opponent control 2 or more Monster cards. During your End Phase, by Banishing a card from your Graveyard: Return this card to its owner's hand and destroy target Monster card your opponent controls. Your opponent then skips his or her next Battle Phase.[/b][/i] [i][b]When this card is Summoned, Tribute 1 monster you control and skip your next Battle Phase. During your End Phase, if there are less than 2 monsters on the field; by banishing 1 card from your Graveyard: Return this card to it's owner's hand; Target and destroy 1 monster you opponent controls. Your opponent skips their next Battle Phase.[/b][/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted September 9, 2011 Report Share Posted September 9, 2011 actually, newest OCG When this card is Summoned: Tribute a monster you control and skip your next Battle Phase. No Spell or Trap Cards can be activated this turn as long as you or your opponent control 2 or more monsters. During your End Phase: You can banish a card from your Graveyard; return this card to its owner's hand and destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. Your opponent then skips his/her next Battle Phase. [font="tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif"][color="#5a5a5a"]The good things that it can do both destroy and skip battle phase. But IMO make it only 1 choice like what rags said[/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted September 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 9, 2011 [quote name='Marco Polo' timestamp='1315571981' post='5502176'] [i][b]When this card is Summoned, [color=#0000ff]Tribute[/color] 1 monster you control and skip your next Battle Phase. During your End Phase, if there are less than 2 monsters on the field[color=#ff0000];[/color] by [color=#ff0000]b[/color]anishing 1 card from your Graveyard: Return this card to it[color=#ff0000]'[/color]s owner's hand[color=#ff0000];[/color] [color=#0000ff]Target and destroy[/color] 1 monster [color=#ff0000]you[/color] opponent controls. Your opponent skips their next Battle Phase.[/b][/i] [/quote] [color=#ff0000]Red = OCG errors.[/color] [color=#0000ff]Blue = OCG maybes.[/color] [color=#000000]I know for a fact that colons are used after prices to follow through to the effect in some cases, not semicolons. Some other small things I noticed are: the word "it's" is not possessive with an apostrophe. The apostrophe only makes it a contraction rather than a possessive so that it doesn't get confused. Also, "[i]Target[/i] and destroy 1 monster [i]you[/i] opponent controls" should be just "destroy 1 monster [i]your[/i] opponent controls."[/color] [quote name='Syns' timestamp='1315577106' post='5502249'] actually, newest OCG When this card is Summoned: Tribute a monster you control and skip your next Battle Phase. No Spell or Trap Cards can be activated this turn as long as you or your opponent control 2 or more monsters. During your End Phase: You can banish a card from your Graveyard; return this card to its owner's hand and destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. Your opponent then skips his/her next Battle Phase. [font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][color=#5a5a5a]The good things that it can do both destroy and skip battle phase. But IMO [/color][color=#ff0000][i][b]make it only 1 choice like what rags said[/b][/i][/color][/font] [/quote] [color="#000000"]Seemed to me that the drawbacks made it look underpowered. Just thought I'd neutralize the concept a little. Thanks for the advice, though. Both of you.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marco Polo Posted September 9, 2011 Report Share Posted September 9, 2011 [quote name='Blud' timestamp='1315577515' post='5502261'] [color=#ff0000]Red = OCG errors.[/color] [color=#0000ff]Blue = OCG maybes.[/color] [/quote] Lolno. Tribute is capitalized. Banishing is not capitalized. you® is obviously a typo. Hell, you wrote even wrote "sacrifice", wasn't it like only used 5 years ago? There's also a difference between just destroying something rather than targeting it and then destroying it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted September 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 9, 2011 [quote name='Blud' timestamp='1315531403' post='5501438'] New card. Played around with the contrast to make it look better with the Promo foil effect that MSE had to offer. [center][center][i][b][size=6]~~~~~~~~~~[/size][/b][/i][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][img]http://i.imgur.com/qwxd7.jpg[/img] [/center][/center] [center][center][b]When this card is [color=#0000ff]Summoned[/color]: [color=#0000ff]Tribute[/color] a monster you control and skip your next Battle Phase. No Spell or Trap Cards can be activated this turn as long as you or your opponent control 2 or more monsters. During your End Phase: You can banish a card from your Graveyard; return this card to its owner's hand and destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. Your opponent then skips his/her next Battle Phase.[/b][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][color=#0000ff][i]:: EDIT! ~Syns~ ::[/i][/color][/center][/center] [center][center][i][b][size=6]~~~~~~~~~~[/size][/b][/i] [b][i][color=#ff0000]"If I die, tell mother I love her, and if she's not there, then I'll tell her myself." [/color][/i][/b][size=2][color=#000000]~'No Country for Old Men' quote.[/color][/size] [/quote] [/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marco Polo Posted September 9, 2011 Report Share Posted September 9, 2011 Oh god forbids.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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