Zharrk Posted October 2, 2011 Report Share Posted October 2, 2011 [center]| [color=#0000FF][b]Zharrk[/b][/color] | [color=#0000FF][b]The Astral Deck[/b][/color] | [color=#0000ff][b]Power of the Cosmos[/b][/color] |[/center] Hey guys. I've decided to try continue with this Work In Progress after quite a few months. The Astral Deck was a project that I never got to finish, and whilst I was (and still am) quite a n00b at Yu-Gi-Oh, I've taken the very few comments about the Deck into consideration and have decided to restructure almost all of it entirely. It's now based around the use of Counters and the 'Nebula' Monster Cards to ressurect fallen 'Astral' Monsters, as well as retrieve any used Spell or Trap Cards from the Graveyard; even if they have to be sent there first to get them. :3 It'll be easier to see for yourself once I've made more cards. I now present you with the new and improved 'Astral Deck'. It's still, however, a huge Work In Progress due to how hard it is to find pictures about Space these days. :3 [color=#0000ff][b]Notice:[/b][/color] I own none of the pictures you see here. Credit to Google Images and DeviantArt; thanks to all the amazing artists who created these pictures. Also, feel free to [b][color=#0000ff]comment[/color][/b] on my:[list] [*][color=#0000ff][b]OCG[/b][/color] - Grammar is (kinda) important to me, as well as spelling; it wouldn't hurt to make these cards more realistic. I've been in the dark ages for too long... Didn't even know what a banished card was 'til recently. Herp. Derp. [*][color=#0000ff][b]Effects[/b][/color] - Balanced? Overpowered? Downright st00pid? Please, let me know. q_q [*][color=#0000ff][b]Anything Else[/b][/color] - I honestly can't think of anything off of the top of my head. But feedback is appreciated! :3 [/list] [center][color=#0000ff][spoiler=Monster Cards (7/18)][/color][/center] [center][img]http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/6944/493734m.jpg[/img][/center] [center][size=3][color=#0000ff][b]Effect:[/b][/color] When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 'Ethereal Golem LV5' from your hand or Deck to your field.[/size][/center] [center][img]http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/318/493734.jpg[/img][/center] [center][size=3][color=#0000ff][b]Effect:[/b] [/color]This card cannot be Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned with the effect of 'Ethereal Golem LV3'. Once per turn, you can halve this card's ATK Points and attack your opponent directly. If this card is destroyed and sent from the field to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 'Ethereal Golem LV7' from your hand or Deck to your field.[/size][/center] [center][img]http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/318/493734.jpg[/img][/center] [center][size=3][color=#0000ff][b]Effect: [/b][/color]This card cannot be Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned with the effect of 'Ethereal Golem LV5'. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 monster with 'Astral' in its name on your field to deal damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to half the destroyed monster's ATK. If you use this effect, you cannot declare an attack this turn.[/size][/center] [center][img]http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/318/493734.jpg[/img][/center] [center] [size=3][color=#0000ff][b]Effect:[/b] [/color]This card's name is treated as 'Astral Nebula' whilst it is on the field or in the Graveyard. Once per turn, you may put one 'Astral Counter' on this card (max 5 counters). You can tribute this card to Special Summon one Monster with 'Astral' in its name from your Hand or Deck with the same Level as the number of 'Astral Counters' on this card.[/size][/center] [center][img]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/318/493734.jpg[/img][/center] [center][size=3][color=#0000ff][b]Effect: [/b][/color]Each time a Monster with 'Astral' in its name is sent to your Graveyard, place one 'Astral Counter' on this card (max 5 counters). When this card has five 'Astral Counter's' on it, Special Summon 1 'Astral Dragon' from your Hand, Deck or Graveyard, ignoring the Summoning conditions.