God_Of_Thunder Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 [img]http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/4481/520148.jpg[/img]This is my very first card. I hope you guys like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ross DeLong Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 I can see where you're going with it, but it might be a bit too over-powered. But then again, what are the odds of the opponent getting a Lvl 7 Spellcaster on the field in the first place? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 OCG needs work. Majorly OPed. And Harry Potter pic? Rly? Change it so you cannot summon from your opponents grave, only 1 monster, and either make it a lower-level monster, or it goes away sometime. And you should probably get rid of the last effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Jazz Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 I think it is pretty strong, and being able to summon any level 7 spellcasters (Arcanite Magician, Dark Magician, etc.) or lower (many) from almost ANYWHERE (including your opponent's cards!) is very strong. In addition it destroy an opponent's attacker. AND you can steal from your opponent's hand. Just... wow. I also don't really understand why it's called "Wizard Army" if the picture only shows 2 people. Also, the text should be worded differently, like so: Activate only when your opponent declares an attack with a Spellcaster-Type monster; destroy that monster. You can then Special Summon up to 2 level 7 or lower Spellcaster-Type monsters from either player's hand, Deck, or Graveyard. You can skip your next 2 Draw Phases to add this card to your hand from your Graveyard. I know it's your first card, and it is a reasonable attempt at a good card. I do like the general idea, it just needs a bit of work. Maybe lower the amount of good effects or add a couple of downsides. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cold Assassin Posted November 25, 2011 Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 Pop culture? I mean I saw the HP pic and im like "What the F*** is this? Let me read the comments......... yeah its pop culture" Correct me if Im wrong, please. -CA Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted November 25, 2011 Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 [quote name='Cold Assassin' timestamp='1322196123' post='5664112'] "What the F*** is this? Let me read the comments......... yeah its pop culture" Correct me if Im wrong, please. [/quote] Its not Pop Culture. Just because he used a picture from Harry Potter doesn't mean its FROM Harry Potter. And who cares, this is Any other Cards. But yeah. The effect is good but: 1. Change it to Special Summon 1 Level 5 or lower Spellcaster Monster from your hand. 2. Add a drawback effect. 3. The Summon from the hand,deck, and Graveyard IS ALREADY a special summon. 4. The draw effect is unneeded and should be removed :/ But I do like the card effect. 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God_Of_Thunder Posted November 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2011 [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/4481/520148.jpg[/img] I used your guys' advice and remade the card. I hope you like this better! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Jazz Posted November 26, 2011 Report Share Posted November 26, 2011 [quote name='God_Of_Thunder' timestamp='1322341021' post='5667580'] [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/4481/520148.jpg[/img] I used your guys' advice and remade the card. I hope you like this better! [/quote]Good perseverance (I thought you weren't going to come back) The OCG is STILL not quite right though (but that's my fault a little, I gave you OCG before that was slightly incorrect, sorry) Activate only when your opponent declares an attack with a Spellcaster-Type monster: Destroy it. You can then Special Summon up to 2 level 5 or lower Spellcaster-Type monsters from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard. But I STILL think it's a tad strong. Maybe try having the effect only affect level 4 or lowers. Good try though, it's certainly coming along. P.S. Try looking for different pictures. Photobucket always has what I'm looking for. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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