TheKaitoKid Posted December 20, 2011 Report Share Posted December 20, 2011 This is my first realistic archetype. It's called the Royal Family. They're a set of monsters who support each other is some pretty cool ways. Their main gimmick is that they weaken the opponent's monster, at the end of the Damage Step. Whether or not they die, Royal Family monsters weaken the monsters they battle by 100 x their level. Tell me what you think. [img]http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/6834/485606u.jpg[/img] Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned from the hand while there are at least 5 different "Royal Family" monsters in your Graveyard and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. A monster that battles this monster loses 900 ATK after Damage Calculation. Once per turn: You can target 1 "Royal Family" monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon that target. Its effects are negated. [img]http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/858/485606.jpg[/img] Add 1 Level 4 or lower "Royal Family" monster from your Deck to your hand. You can banish this card from your Graveyard: Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Royal Family" monster from your Graveyard; Then send 2 "Royal Family" monsters from your hand to the Graveyard. [img]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/6834/485606u.jpg[/img] Activate while you control at least 2 "Royal Family" monsters with the same Level. Target 1 "Royal Family" monster you control. Increase the ATK of all "Royal Family" monsters you control with the same Level as the targetted monster by 400. [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/9872/485606o.jpg[/img] A monster that battles this monster loses 400 ATK after Damage Calculation. When this monster is destroyed by battle: Target 1 Level 4 or lower "Royal Family" monster in your Deck; Special Summon that target. [img]http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/858/485606.jpg[/img] You can Tribute Summon this monster in face-up Attack Poistion by Tributing 1 "Royal Family" monster. A monster that battles this monster loses 800 ATK after Damage Calculation. "Royal Family" monsters you control cannot be destroyed by card effects. [img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/6285/485606h.jpg[/img] A monster that battles this monster loses 600 ATK after Damage Calculation. When this card destroys a monster by battle: Special Summon 1 "Royal Family" monster from your Graveyard; Its effect(s) are negated. [img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/7860/485606d.jpg[/img] A monster that battles this monster loses 300 ATK after Damage Calculation. All ATK & DEF decreases to "Royal Family" monsters you control are negated. If a Spell Card would be activated: Negate the activation and destroy the card. [img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/2281/485606v.jpg[/img] 1 "Royal Family" Tuner + "Winged Equestrian of the Royal Family" A monster that battles this monster loses 600 ATK after Damage Calculation. When a monster would be Special Summoned: You can Tribute 1 "Royal Family" monster you control; Negate the Special Summon and destroy the monster. [img]http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/686/485606t.jpg[/img] While you control "Conan - King of the Royal Family" or "Rayvyn - Queen of the Royal Family": Special Summon this monster from your hand. A monster that battles this monster loses 800 ATK after Damage Calculation. Negate the effects of a monster than battles with this card. [img]http://img545.imageshack.us/img545/3800/485606j.jpg[/img] 1 "Royal Family" Tuner + "Winged Equestrian of the Royal Family" A monster that battles this monster loses 700 ATK after Damage Calculation. When this monster is destroyed by battle: Target 2 Level 4 or lower "Royal Family" monsters; Add the targets to your hand. [img]http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/858/485606.jpg[/img] 2 "Royal Family" Tuners + "Winged Equestrian of the Royal Family" A monster that battles this monster loses 900 ATK after Damage Calculation. This card cannot be destroyed (by battle or card effect) while you control at least 1 or other face-up "Royal Family" card. Once per turn: You can discard 1 "Royal Family" monster; Special Summon 1 monster that was destroyed by battle this turn. [img]http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/4284/485606n.jpg[/img] A monster that battles this monster loses 300 ATK after Damage Calculation. [img]http://i804.photobucket.com/albums/yy330/Quilavas-Master/Nina-1.jpg[/img] "Royal Family" monsters you control cannot be destroyed by battle while attacking. Once per turn: You can Tribute 1 "Royal Family" monster you control; Special Summon 1 "Royal Family" monster from your Deck whose Level is 1 more than the Tributed monster's. [img]http://img542.imageshack.us/img542/3800/485606j.jpg[/img] A monster that battles this monster loses 300 ATK after Damage Calculation. When this card is attacked: You can discard 1 card; Increase the ATK