GENERATION III Posted September 12, 2011 Report Share Posted September 12, 2011 my king of all cards: [img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/8539/485198.jpg[/img] you have no idea what it takes to get this guy out on the field! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pimp_7 Posted September 12, 2011 Report Share Posted September 12, 2011 Nice pic...but where is the spell to ritual summon it? Also, you would have to change the text, including the condition to ritual summon it. And the effect is boring...a lot of cards have the same effect. What is really nice, is to make cards that are different from the cards that already exists... Otherwise, there is no point of making them...anyone would use. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobbyman46 Posted September 13, 2011 Report Share Posted September 13, 2011 The pics overused, there is no ritual spell card to summon it... and its a little OP'd. Make it like 3500 ATK or something smaller. Or make it so that it cant attack directly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GENERATION III Posted September 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 13, 2011 you both make good points. im still new to this, and im trying. here are cards to show you why my card is the way it is. its very difficult to summon. [img]http://img638.imageshack.us/img638/8539/485198.jpg[/img] [img]http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/8539/485198.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted September 13, 2011 Report Share Posted September 13, 2011 [center][center]In that case, he is underpowered. Would rather obtain 5 pieces of Exodia then 5 monsters, the ritual, and the Arcane Champion...[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyop Posted September 13, 2011 Report Share Posted September 13, 2011 Its kinda hard to summon it... and just a note to the ocg, you can write [b]piercing damage[/b] instead of the difference blabal... I think Its effect is too simple, but keep going, we're here to help you \o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GENERATION III Posted September 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 13, 2011 @banishark. well i thought being any more than 500 ATK higher than Obelisk or B.E. Ultimate would be OP, maybe i could juice up his ability but make it indirect or something. @touya. 1)nice quote/avatar combo, and 2) thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 13, 2011 Report Share Posted September 13, 2011 well that ritual spell makes it REALLY hard to get out onto the field burn effect is also too much, so drop the base atk to 4000 or less Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted September 13, 2011 Report Share Posted September 13, 2011 [quote name='Touya' timestamp='1315878667' post='5511261'] Its kinda hard to summon it... and just a note to the ocg, you can write [b]piercing damage[/b] instead of the difference blabal... I think Its effect is too simple, but keep going, we're here to help you \o [/quote] Its different IMo, i think what he mean its the different in ATK and DEF. Example, if the destroyed monster is Zombie Master. it is inflict cz the atk/def of Zombie Master is 1800/0.. But dunno, Card is Uped. maybe only 2 certain sacrifice needed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NumberCruncher Posted September 13, 2011 Report Share Posted September 13, 2011 Why can't your Ritual Spell work like a regular Ritual Spell. If you wanted to make a Fusion monster, make a Fusion monster. If you want to make a Ritual monster, make a Ritual monster. You can't have it both ways on 1 card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pimp_7 Posted September 13, 2011 Report Share Posted September 13, 2011 OMG. This card is so dificulty to summon, that you could just write on it: when you summon this monster you win the game. I believe that using exodia would be easier than this card. So I advice you to change change everything, and start from zero... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GENERATION III Posted September 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2011 which i am. im working on some written cards right now. i have drawings. what it is is a deck based off of a series im writing. theres a good deck and an evil deck. its based majorly on the elements. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pimp_7 Posted September 14, 2011 Report Share Posted September 14, 2011 [quote name='GENERATION III' timestamp='1315964749' post='5513406'] which i am. im working on some written cards right now. i have drawings. what it is is a deck based off of a series im writing. theres a good deck and an evil deck. its based majorly on the elements. [/quote] So show us when you finish man =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GENERATION III Posted September 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2011 heres the fixed version of what i as going for. i dont have the ritual monster yet, but im getting there. [img]http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/8539/485198.jpg[/img] [img]http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/8539/485198.jpg[/img] [img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/8539/485198.jpg[/img] the trial cards are actually based off the plagues of egypt with a little twist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GENERATION III Posted September 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2011 i have the ritual monster i posted it on a new topic [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/262925-galanidus-the-celestial-champion-ritual-and-equip-cards/"]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/262925-galanidus-the-celestial-champion-ritual-and-equip-cards/[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 14, 2011 Report Share Posted September 14, 2011 why not put the ritual here, generation III? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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