[/size][/center] [center][img]http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/318/493734.jpg[/img][/center] [center][color=#0000ff][size=3][b]Effect:[/b] [/size][/color][size=3]When this card is Special Summoned to the field, place it in the player's Spell and Trap Card Zone as a Continuous Trap Card with this effect: Once per turn, you may put one 'Astral Counter'on this card (max 2 counters). You can banish this card to return Spell and Trap Cards from your Graveyard to your hand equal to the number of 'Astral Counters' that were on this card.[/size][/center] [center][img]http://img811.imageshack.us/img811/318/493734.jpg[/img][/center] [center][size=3][color=#0000ff][b]Lore:[/b][/color] [/size][size=3]A forgotten warrior from an alternate dimension. He was deemed obsolete in the advanced future, and was sent to the past to stop himself, and many other failures, from ever being created. [/spoiler][/size][/center] [center][color=#0000ff][spoiler=Extra Deck (2/2)][/color][/center] [center][img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/4143/493734i.jpg[/img][/center] [center][size=3]'[color=#0000ff][b]Astral Memory[/b][/color]' + 1 or more non-Tuner Monsters [color=#0000ff][b]Effect[/b][/color][/size][size=3][color=#0000FF][b]:[/b][/color] If there is another card on your field with 'Astral' in its name when this card is Summoned, inflict 1000 Points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. This card gains 200 ATK Points for every Monster in your Graveyard with 'Astral' in its name. When this card card is changed to DEF Position, send the top card of your Deck to the Graveyard.[/size][/center] [center][img]http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/318/493734.jpg[/img][/center] [center][size=3]'[b][color=#0000ff]Ethereal Golem LV3[/color][/b]' or '[color=#0000ff][b]Ethereal Golem LV5[/b][/color]' + 1 or more non-Tuner Monsters [color=#0000ff][b]Effect:[/b][/color] This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card was Special Summoned by the effect of 'Astral Hand' or 'Astral Space', this card gains 500 ATK and DEF points. Once per turn, you can draw a card. If the card drawn is a Monster with 'Astral' in its name, Special Summon it to your field. If not, return it to the bottom of your Deck.[/size][size=3] [/spoiler][/size][/center] [center][color=#0000ff][spoiler=Spell Cards (6/11)][/color][/center] [center][img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/7959/493734e.jpg[/img][/center] [center][color=#0000ff][size=3][b]Effect: [/b][/size][/color][size=3]Once per turn, place one 'Astral Counter' on all of your face-up Monsters, and this card (max of 8 counters). During either player's turn, you may remove up to 8 'Astral Counters' from this card to Special Summon one monster from your Graveyard with a Level equal to the number of 'Astral Counters' removed from this card. If you use this effect, destroy this card at the End Phase of the turn the Monster was Summoned[/size][size=3]. [/size][/center] [center][img]http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/318/493734.jpg[/img][/center] [center][size=3][color=#0000ff][b]Effect:[/b] [/color]Pay 500 Life Points. Draw 5 cards from your Deck. If any of those cards are Monsters that have 'Astral' in their names, send them to the Graveyard. Then, send the remaining cards drawn by this effect to the bottom of your Deck.[/size][/center] [center][img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/7959/493734e.jpg[/img][/center] [center][size=3][color=#0000ff][b]Effect:[/b][/color] If you have 2 or more monsters on your field with 'Astral' in their names, you can add 1 'A.S.T Nebula' or 'Astral Nebula' from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand. [/size][/center] [center][img]http://img806.imageshack.us/img806/7048/493734g.jpg[/img][/center] [center][size=3][color=#0000ff][b]Effect: [/b][/color]Increase the ATK of all face-up Monsters on your field by 300 for each Monster on your field with 'Astral' in its name. When a Monster on your field gains 1200 ATK by this effect, return one 'Astral Nebula' or 'A.S.T Nebula' that has been banished or sent to the Graveyard to your hand. Then, return this card to the bottom of your Deck.[/size][size=2][size=3] [/size][/size][/center] [center][img]http://img803.imageshack.us/img803/318/493734.jpg[/img][/center] [center][size=3][color=#0000ff][b]Effect:[/b][/color] [/size][size=3]This card can only be activated if 'Galactic Formation' and 'Galactic Demise' are in your Graveyard. If this card were to be destroyed, banish either 'Galactic Formation' or 'Galactic Demise' instead. Once per turn, place an 'Astral Counter' on this card (max 1 counter). Once per turn, you may remove 1 'Astral Counter' from this card to return one card with either 'Astral' or 'Galactic' in its name that has either been banished or sent to the Graveyard to your hand.