of this monster by 500 until the End Phase. [img]http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/3137/485606e.jpg[/img] "Locki- Keeper of the Royal Family" + 1 non-Tuner "Royal Family" monster A monster that battles this monster loses 600 ATK after Damage Calculation. Once per turn when a Spell or Trap card is activated: Negate the activation and destroy the card. When this monster leaves the field: Target up to 2 cards on the field: Destroy the target(s). [img]http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/1876/485606bj.jpg[/img] A monster that battles this monster loses 200 ATK after Damage Calculation. While you control another "Royal Family" monster with a different name: You can Special Summon this monster from your hand. [img]http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/858/485606.jpg[/img] A monster that battles this monster loses 400 ATK after Damage Calculation. When an opponent's monster activates its effect: Discard 1 card; Negate the activation of that monster's effect and return it to the hand. [img]http://img689.imageshack.us/img689/5708/485606y.jpg[/img] A monster that battles this monster loses 100 ATK after Damage Calculation. While you control another "Royal Family" monster: You can Special Summon this card from your hand. When you control no monsters: You can Special Summon this card from the Graveyard. A monster that battles this monster loses 100 ATK after Damage Calculation. While you control another "Royal Family" monster: You can Special Summon this card from your hand. When you control no monsters: You can Special Summon this card from the Graveyard. [img]http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/9655/485606f.jpg[/img] A monster that battles this monster loses 200 ATK after Damage Calculation. During your Standby Phases: Place 1 Royal Counter on this card. If a "Royal Family" monster you control would be destroyed: Remove 1 Royal Counter from this card instead. [img]http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/858/485606.jpg[/img] 1 "Royal Family" Tuner + "Winged Equestrian of the Royal Family" A monster that battles this monster loses 500 ATK after Damage Calculation. If you control the same number of monsters as your opponent: Your opponent cannot activate Spell & Trap cards. [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/7281/485606rc.jpg[/img] A monster that battles this monster loses 400 ATK after Damage Calculation. Once per turn: Target 1 monster you control and 1 monster your opponent controls; Reduce the ATK of the targets by 500. [img]http://img812.imageshack.us/img812/2281/485606v.jpg[/img] Spell & Trap cards cannot be activated during the Battle Phase. If this card would be destroyed: Destroy 1 "Royal Family" monster you control instead. [img]http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/3137/485606e.jpg[/img] You can Tribute Summon this monster in face-up Attack Poistion by Tributing 1 "Royal Family" monster. A monster that battles this monster loses 700 ATK after Damage Calculation. This monster cannot be destroyed by battle while you control a "Royal Family" monster with a different name. [img]http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/8559/485606a.jpg[/img] A monster that battles this monster loses 100 ATK after Damage Calculation. This monster cannot be selected as an attack target by a DARK monster. When this monster is used for a Synchro Summon: Target 1 monster on the field; Increase the ATK & DEF of that target by 300. [img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/9431/485606z.jpg[/img] A monster that battles this monster loses 200 ATK after Damage Calculation. Once per turn: You can Tribute 1 "Royal Family" monster you control; Special Summon 1 "Royal Family" monster from your hand whose Level is 1 more than the Tributed monster's. [img]http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/5415/485606s.jpg[/img] A monster that battles this monster loses 400 ATK after Damage Calculation. This monster cannot declare an attack. Once per turn you can target 1 monster you control and 1 monster your opponent controls: Banish the targets. When this monster leaves the field: Banish it. [img]http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/285/485606iq.jpg[/img] "Royal Family" monsters you control are not destroyed by battle this turn. Any damage you would recieve from battles involving "Royal Family" monsters you control is reduced to 0. [img]http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/5073/485606fn.jpg[/img] Increase the ATK of all "Royal Family" monsters you control by 100 x their own Level. [img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/1792/485606i.jpg[/img] Add 1 "Royal Family" Spell Card to your hand. It cannot be activated this turn. [img]http://img803.imageshack.us/img803/858/485606.jpg[/img] Equip only to a "Royal Family" monster you control. Increase the ATK of the equipped monster by 100 x its Level. If the equipped monster would be destroyed: Destroy this card instead. [img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/9872/485606o.jpg[/img] 