Chaos Tournament Chapter 1: The Beginning:Revised

[Bach Pontines]

This is my revised version.


The story starts off with a 16 year old dueler named, Vector Hadu. Vector is a dreamer, dreaming of becoming the world's greatest duelist. His friends tell him it's impossible because he is one of the lowest ranked duelist. Vector still never gave up on his dreams. His father runs a noodle shop, he tells his son to stop playing and help around the shop, but Vector rarely helps, instead going to places to duel. He never won a duel yet. His deck focuses on a video games. His deck is made mostly out of fiends.
"Where is that kid?", said Vector's dad, Rafiel.

"Maybe he's just off playing that silly game again."

.At the local arcade Vector is out playing with a guy. The guy still has 2500 life points left. Vector is in the gutters with 300 life points left.

"It's my turn.", says Vector.

Vector drew his card. In Vector's mind

. "Ha!, I drew another Assasian."

. " I summon another Assasian.”.

Assasian: 1200 ATK and 1300 DEF.

" I also activate my spell card, The World that Never Was!"

. "All Nobody's and Organization XII members gain 400 ATK and 500 DEF."

. "Now my assasian has 1600 ATK.".

"Now Assasian, attack his face down card!"

. Assasian strikes the card

. "I activate my trap card!", says the guy

. "Pure Darkness!", said the guy.

"The attacking monster gets destroyed and the controller of the card loses life points equal to half of the monster's attack points."

"Nooo!", yelled Vector.

Vector dropped to the floor.

"You are a low rank duelist, not capable of winning anybody!".

The guy and everyone else left. .Vector got up.

"I can't believe I lost...".

Vector walked home. He opened the door. His dad was at the noodle shop today. Vector walked up the stairs and went in his room. He dropped on his bed. In Vector's mind again.

"I'll show them.".

Vector took a nap dreaming of becoming a great duelist.

Vector woke up on the floor.

“Uhh, my head.”.

Vector got up.

“ How long have I been asleep?”.

He looked at the lock. Clock:7:15am.

“What!, it’s 7”15am!”.

Vector ran to the closet and took out a clean pair of his uniform. He stripped down to his boxers and put on his uniform. He ran down the stairs and ran to the kitchen.

“How are you Vector?”, said Rafiel.

“Not right now dad!”.

He took a bottle of water and bread. He ran back to the living room and grabbed his backpack.

“Bye dad!”.

He opened the door and ran out. He started to run for his school.

“Hey Vector!”, said Jake Blake.

Jake has been Vector’s friend since childhood.

“Hey Jake.”.

They ran together to school. The school was called Duelist high. They learned all necessary subjects and occasionlly how to duel. They made it to their first period and sat down on their seats. Just a few seconds later the bell rang.

“Attention class!”, said Dread.

“Today we will learn about cancer”.

In Vector’s mind.

“This is going to be a long boring day.”

. After all the periods it was Vector’s last period and his favorite one, dueling.

“Finally it’s my dueling period!”.

Vector took his seat. After the talking part it was time to practice to duel.

“Good luck.”, said Jake.

Vector looked at the tournament board.

He was against a guy named Lerk. Vector took out his duel disk. Lerk took out his.

“Let’s duel!”, they said at the same time.

They were playing at 4000 life points.

“I’ll start things off.”, said Vector.

He drew a card.

“I’ll start things off by summoning Assasian in attack mode!”

. Assasian: 1200 ATK and 1300 DEF.

“I also equip it with Nobody rage!”.

“It now gains 600 attack points!”.

“Now it has 1800 attack points.”.

“I also activate it’s effect, I can special summon another Assasian.”

. “I’ll end things with setting this card face down.”.

“It’s my turn.”, said Lerk

. Lerk drew a card.

“I shall summon Dark Punk in defense mode.”.

Dark Punk:1400 ATK 1600 DEF.

“I’ll finish my turn by putting two cards face down”.

“My turn.”. , said Vector.

He drew another card.

“I summon Dusk.”

. Dusk: 1000 ATK 1000 DEF.

“Assasian attack his Dark Punk!”.

“I activate my face down card, Dark Metal.”, said Lerk.

“ You can’t attack for five turns.”.

“Darn it.”, said Vector.

“I end my turn.”.

“My turn.”, said Lerk.

“I summon Dark Angel Singer in attack mode.”.

Dark Angel Singer: 1800 ATK 1600 DEF.

“I also activate my field spell card Dark Stage.”.

“All monsters with the word Dark in them gain 500 attack points and 200 defense points.”

Dark Punk” 1900 ATK 1800 DEF. Dark Angel Singer:2300 ATK 1800 DEF.

“Dark Punk, attack his Assasian!”.

Assasian gets destroyed. Vector loses100 life points.

“Now Dark Angel singer attack his other Assasian.”

. Vector loses another 1100 life points.

“Uhhh.”, said Vector.

Vector now has 2800 life points.

“I also activate my quick play spell card, Dark Stereo.”.

“When your opponent loses life points, he loses another 600 life points for each monster you control.”.

“Since I control two monsters, you lose 1200 life points!”.

Vector is reduced to 0 life points.

“Nooo!”, yelled Vector.

. Lerk is now the winner!

“You’ll never win a duel you low rank duelist.”.

Lerk walked away. The bell rang and everyone left. Vector grabbed his backpack and started to walk home. In Vector’s mind.

“Why do I always lose?”.

Vector arrived at his home. His dad was at the noodle shop again. He went up to his room and started to do his homework.

“x-b+5=2!”.

“What is this junk!.”.

“This is going to be a long afternoon.”.

Vector finished at 7:15 p.m.

“Okay, now that I am done, I’m going to the local card shop to upgrade my deck.”.

He walked along the way and bumped into someone with a dark long black coat.

“Oh I’m so sorry sir.”, said Vector.

“It’s okay kid.”, said the mysterious stranger.

“Want something?”.

“No thanks.” said Vector.

“Well I’ll give it to you anyway.”

. He gave Vector a mysterious orb.

“Umm thanks.”, but the stranger was already gone.

Vector walked backed to his home and up the stairs to his room.

“Well, this is a strange artifact.”.

Vector held it in his hands.

“This is junk.”.

He threw it to the floor and it cracked. It released a strange white mist.

“What is this!?”.

The mist entered his mouth and swarmed through his body. It devoured everything. The mist disappeared.

“What was that!?”
.
Suddenly Vector felt different. He lost all his emotions, he suddenly became serious.

“It does not matter anymore.”.

He went to sleep hearing strange voices and echoes in his mind.

To be continued.

To be continued.

[bury the year]

[s]Locking conditionally.[/s]

Unlocked.