[/size][/center] [center][img]http://img546.imageshack.us/img546/766/493734l.jpg[/img][/center] [center][size=3][color=#0000ff][b]Effect:[/b][/color] Send the top two cards from your Deck to the Graveyard. Then, draw one card. If the card drawn is a Monster with 'Astral' in its name, destroy one Monster on your opponent's side of the field, and send the card drawn to your Graveyard. [/spoiler][/size][/center] [center][color=#0000ff][spoiler=Trap Cards (5/9)][/color][/center] [center][img]http://img638.imageshack.us/img638/318/493734.jpg[/img][/center] [center][size=3][color=#0000ff][b]Effect:[/b] [/color]Activate this card when a Monster on your field with 'Astral' in its name is being selected as an attack target. Destroy the attacking monster and inflict 500 Points of damage to your opponent's Life Points.[/size][/center] [center][img]http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/318/493734.jpg[/img][/center] [center][size=3][color=#0000ff][b]Effect:[/b][/color] Activate this card when a face-up Monster you control with 'Astral' in its name is being selected as an attack target. Negate the attack and Special Summon one Monster from your Deck or Graveyard with the same name as the attacked Monster.[/size][/center] [center][img]http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/318/493734.jpg[/img][/center] [center][size=3][color=#0000ff][b]Effect:[/b] [/color]Increase or decrease the Level of one monster on your field with 'Astral' in its name by 1 until the End Phase. This effect can only be used once during your turn.[/size][/center] [center][img]http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/318/493734.jpg[/img][/center] [center][size=3][color=#0000ff][b]Effect:[/b][/color] Activate this card when a Monster on your field with 'Astral' in its name is sent from your field to the Graveyard, by battle or a card effect. Destroy one Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls, and draw a card. [/size][/center] [center][img]http://img546.imageshack.us/img546/318/493734.jpg[/img][/center] [center][size=3][color=#0000ff][b]Effect:[/b] [/color]This card can only be activated when a Monster Card with 'Nebula' in its name is either Banished or sent from your field to the Graveyard. Pay 500 Life Points to return the card to your hand, and place one 'Astral Counter' on any face-up Monster or Spell Card you control. [/spoiler][/size][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted October 3, 2011 Report Share Posted October 3, 2011 u r gonna get soooooo much Hates and Type is fake BS......i recommend to get a real type or u are gonna get oh type is fake its not even worth commenting and Type is fake... it sucks BS stuff.... so make it Astral (monster name) and the effects to /"Astral" Monster blah blah blah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 3, 2011 Report Share Posted October 3, 2011 lv7 is meh, it's not to hard to pull off the burn, but the damage doesn't seen enough Wrath of Cosmos is UPed for eye for an eye effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zharrk Posted October 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2011 @Jack~[b]' [/b]Thanks for the words... I guess. But yeah, I'm leaving them as they are. o_O; I guess I should just add I made up a new type of Monster... whatever the correct term is. o3o @ragnarok1945 Oh and thanks for that, I'll change them as is necessary. o3o Do you have any suggestions as to the ATK and DEF points of the Monster? As for the trap, I'll consider removing its Counter Tag and just make it a Normal Trap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 4, 2011 Report Share Posted October 4, 2011 you mean for the lv7 monster? 2700/2400 stats are just fine for it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zharrk Posted October 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2011 Oh coolio. o3o I'll keep 'em the same then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted October 4, 2011 Report Share Posted October 4, 2011 anyways its ur cards sooo..