1 "Royal Family" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Royal Family" monsters A monster that battles this monster loses 600 ATK after Damage Calculation. During each of your End Phases: Increase your Life Points by 300 x the number of "Royal Family" monsters you control. [img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/9431/485606z.jpg[/img] 1 "Royal Family" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Royal Family" monsters A monster that battles this monster loses 800 ATK after Damage Calculation. Your opponent cannot target a "Royal Family" monster other than this one as the target for an attack. Once per turn: You can Tribute 1 "Royal Family" monster you control; Increase the DEF of this monster by the Level of the Tributed monster x 100. [img]http://img855.imageshack.us/img855/7880/485606w.jpg[/img] A monster that battles this monster loses 400 ATK after Damage Calculation. While you control another "Royal Family" monster: You can Special Summon this card from your hand. [img]http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/9872/485606o.jpg[/img] 1 "Royal Family" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Royal Family" monsters A monster that battles this monster loses 500 ATK after Damage Calculation. Increase the ATK of all "Royal Family" monsters you control by 200 x the number of "Royal Family" monsters you control. [img]http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/6462/485606g.jpg[/img] A monster that battles this monster loses 400 ATK after Damage Calculation. [img]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/9431/485606z.jpg[/img] While you control 2 or more "Royal Family" monsters: You can Special Summon this monster from your hand. A monster that battles this monster loses 600 ATK after Damage Calculation. Increase the ATK of all "Royal Family" monsters you control by 400. [img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/8559/485606a.jpg[/img] Once per turn you can either: Target 1"Royal Family" monster you control and equip it with this card OR unequip this card to Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster: The equipped monster gains 400 ATK. This card can only be used for the Synchro Summon of a monster that requires "Winged Equestrian of the Royal Family". During your Draw Phase if this card is in your Graveyard: You can shuffle it into the Deck instead of conducting your normal Draw Phase. [img]http://img594.imageshack.us/img594/1127/485606c.jpg[/img] 1 "Royal Family" Tuner + "Winged Equestrian of the Royal Family" A monster that battles this monster loses 800 ATK after Damage Calculation. When this monster battles a Defense Position monster: Inflict piercing Battle Damage. When a monster(s) is destroyed by battle with a "Royal Family" monster you control: Draw 1 card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 20, 2011 Report Share Posted December 20, 2011 for Warhog, not returning to the hand or deck seems meh, your opponent would be sending it to the graveyard anyways for Cierra, the special summoning effect is good, but I would have said that the lv4 or lower monster you're summoning cannot be ANOTHER Cierra for Conan, the immunity of Royal Families to card effects is good, but I wouldn't have included itself, I would have said all OTHER Royal Family cards can't be destroyed by card effects for Locki, I'd raise the atk drain. 200 is virtually nothing in itself Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheKaitoKid Posted December 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1324362900' post='5718618'] for Warhog, not returning to the hand or deck seems meh, your opponent would be sending it to the graveyard anyways for Cierra, the special summoning effect is good, but I would have said that the lv4 or lower monster you're summoning cannot be ANOTHER Cierra for Conan, the immunity of Royal Families to card effects is good, but I wouldn't have included itself, I would have said all OTHER Royal Family cards can't be destroyed by card effects for Locki, I'd raise the atk drain. 200 is virtually nothing in itself [/quote] Yeah, the warhog's effect isn't the greatest but it stops bouncing [there are already so many things to stop destruction but nothing to stop bouncing] Cierra's searching is akin to the Giant Rat's in that it can replicate itself and thin the deck. About Conan I didn't want to nerf him completly and leave him open and exposed. All of the power drains are based on their Levels. Locki isn't really meant to battle. His main purpose is to allow very fast Synchro Summons. More monsters to come. More comments please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 20, 2011 Report Share Posted December 20, 2011 then let us know when you get the updates up, k? