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Made this using YuGiCo because my images won't show here. Stereotypical name I know... <_< The background couldn't be helped.
Anyway give constructive criticism please. Here's the card: (P.S. Ignore the effect written on the card because the YuGiCo font went wrong.
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[spoiler=Card Lore]Cannot be Normal Summoned or set. Can only be Special Summoned by banishing all cards in your graveyard (min. 10) including at least 3 FIRE Type monsters. Once per turn, when your opponent activates a card effect to destroy this card; you can target and return 1 of your banished cards of the same type (Spell, Trap or Monster) to the Graveyard: Negate the effect and destroy the card. When this card battles a monster with a higher original ATK than this card, destroy this card without damage calculation and inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent for every card in your Graveyard.[/spoiler]

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OCG fIX:
Cannot be [b]N[/b]ormal [b]S[/b]ummoned or set. Can only be [b]S[/b]pecial [b]S[/b]ummoned by banishing all cards in your Graveyard (min.8 )[b].[/b] Once per turn, when your opponent activates a card [b]effect to destroy this card;[/b] [i]you can [b]target and return[/b] [b]1[/b] of your banished cards of the same type (Spell, Trap or Monster)[/i] to your Graveyard[b]:[/b] [b]N[/b]egate the effect and destroy the card[b].[/b]

Not too sure on the ones I put in italic. I also space the 8 with the last parenthesis because I got that same symbol thing you did :P.

Seems okay... 8 cards is a bit much though... no one would actually do that unless they are playing Cosmos or something... ya might want to reduce the number down to 1 or 2. It has the same effect as Shi En... but it includes monsters... Its kewl... nothing too bad goin on here...
unless someone else thinks so lol

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[quote name='♠Toot♠' timestamp='1322853513' post='5680832']
OCG fIX:
Cannot be [b]N[/b]ormal [b]S[/b]ummoned or set. Can only be [b]S[/b]pecial [b]S[/b]ummoned by banishing all cards in your Graveyard (min.8 )[b].[/b] Once per turn, when your opponent activates a card [b]effect to destroy this card;[/b] [i]you can [b]target and return[/b] [b]1[/b] of your banished cards of the same type (Spell, Trap or Monster)[/i] to your Graveyard[b]:[/b] [b]N[/b]egate the effect and destroy the card[b].[/b]

Not too sure on the ones I put in italic. I also space the 8 with the last parenthesis because I got that same symbol thing you did :P.

Seems okay... 8 cards is a bit much though... no one would actually do that unless they are playing Cosmos or something... ya might want to reduce the number down to 1 or 2. It has the same effect as Shi En... but it includes monsters... Its kewl... nothing too bad goin on here...
unless someone else thinks so lol
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Thanks for the fix.
I did it at 8 cards minimum so that it wouldn't be too easy to summon fast.

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[quote name='TheGreatEnguin' timestamp='1322860472' post='5681080']
Thanks for the fix.
I did it at 8 cards minimum so that it wouldn't be too easy to summon fast.
[/quote]Why not make it so it has to send certain types of monsters? beast and dragond types for example :P

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well 8 cards in the graveyard isn't really hard, it's not like you said anything SPECIFIC for the cards or anything

doesn't really do much on the field other than prevent your opponent from forcing it off though

to that end it's a bit boring, kind of hoped it'd do more

almost reminds me a little bit of Arcana Joker Knight's effect, I'm sure you can see what I'm getting at

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[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1322862949' post='5681177']
well 8 cards in the graveyard isn't really hard, it's not like you said anything SPECIFIC for the cards or anything

doesn't really do much on the field other than prevent your opponent from forcing it off though

to that end it's a bit boring, kind of hoped it'd do more

almost reminds me a little bit of Arcana Joker Knight's effect, I'm sure you can see what I'm getting at
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Yeah it's similair to Arcana Knight I might add another effect and edit the current one soon

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[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1322936809' post='5683233']
well even 10 cards and 3 FIRE monsters isn't really hard, but it's certainly more specific so that helps

burn effect is quite good, I'm unsure if it's a bit too much though, guess it depends
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Well since it does clear your Graveyard when it's summoned I think the burn is fine.

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