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zharrk Posted October 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2011 Thanks for the feedback either way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zharrk Posted January 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 Bumping this thread up a bit, after how many months. Feel free to check out the new and improved (hopefully, at least) Astral Deck. Don't forget to give me any criticism as to what you guys think, it'll probably make the Deck better. [color=#0000ff][b]Edit:[/b][/color] Added a few new monsters including '[b][color=#0000ff]Astral Dragon[/color][/b]', '[color=#0000ff][b]Astral Hand[/b][/color]' and '[color=#0000ff][b]Astral Nebula[/b][/color]'; and also changed a few card effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 for the new cards, mind putting a NEW next to them so we know which ones you added? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zharrk Posted January 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2012 Sure thing. :3 I should probably say though, all of the cards thus far have been re-vamped; so I guess they're all kinda new. [color=#0000ff][b]Edit:[/b][/color] Added one new Spell and one new Trap Card: '[b][color=#0000ff]Galactic Formation[/color][/b]' and '[color=#0000ff][b]Galactic Demise[/b][/color]'. Also changed '[color=#0000ff][b]Astral Nebula's[/b][/color]' effect to make more sense. [color=#0000ff][b]Another Edit:[/b][/color] Added another Spell Card: '[b][color=#0000ff]Galactic Core[/color][/b]', and changed '[b][color=#0000ff]Hope on the Horizon's[/color][/b]' picture after I saw that two of my Spell Cards had the same picture. Derp. [b][color=#0000ff]Another Other Edit: [/color][/b]Finally added a Normal Monster to this deck; a Tuner no less. :3 Say hello to '[color=#0000ff][b]Galactic Memory[/b][/color]'. Also changed the required Tuner Monsters of '[b][color=#0000ff]Astral Dragon[/color][/b]' to make it a little easier to summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zharrk Posted January 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2012 Bumping this up again; don't want to seem like I'm spamming or anything. Apologies. :S Please, feel free to comment! D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 9, 2012 Report Share Posted January 9, 2012 well Astral Dragon seems like it's the only one that's a bit weak a mere 500 atk/def gain doesn't seem enough still, that's only one synchro, when can we see another? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zharrk Posted January 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2012 Yeah, I'm trying to find a decent picture for my other Synchro Monster. Can't find one at the moment, but I'll keep looking and post an 'Edit' on this post when I can. [color=#0000ff][b]Edit:[/b][/color] Changed the lore of '[b][color=#0000ff]Galactic Memory[/color][/b]'. Also, added my second Synchro Monster: '[color=#0000ff][b]Galactic Warrior[/b][/color]'. And added a new Spell Card: '[b][color=#0000ff]Astral Fissure[/color][/b]'. [color=#0000ff][b]Another Edit:[/b][/color] I also decided that the use of '[b][color=#0000ff]Galactic[/color][/b]' Monsters wouldn't be a good idea as it would stir up too much confusion, so I'm changing '[color=#0000ff][b]Galactic Memory[/b][/color]' and '[color=#0000ff][b]Galactic Warrior[/b][/color]' to '[b][color=#0000ff]Astral Memory[/color][/b]' and '[color=#0000ff][b]Astral Warrior[/b][/color]'. [color=#0000ff][b]Another Other Edit:[/b][/color] Changed a few card effects to make more sense, or to try and slightly balance out the effects. A few of these cards include: '[color=#0000ff][b]Reflective Moon[/b][/color]', '[color=#0000ff][b]Astral Warrior[/b][/color]', '[color=#0000ff][b]Galactic Core[/b][/color]' and '[color=#0000ff][b]Astral Dragon[/b][/color]'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 10, 2012 Report Share Posted January 10, 2012 Astral Warrior is weak. 1800 atk is low for its level, and the 200 atk gain I'm just unsure how well it'll reach there the 1000 burn part is good though it's a shame it doesn't have any effects to keep burning your opponent after that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zharrk Posted January 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2012 o: I wanted to make it low for the 200 Increase, providing a lot of Astral Monsters were in the Graveyard. But I guess I can make a card that will help with the 'burn'. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 11, 2012 Report Share Posted January 11, 2012 it's your call, if you change it let us know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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