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheKaitoKid Posted December 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 Update: Added 1 new monster [Nina - Tactical Genius] and changed all the attributes to LIGHT. Tell me what you think. New monsters coming soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 30, 2011 Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 Nina's effect is meh the 400 atk drop isn't really much neither is the 500 atk one since both you and your opponent's monsters are affected therefore, that one doesn't really do much at all I mean yes the 400 atk drop is permanent, but still Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SummerWind23 Posted December 30, 2011 Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 I liked it. You made me want to make a lot of cards like yours! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teddyboy Masahud Posted December 30, 2011 Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 wow nice cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheKaitoKid Posted January 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1325232857' post='5738439'] Nina's effect is meh the 400 atk drop isn't really much neither is the 500 atk one since both you and your opponent's monsters are affected therefore, that one doesn't really do much at all I mean yes the 400 atk drop is permanent, but still [/quote] Yeah I know the small ATK drop with some monster is nothing at first but it is permanent so it adds up quickly. [quote name='SummerWind23' timestamp='1325249358' post='5738522'] I liked it. You made me want to make a lot of cards like yours! [/quote] Thank you! I can't wait to see yours. [quote name='Teddyboy Masahud' timestamp='1325251542' post='5738536'] wow nice cards! [/quote] Thanks. [b]Update:[/b] I've added some new monsters and changed a few things around, including the OCG. Soon I will be introducing my next archetype that fits with the story of the Royal Family monsters. They're called "The Exiled" monsters and they work very differently as you'll soon see. Comment please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 4, 2012 Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 I see no new monsters, put a NEW next to the ones you added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheKaitoKid Posted January 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1325663206' post='5747571'] I see no new monsters, put a NEW next to the ones you added [/quote] Okay I'll do that next time. For the record the new monsters are [b]Afeni - Goddess, Rita - Summoner, Rika - Pure Hearted Saint, Flint - Rallier, Luna - Mistress, Locki - Empowered Keeper, Mimi - Skyrider, Equestra - Lancer, Zetsu - Archer, Winged Equestrian, Siri - Knight & Kira - Young General.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
burningtramps Posted January 4, 2012 Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 I take it you are a fan of Fire Emblem then? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheKaitoKid Posted January 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 [quote name='burningtramps' timestamp='1325704914' post='5748011'] I take it you are a fan of Fire Emblem then? [/quote] Why yes I am. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 4, 2012 Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 [quote name='TheKaitoKid' timestamp='1325701656' post='5747933'] Okay I'll do that next time. For the record the new monsters are [b]Afeni - Goddess, Rita - Summoner, Rika - Pure Hearted Saint, Flint - Rallier, Luna - Mistress, Locki - Empowered Keeper, Mimi - Skyrider, Equestra - Lancer, Zetsu - Archer, Winged Equestrian, Siri - Knight & Kira - Young General.[/b] [/quote] Afreni: the only part should be the last effect. You said special summoning the Royal Family monster and negating its effects, I think you don't have to negate them permanently Rita Summoner: 200 atk loss is virtually nothing, make it like 500ish Rika Pure Hearted Faint: the 300 atk gain at the end effect is too small, make it higher Flint: effects look fine the way they are Luna Mistress: again, only the 100 atk loss is way too small Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-R. Posted January 5, 2012 Report Share Posted January 5, 2012 The female warriors are really pretty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 5, 2012 Report Share Posted January 5, 2012 this is why I'm hoping for more updates here soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheKaitoKid Posted February 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2012 Update: I Added 4 new monsters: [b][i]Ellie - Spellbreaker, Giselle - Maiden, Lorea - High Priestess, & Stoune - Guard[/i][/b]. To be honest, the set it pretty much finished at this point. Now the rival monsters will be released. They're called "The Exiled". They should be up soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 8, 2012 Report Share Posted February 8, 2012 Ellie Spellbreaker: 300 atk is very little, you should have made that bigger, and the spell negation effect needs to be once per turn, not as many times as you want Giselle looks good though Lorena's monster effect negation needs to be limited to once per turn as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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